Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...)

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#501

That was ur awesome come back gift to all of us!!!! Wow...what a bold Naina...she hadn't sat with him on the bike yet but kissed him...she hadn't hugged him on a bike but initiated the kiss with an intense fervor...so hot on a hot afternoon!!! 😳 🤗

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souhasini

@souhasini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#502

Welcome back . Superb update. Kash in serial also Aisa hote tho . 😊

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RedGiant

@RedGiant

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Posted: 7 years ago

#503

Bold Naina is Awesome! Lovely update Thank you So much for this !

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#504

Meri mou forum aai ooh raam ji !!

Yippe

I'm soo happy to see you back ... I hope now you are keeping fine .. Eat healthy and stay healthy

Their is some different kind of sweetness in this particular story of yours which warms my heart every time

The subtleness , the innocence ... Its really endearing

May be because here we are seeing our lovely samaina in school ..and cherishing their young romance happening in school which didn't actually happen ..

Well but we don't need to worry or feel sad when we have writers like you ..

Coming to the update .. One thing came to my mind is ye toh bas shuruwat hai .. Naina is going to give Sameer a very tough time .. While reading your update I remembered Sameer's dialogue from the earlier episode " jtni seedhi saadhi dikhti hai na ..utno hai nahi "

Well surely .. Sameer is actually oblivious to Naina's bold romantic side ..

Sameer saying " tum han bolo bas " ..

This entire conversion is my favorite from the entire story till date .. He can't control anymore .. I can so imagin this in front of my eyes and Naina blushing uff aur kya chahiye mujhe

" bas teen saal aur " I doubt he can wait for 3 long years

Munna teasing them " tum dono ka ho gaya ho toh baat kar le"

And still Sameer not leaving his girl's hand .. Sahi ja raha hai beta !! So Naina has now officially made their relationship in public that too so boldly without any hesitation ..this was the highlight of the entire update ..I'm waiting for the day when she will confront her father and rest of the family like this

Samaina bike sequence ka toh kya bolun !! Sameer ki haalat

I loved it and that applying break was just soo cute and our innocent Naina didn't even know why he did that

And then not able to control any longer he pulled her towards him and they both witnessed the urgency in their kissing for the very first time .. It was so beautifully written .. I'm still not over it . I wonder if raamdhari and their friends were not present their what might would have happened ?? Well let's see vo din bhi door nahi hai !! I trust my samaina

Naina is such a seductress she let her hair open ..poor Sameer was still not over the kiss and here she came to drive him put of his mind again ..loved it

And their little moment while watching the film ..uff it was soo romantic .. I doubt they paid any attention to the film

Naina's Good-by to Sameer was soo bold ..and Sameer discovered this new side of his cute innocent shy Naina

Loved the way you compared Sameer's earlier Delhi visit to this one .. I was soo happy reading it ..specially that food one

And off course the investment one too .. I was like yippe !!

You very cleverly gave us the glimpse of Sameer Jaiprakash Maheshwari ..

And Sameer could not get a better welcome than his Naina in his arms kissing him

This update was best out of all

Take care

As always waiting for the updates

But don't stress yourself about it

Love

Laalchi reader

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Sindhujalincy

@Sindhujalincy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#505

Wow that was just so passionate and romantic gave me goosebumps you're an amazing writer you manage to give your best everytime don't category what happens in the show this is simply amazing gave so much feels 😳

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#506

And I love you Moumita🤗

This was such a feeling good update for me.. I was literally so frustrated n then I got to read this update n two other updates..I was so relaxed😳 but life se humari khushi bardasht kahan hoti h😔

I'm loving this bold naina

Sameer ko welcome gift mil hi gya☺️

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#507

As usual stupendous update!

Bold naina is always a treat to read... Truly love has emboldened her... Loved her boldness in both ways... Firstly holding his hands in a possessive way in front of everyone... The way she claimed him to be hers and she wont tolerate any other girl hitting on him... Kamya ki toh bolti bandh kardi usne... N sameer... So so loved how he proudly said he was in love with her always... He was so proud to claim her as his... They both completes each other.

So it was the last day in school... If it was their last exam, then they must be wearing uniforms right?... The how come naina was wearing pink dress... That thing confused me a little... Sameer was right in planning the evening at his home... Romance karne ke liye isse acchi jagah nahi ho sakti😆

That staircase romance was just wow... It kept me blushing throughout 😳... How magically u writes about their intimacy abd kisses... Bike ride was amazing with Sameer ko current lagaoing😆... Naina poor girl didn't even knew what she was doing to him... Sam teasing her about the bike ride... Telling her how he loves her boldness... Love it. 😉

Sam doesn't shy away from romancing her even when his friends were around... Naughty naina bit his finger😳... Bold and and naughty nains is a deadly combo... Sameer can't resist this naina. 😳

Samaina friends are so understanding.. They gave them privacy and left the room... Sam toh wont even waste a second... Slow kisses have turned into wild ecstasy now... Loving this urge they both had while kissing... They wanted to get the most out of each other... Naina kissing him again waz such a treat... Sameer ke liye best parting gift... Loved the way he said he'll keep dreaming about this bold naina.

So u used harshad mehta scam here for somanis... Liked it... Sam has Nanu's ways kf dealing with business... Thats much better than somani's ways... Somani and daadi are so prejudiced about sameer... Glad that they got what they deserved... Sam still offering them help was such a nice gesture.. It was the result of Nanu's upbringing. 😊

Sameer though wanted the welcome gift from her, he never thought she'll actually manage to fulfill his demand... The girl has topper brains... She managed to reach his house and even send everyone away to get some alone time with him... That was great... Sam is again bowled by her..😉

Now that school life has ended, hoping to read about their college life... Can't wait for the next update... Excited about the next phase of their lives. 😃

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#508

It was all passion and romace and everything else that i can't say in words!

You write such amazing passionate moments yaar, i mean u describe them so perfectly, with the perfect setting,not only for the romace but for the way u play with the words taking us into the story and letting us feel their presence in real.

Hatts off for your imagination. And for the very beautiful setting you build up for those passionate moments as well.

Especially thank you for the bike ride. Was waiting for it eagerly during the episode, though they couldn't give us that. You have!!

Very well written, covering all the emotions, u managed to give us such an amazing update.