Fan Fiction - Naina in College

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi,
I really like YUDKBH. When I first saw the show, Naina reminded me so much of a character in my story to the point that Naina and Meher (the name of character in my book) became one. I just had to write a bit of Fan Fiction for Naina. Except Naina is now in College and it is her first day. This is where she going to meet Preeti, Shefali and Swati. And her quintessential love story with Sameer . Phulla Bua is there too except she is younger and has a Roll Royce 😉. Hope you like it. It is my first attempt at Fan Fiction. Hope not breaking any forum rules. Thank you.

Naina

9:20 am

The road outside SKU College

Bengaluru, India

You kept your vitamins?' The lady in a sPhulla fluorescent green and golden border Sari asked the girl sitting next to her

Yes Phulla Bua! Recently turned seventeen Naina adjusted her glasses on her fair round face.

And your Horlicks?'

Yes Bua.'

And your-'

"Bua can you drop me off at some distance from the college.'

Why?' Phulla Bua looked like someone had slapped her. I took out the Rolls just to drop you to college.'

Because of your Rolls only I don't want you to drop me off there. Too much attention. "Its just that it might be too crowded so I thought.' Naina shrugged.

Phulla Bua smiled. And you packed all your romance novels?'

Naina nodded quickly. The silver suitcase is full of them.'

Did you. . . did you speak with your Rakesh.'

Naina inhaled deeply. She had promised herself that she would not cry on the first day of college. No point. Papa will only say hurtful things.

Naina was born to a middle class family and an autocratic father and meek mother. Theirs wasn't a love match but a convenient barter.

Naina Beta!' Phulla Bua gently touched Naina's forehead. "No sad thoughts, you are frowning bache.'

Naina clasped her Bua's hand and touched it to her forehead. Thank you Bua. I owe you my life. If you hadn't come for me when you did I don't know what would have happened to me.'

Phulla Bua pulled her in an embrace. Women should always support other women. Always help other girls.' Naina nodded as she sat back trying to compose her face that revealed her thoughts quicker than a trashy tabloid revealed celebrity secrets.

"And you such a sweet girl. You will make an excellent orthodontic surgeon.'

Naina inhaled her Bua's lavender smelling perfume. Orthopedic surgeon Bua.'

Dono different hain?'

Naina chuckled. Yes one if tooth and is the other foot.'

Oh look, look. SKU!' Phulla Bua pointed ahead of them.

Naina stomach tightened and she felt goose bumps on her skin.

Promise me child you will never stop writing though.' Her Bua asked even as she dabbed her eyes.

The world is not ready for the kind of stories I like to write, yet. Naina nodded. As long as you promise to read them.'

Always! So tell me what are you most excited about?' Phulla Bua asked.

Meeting new people and hopefully making some friends. Even one good friend will do.'

Phulla Bua caressed her niece's head. The kind of person you are, I think you'll make more than one good friend.'

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braveheartdoc thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start dear...please do continue😊
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Nice start .. so first off with phulla bua ..
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It's interesting
I really like this version of phulla bua
Update soon
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Such an awesome start of the story...please update soon😊
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A good start... Update soon
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Interesting start dear...please do continue😊


Thank you for the very encouraging words 😊 Am thinking of how to take it forward
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Nice start .. so first off with phulla bua ..


Thank you for the very encouraging words 😊 Phulla Bua seems an interesting character to have around Naina and Sameer
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

It's interesting

I really like this version of phulla bua
Update soon


Thank you for the very encouraging words 😊 Yes dear am thinking of how to take it forward
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: reema1991

Such an awesome start of the story...please update soon😊


Thank you so much for the very encouraging words 😊 Will start penning another one soon..

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