Sameer- Naina TS: The Plans Went Wrong(PART-2 Updated)

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: msdfan
I am big fan of your writing MINU...
I love your OS, SS nd FF.. 👏

Thank you dear for such appreciation 😃 Even I am fan of MSD..😃

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: lakku19

Ohh.. the story has ended.. 😭😭
Then please start writing new one..
U really have great talent..
I love reading all ur stories.

Thanks dear for loving my works so much.😃 Would write some more when I get enough time.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sujz
I wanted this story to Continue!!!!😳
Enjoyed it!!! ☺️

Write some more stories!

Thank you dear Nanhi Pari for loving it.😃 Glad you enjoyed reading it.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Ohhh no 😭😭 pls write some more

Will write some more. Cheer up dear.😃

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Preeti's nautanki as usual bang on...her acts are so hilarious and so smart at at the same time... she never fails to judge whats going on between them...you hinted slightly on Preedit👏😃
mehendi on the neck was a very different idea...loved it...wished you continued the story further...loved to read it a lot... Sameer coming close to her was so romantic...loved it entirely😃

Sorry for being late dear...i was writing the story for valentine week😉😛

Thanks for the pm dear😊

Thank you dear for replying late and complete writing your piece.😃 I personally relate to Preeti more than Naina.Be it her sassy nature or that bhukkad attitude. And completely relate with her nautankibaazi.😆 And was seriously missing Preedit.So when there have been some tiny-winy scenes on screen,why not give them some space in our story too.😉 Glad you loved the entire thing.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Ranbirrocks
Oh Minu, why aren't you in the CV team of show 👏
I enjoyed it so much !! Can' wait for your V day story now

Thank you Di for such a huge compliment 😃 Feeling humbled at the appreciation.😳

Glad you enjoyed reading this.Hoping that the VDay story could come up to match your expectations.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: durgeshwari
Love the hotness quotient...

Thank you dear 😃

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Anmol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

It was beautiful part 👏

Preeti Ko sach pata chal hi gaya... Episode ka yaad aagaya tha mujhe toh 😆

Pandit Ko dekh ke chakkar aagaya Preeti ko, acha hua Sameer sahi time pe aa gaya..

Ye dono Umar dene me bhi lad rahe 😆

That Naina's room was literally hot, no intimate scene will be that much hot.

Sameer is naughty as hell 😳

This story can't end like this, I want next chapter.

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KashafZaroon30

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Minu kya tha yeh...I'm in complete Samaina land...Preeti knows it finally...just like the episode...

Aise kaatilana TS likhogi toh humara kya hoga😳...Now I'm all excited for your OS in the V-week...❤️😛

DIL LE LO...

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

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Waah Minu...what a writeup!! Kudos to you! It is the perfect mix of masoom nirdosh dosti, pyaar...n then the fiery side of love...ik aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai...waah...

I just loved Preeti's teasing...gale lagne ki jagah Naina ki hai after that slap...matlab she punished him n respect him too...n Sameer ne Preeti ko pakada to prevent her fall...but there was no fire, no flicker there...it was Naina's touch that made him lose his senses n she hers...jijaji main yahan hu...kabse hosh me hu...aap dono hi behosh ho gaye...too good...the lines were incredibly good!!

And that hot passionate moment...hubba hubba hubba...that is Sameer for us...I always feel there's a side of him which would love to see Naina flustered n lost in his love...when he came near to her...he loves to see her lose control when he towers over her...the innocent version of it was his "toh" in the serial...he might not even touch her but he knows the power he has over her...n that makes his resolve in love strengthen...wowowww!! It comforts him to see she's also madly in love with him...n in.the end usne agla rang laal laga hi diya...pyaar ka lal rang...Sameer ka naam haath pe...makes perfect sense...could've read more parts on this eagerly haha...loved it to bits!!

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