Sameer- Naina TS: The Plans Went Wrong(PART-2 Updated) - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Wow Minu,
Where were you hiding this story? I accidentally stumbled upon this last night.

I loved it. Now I am eagerly waiting for more. 👏

I love how you have pictured Sameer. His possessiveness is yummy. Both the well scene and the mehendi scene was so passionate.

His need to make sure no one looks at his Naina in a wrong way and they way he controlled his anger to large extent was super. And the 'S' on her hand...wow...

What I loved the most was:

1) Sameer making Naina wear his shirt. And Naina too took it without hesitation. It was so natural between them that Sameer would give his shirt and Naina would wear it without any second thought.

2) The way Sameer corners her and spreads some mehendi on her neck. It was sexy.

Please write the next part soon. 😃

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Gr8 ...it was mindblowing!

Thanks dear.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

First of all sorry for being late Minu.. was busy with mocks
Coming to the update, that was simply beautiful Minu 😳
Last bit was so romantic
Mehendi on the neck hayeee 😳 was blushing so much
Finally Preeti got to know abt Samaina
Thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of this OS 👍🏼
Cant wait for your V-day OS now

Thanks Ani for the love and appreciation 😃 Glad you enjoyed it .😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Wow Minu,

Where were you hiding this story? I accidentally stumbled upon this last night.

I loved it. Now I am eagerly waiting for more. 👏

I love how you have pictured Sameer. His possessiveness is yummy. Both the well scene and the mehendi scene was so passionate.

His need to make sure no one looks at his Naina in a wrong way and they way he controlled his anger to large extent was super. And the 'S' on her hand...wow...

What I loved the most was:

1) Sameer making Naina wear his shirt. And Naina too took it without hesitation. It was so natural between them that Sameer would give his shirt and Naina would wear it without any second thought.

2) The way Sameer corners her and spreads some mehendi on her neck. It was sexy.

Please write the next part soon. 😃

Love
Kshithi

Hi kshiti! Kya karen? Segments ke baadh mein kahin kho gayi thi.😆
Glad you loved it so much.I literally love it when boys become protective.😳 Seen my bros and friends..They are love when turned into Angry Young Man for their girls.
Your analysis of the two points brings me a huge smile.Thank you for going through it.Means a lot to me.😳

With love-
MInu

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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
NiCe updates
Please update it or pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hahaa..😆 Itna padhne ke baad yehi khayal aya..😉😆


Of course... Agar aise plans Wrong jaane lage to life mein kuch wrong nhi jayega ;)

Lekin aapka ishaara mil gya g... in terms of writing, this was so beautifully and realistically put.. that i couldnt help wishing that i was in the situation with Mr One-and-truly 😉❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Both parts were written very beautifully!!!! I loved them a lot. Why did it have to end? Please please please write more. I want to read what happens after that in your version. The confession in your version and Naina forgiving him and the whole romantic shaadi scenes will be a lot more romantic in your version than the show. So would love it if you extended this to a few more parts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonakshi02

NiCe updates

Please update it or pm me

Thanks Sonakshi 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katrax

Awesome

Am loving this
Beautifully written

Thanks dear for the appreciation.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Both parts were written very beautifully!!!! I loved them a lot. Why did it have to end? Please please please write more. I want to read what happens after that in your version. The confession in your version and Naina forgiving him and the whole romantic shaadi scenes will be a lot more romantic in your version than the show. So would love it if you extended this to a few more parts.

Hi Kiran! Thanks for loving this TS so much.😃 About your request..writing few more updates for this story is not on mind now.Would write if some idea novel from the show strikes.Thanks for giving it a read.

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