F.R.I.E.N.D.S TS Part 3 B Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Omg...hw did I miss reading this yest???

So d whole matured gang in Ahmedabad...this is going to b fun!!!
Loved the way u brought baba into picture!!!
Munna is going to finally propose Swati ...Kya baat hai!!!
One request for pandit plz get Preeti...show me mile Na mile...atleast ff, ss me to mile preedit!!!!


Wonderful start to the story dear...whd wait for further parts!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Omg...hw did I miss reading this yest???

So d whole matured gang in Ahmedabad...this is going to b fun!!!
Loved the way u brought baba into picture!!!
Munna is going to finally propose Swati ...Kya baat hai!!!
One request for pandit plz get Preeti...show me mile Na mile...atleast ff, ss me to mile preedit!!!!


Wonderful start to the story dear...whd wait for further parts!!!



Yeah thank you... I just thought we could use Baba aka Sameer here. The love-guru concept episode striked me while penning.
Edited by Manasi90 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: moumita04

Thank you for the update dear... It's wonderful to read... 👍🏼

Excited to read how the friends would meet again and what surprises are in store for us... please update soon and make it longer...!! 😳

One Suggestion - Whenever you update can you please mention in the title that part 1 and so on is updated on page #... That would help us know that you have added another part...
Since this is such an active forum, it's difficult to find all posts.

Also please send the link to the Un Dino Ki Kahaniya index thread... It's on the first page. That way people can find your story easily.

Looking forward to read your next update soon! 😊


Yes yes thank you. Actually when i updated this part I was travelling in local train. So couldn't change the title part. I will surely update next time and I have sent the link in index.
Thank you for support.
Edited by Manasi90 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Nice update

So finally gang is in Ahmedabad..it's gonna be fun
I'll miss MunDit so much

Update ASAP


I think the city, the town Ahmedabad is equally imp to our YUDKBH and lot is depended on it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Beautiful part dear 👏👏 thoda lamba hota to maja aata😳 plz send me a PM next time you update.



Minuuu... Thanks. Yes next part would last and long one. Surely send u PM while updating.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Wow what a start .. you have penned with such delightness that I'm totally impressed with it .. such an amazing concept and like the way you started it with munna and him doing a job in different city and going to meet the lovely couple pandit and ofcourse rishta for Swati
Lol I hope Pandit sang Preeti hai yahan par :') ..
Like the way Naina met munna and then munna ka kitchen ke Saath Purana rishta :')
So Naina is invited in pvkm as chief guest ..

Looking forward to read more .. do PM me please
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Thank u all for suggestions and love. Thanks to YUDKBH for being so relative to our lives.


Last Part I.



Flashback:


After Nanaji's death, Sameer being in Delhi, Naina after her boards took up Arts and decided to apply to Delhi colleges. Being ranker, she was selected and thus shifted to Delhi for further studies. With Sameer's father reference Munna and Pandit got opportunity to join the same college. Munna, Pandit and Sameer chose commerce.

Thus once again started Sameer and Naina's love-story. Sameer had made decision to return to Ahmedabad and handle Nanu's business.

In their graduation year, Sameer decided to tell his mother his future plans and Vishakha who had already known the fact welcomed this decision of him marrying Naina and settling down in Ahmedabad. She also promised him that she will personally go to Naina's house and ask her hand in marriage as papa would have done the same.

Naina being originally a topper and scholar wanted to pursue PhD in English after graduation. Sameer knew and wanted her to take time for deciding but she knew where her way was. Soon after graduation, Mr and Mrs. Somani visited Agarwals for Naina and Sameer's marriage. Chachaji knew as Naina had already told him and welcomed their proposal. Taiji just couldn't take in that a boy like Sameer wanted to marry Naina. She kept making nuisances. But everyone else was so much happy for Naina. Being a girl with good academics and aesthetics Naina had grown to be a good human being and a beautiful one too. Chacha and Chachji did every ritual of their wedding except "kanyadan. Chachaji insisted Rakesh bhaisahab to do it as it is considered the highest level of "punya which a father receives. Rakesh Agarwal cried like a child that day 1st time after his wives demise. Naina had truly made him proud.

The first place visited by Maheshwari couple was Mt. Abu. Everyone in their close net knew what Mt. Abu meant to them. Then they visited Dwarka which was Sameer's decision as they had laid Nanu's ashes there. He considered going there for getting Ashirwad from Nanu for their future.

After coming back, they got news of Munna being offered a job in Mumbai and celebrated it. Sameer made arrangements for him to stay in Mumbai through his sources. Munna knew he needed to prove himself to ask Swati's hand in marriage.

Pandit's father had his business of sweets and farsan across Gujarat. Now being old, he wanted Pandit to take over the business and spread it more. Pandit too being a foodie decided to accept father's advice and joined family business. Nobody knew that time that Pandit's "halwai " business would grow leaps and bounds in upcoming years. Pandit still was a bachelor and didn't want to rush into relationships.



Present Day


Munna recollected the past and decided to make this PVKM celebration double for Baba and Naina. But this time he had many things on his mind. He decided to talk to Bhabi about Swati and him. He knew Swati liked him but never was sure that she would be ready for marrying him.


'Munna Kya hua? Nashta kab se thanda ho raha hai?

" Naina, sunno na. Iss baar mein Swati se rishte ke baare mein puchne wala hun. Puchu na? He asked tentatively. He had immense faith in Naina.

" Munna, ye baat to maine aur Sameer ne tumse last trip mein bhi kahi thi. Ab aur late mat karo. Uske ghar mein ladke dekhna chalu hai. Waise tumhe kis baat ki tension hai?

" Dekh Naina, tujhe to pata hai mere bapu kaise hain. Mera aur unka 36 ka aakda hai. Main 1 bolto hun to wo 3 bolte hain. Agar mein koi decision leke gaya aur unhone bavaal kar diya toh bichari Swati fass jayegi bichme. Aur mein aisa kabhi hone nahi dena chahta

" Par Munna, aunty to ready hain na. Tu tension mat le, hum chalenge tere saath Swati k ghar par. Phir dekh koi tension nahi hogi. Naina assured him.

Munna felt revealed. He knew his friends would be always there for him.

Suddenly, he was grabbed from behind. Pandit who had come back, saw Munna and happily hopped on his back like a monkey.

"Chenu, sale kab aaya? Mujhe bataya bhi nahi aanewala hai. Kal hi to baat hui thi tujhse."Pandit said.

Today's Pandit was handsome young man who had outgrown his business and now he catered destination weddings and big parties but still had kept his father's 1st shop running in purani galli of Ahmedabad. He considered it his father's blessing. Pandit had lost his father after taking over the family business in next year itself. Maheshwari's and Preeti Agarwal had helped him and Pandit family immensely during that time. Thus Pandit had developed a soft corner for Preeti again. They sometimes met for coffee or to grab a quick lunch these days. As Pandit was in Delhi attending a client's wedding this time, they had not met over a month and Pandit missed her. Thus he had gone out to grab a coffee with Preeti. Little did they both knew, that this time Sameer had seen them together.


Part II would be last and will be update soon...


Lemme know ur suggestions.

Edited by Manasi90 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Hey y last one I was expecting a long story...u write wonderfully!!

Btw nice update...nw waiting for the function vat PVKM and Sam re-entry!!

Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Awesome update Mansi! Please continue and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was a beautiful update Manasi.. 👍🏼
Next time I want long part.. Update soon..
Thanks for the PM
Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago

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