Sameer-Naina FF : The Runaway Marriage (Upd: Part 4| Pg 20| 24 April)

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

I was waiting for an update for long for this!! N it totally lived upto my expectations!! Fantabulous, stupendous...it's my fav one till now! Firstly amazing concept...agar sach me Sameer Naina ko bhaga le jata toh...n of course side characters ke bina ye mumkin nai tha...another very realistic thing u added in the story is the fact that Sameer is till very young...he tends to be immature at times...feels scared at times...yet the love he has for Naina is so tremendous that he surpasses everything...just for the sake of Naina's happiness n to put an end to her sufferings, he decides to marry her soon...nai to aaj ki date mein guys feel they are not prepared for marriage even when they are 30...of course everyone is entitled for their opinion, but I'm a strong proponent of the fact that if you love someone, there are no ifs n buts attached...prepared or not, you will marry them coz the most imp thing is that you want to spend ur life with them.

Now coming to the update...I loved everything about it...Naina n Sameer ke emotions, the planning, the sunset memories, the preponement of the wedding, Naina in Nani's sari for the wedding...the shaadi, the mangalsutra scene was epic...once he removed his hands from his neck, Naina became his...she belonged to him...could this have been more beautiful? Nope!

And then Mundit ka Sameer ko prep karna n supply dena for the 1st night...I was hoping you would write tht n u did...I can do see Mundit doing the same for show ka Sameer...he's so deeply in love with Naina wo sochega abhi nai abhi nai...n Mundit wd hv to egg him on...Naina in sari on.humma humma...Sameer dancing with ppl in bg...n then juein sunke Sameer twisted his ankle n fell down was hilarious...Sameer ke armano pe paani fir gaya...Naina yaar ek din pehle manga leti shampoo...u dunno wt u missed out upon lol...n the comparison to Bombay movie too was so on point. Can't wait to see what happens next...I am still in Samaina land...in the plush hotel room with Sameer n Naina minus joo inside...wonderfully written...pls send me a PM on he next update!

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shelly_nair

@shelly_nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Nice update... Last part to lol...🤣 phir se jhue villain ban ke aagaye

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Uff ..I don't have enough words to praise you dear !!

You depicted every emotions so beautifully

The update was very well scripted

I'm seriously in aww of your writing skills

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Ooh fantastic update ... Naina kitni bholi h yaar ... Usey sameer k baalon ki kitni chinta h 😆 aise toh sameer usey kabhi kuch nhi samjha payega ... Hope ur next part shows us some bold side of naina

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Too good...nicely written ...loved it !! loved it !! loved it !!...pls update the next part soon...eagerly waiting

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

It was such a fantastic update

All their feelings and emotions were beautifully penned... I loved the way you portrayed arjun here... A loving brother who thinks about his sister's happiness always.

Preeti and swati having tough time handling taiji.. Loved this duo and their friendship is so mind blowing .. Poor chachiji was genuinely concerned.

Mundit always there for their bhai and... Loved how they understood naina's feelings during the varmala and tried to ease her... The best friends anyone could get.

Mundit advice to sameer😆... And sameer already in dreamland... Bechara toh ainvayi khayali pulao bana raha tha😆.. Naina toh naina hai... Her asking him to buy mediker shampoo and sameer's reaction on this was hilarious 🤣

Pls update soon dear

Will be waiting

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

The first half of d update was like tension tension tension!!

Chacha chachi were tensed for Naina, Taiji tensed for khandan ki izzat, Preeti n Swati tensed in guilt but also happy for Naina..they're love!!

N I'm tensed about Arjun..don't know what he's gonna do when he'll come to know ki Naina ne bhag k shaadi krli

Second half was hilarious

MunDit made me ROFL!! Jisko saj dhajke uchalna chahiye wo to Bermuda mein bhag gya🤣

They reminded him of protection!! Ye sab friends ko hi yaad rehta h..Sameer was so embarrassed n shy☺️ hahaha

But then, his dreams hv been crushed!! Juen sahi mein sabse badi villain nikli

Update ASAP

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

That was one hell of an update, thanks for updating! Had been looking forward to it!

I cracked up at the part where sameer's dancing in his dreams thinking that naina too is interested in being intimate while she is hinting at something completely innocent. His expression and that fall in his dream when he realised what naina actually wanted him to buy from the medical store was hilarious! Seems like his Naina is yet to learn about the tricks of the trades!

The support in the form of the friends Swati munna and pundit in this runaway marriage was a clincher for me. If Swati provided the perfect cover for naina to elope, pundit giving them refuge was super sweet and Munna with that effervescent enthusiasm is always refreshing. Such friends are hard to get! The ally in preeti is always adorable.

Thanks for the beautiful update!

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#89

It was a pleasure reading such a long update..
Loved how understanding Sameer was to Naina's uncomfortable-ness in the early parts of the morning.
Finally they are Mr & Mrs Maheshwari, however I do feel bad that Chacha, Chachi and Preeti were not present at Naina's wedding. For me they are the most important people in Naina's life...
Cant wait for the next update, where you will hopefully take Sameer out of his misery and let Naina allow him close... 😉