//Valentine's Week:Samaina OS FESTIVAL 2018// - Page 41

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Anmol superb start for promise day OS..

U created a very good suspense.. I actually thought that the girl was Naina..

The FB was very nice..

Their promises were😳

I thought Sameer was no more😆

Thanks for not killing him😆😉

I always liked your stories..

Quite different.

Reliving memories and fulfilling promises is just so wow..

Hi, Zulu@!

What a perfect time we go we just post at the same time. Great!!

Let's come on your OS.

Such, Lovely and beautiful OS you wrote. Sameer's vows were so beautifully written.

Loved the conversation between Nena and Preeti.

One more thing I also love to see marriages in night, Raat main shadi ka maza hi kuch or hota hey.

Originally posted by: Ranbirrocks

@Tellme - Very well done 👏. In first attempt of writing , you have written such a well crafted story.

@Zulu- Give me time to read your Hug day story. It looks colorful and great👍🏼

Originally posted by: KashafZaroon30

@Sana (tell me): Superb OS...First time mein hi chauka maar diya...

Yaar aap sab log Mandir sequences itne achhe se kaise likhte ho...kudos

Loved it...big hug to you for this🤗

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Wow tell me...your first attempt was really very nice..

I enjoyed reading it...

The hug day was very well depicted...

Originally posted by: IThinkALot

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@tellme welcome to the world of story writing. Hope you had a grt experience like I'd reading your os. 😃 As love to Naina is a very pavitra nirdosh feeling so she couldn't have hugged Sameer casually. It had be that way when she was overwhelmed with his love and gestures and watched him going away. From their separation to their reunion everything has been put in writing very well. 👏

Keep writing dear!

Originally posted by: angelic567

Too good sana... A different story ❤️

Originally posted by: EndlessHope

@Sana (tellme)... beautiful story. I enjoyed the emotional ride a lot. Great job despite your first attempt.

@Zulu, absolutely fantastic...the seven vows were very touching and the way you wove it was fantastic. Thanks for a wonderful piece.

Originally posted by: crzsadiya

@tellme very beautiful os. loved it. get job..
keep writing os,ffs ..this one was beautiful