Sameer-naina FF: Ek tarfa Updated (Part 2)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys.
I am a huge fan of this show and among many other reasons one major reason is this has quite a resemblance with my own ''samaina'' story. So today I decided to share this story with you all that I had written on the initial days of this show but never really got the guts to share it here as i was not that regular.😳 😕But today here it is and i really hope you guys will like it.😊
P.S this is a bit inspired by my own story😳

Ek Tarfa


She sighed and looked at him sitting with his popular friends, or were they actually his friends? Naina always felt that for him being in 'that'' group was very important even though he did not feel comfortable with those people but still he had to be in that group. He was not a spoiled brat neither he was the 'bad'' guy indeed he was the guy with the good grades and manners but then again he was rude at times. A very handsome tall boy with the smile that naina used to die for. No he was not the most charming one, indeed naina's friends never understood why she had such a huge crush on him. Even Naina also sometimes couldn't figure out why she liked Sameer so much, despite the fact that he was so rude to her, never really noticed her, was more attracted towards artificial but popular people, she still liked him.

Naina was quite a shy girl and under-confident. She always felt that no matter what she did or said people will always make fun of her and in one way this was true. She never left a stone unturned to embarrass herself, on top of that she was an average student. A chubby tall girl with frizzy curly hair always tied up in a ponytail and wearing big black spectacles. The 15 year old felt that she did not possess a single trait that would attract him towards her and thus she decided that no matter what she will never let Sameer know that she had such a huge crush on him.

It was there Annual picnic and naina had worn her best dress and combed her hair really well. All her friends were praising her but her best friend, Swati intentionally took her infront of Sameer and started to say out loud 'Wow Naina, you look so pretty, bilkul Katrina Kaif''. Sameer and his friends heard and they came near her. Her heartbeat stopped. Sameer looked at swati and said
'Are you blind?? She and Katrina Kaif??' and he burst out in to laughter 'Even her mom looks younger than her, your mom is so pretty God knows how did you turn out so ugly''. And all his friends burst out in to laugher. Naina did not utter a single word and just ran away from there and she kept running until she reached a place far from that spot. She screamed loudly and she cried uncontrollably. After that day she never wore that dress again.

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braveheartdoc thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey I wonder how come no-one commented here till now?😲
I really loved your short and sweet OS... really such scenarios are quite common and average looking girls are always made to suffers from an inferiority complex

Such is the mindset of general population where everything gets related to your beauty 😔

I loved the way you tried to bring it out👏⭐️

Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG! Kudos to you for bringing such a concept.👏 Yes! I do agree with your point that you intended to make.Many people and I mean when I say 'many' just compare girls with film heroines..And we can't do much about that.They just forget that a real girl doesn't possess a zero size figure or supple waist or those manicured hands,mascara applied eyelashes or exotic,expensive blushes and curled hair locks..a real girl has a messy curl,body parts as influenced by hormones,genes,medical conditions,sedentary life style and a lot more factors...A real girl is imperfect,flawed yet REAL.😃
Beautiful work dear.Keep coming with more.😳




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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was a very nice start to a very promising story. Please do continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Hey I wonder how come no-one commented here till now?😲

I really loved your short and sweet OS... really such scenarios are quite common and average looking girls are always made to suffers from an inferiority complex

Such is the mindset of general population where everything gets related to your beauty 😔

I loved the way you tried to bring it out👏⭐️

Thanks dear😊



hey thanks alot
but its not an OS there is another part to this story😛

Somettimes I just feel that this society is not the place for ''average'' people ...be it average student,girl,boy,income whatever! its not that they are not capable its the people who make them feel like they are total useless
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

OMG! Kudos to you for bringing such a concept.👏 Yes! I do agree with your point that you intended to make.Many people and I mean when I say 'many' just compare girls with film heroines..And we can't do much about that.They just forget that a real girl doesn't possess a zero size figure or supple waist or those manicured hands,mascara applied eyelashes or exotic,expensive blushes and curled hair locks..a real girl has a messy curl,body parts as influenced by hormones,genes,medical conditions,sedentary life style and a lot more factors...A real girl is imperfect,flawed yet REAL.😃

Beautiful work dear.Keep coming with more.😳






bold: this line just touched my heart
this is so true yet we forget ourselves and start running after all those heroines only cause people said that we are not good enough
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What attracted me to this story was d title..Ek Tarfa!!
I always fail to understand y ppl r sooo obsessed with beauty..outer beauty
Nobody gives a damn to inner beauty n all r after chaar din ki chandni

Update soon
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

What attracted me to this story was d title..Ek Tarfa!!

I always fail to understand y ppl r sooo obsessed with beauty..outer beauty
Nobody gives a damn to inner beauty n all r after chaar din ki chandni

Update soon



Thanks a lot

yes tonight I will update it😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part~~~~2


2 years had passed, naina and Sameer were now 17years old. For this two years Naina was successful in keeping her 'crush'' a secret from him but she was unsuccessful in getting over him. Every time she thought she would forget him every time she failed. There was different innocence in him that attracted her, he was rude like any other teenage boy but he was not spoiled or arrogant neither he was a bully like others. He seemed to like by people around him even at times naina's friends used to say that he was not a bad guy.
There were some small incidents that used to make her day. Like one day, the teacher made Sameer sit beside Naina and they talked for the entire class. Sameer seemed to be so comfortable with her and the entire time he blabbered naina just started at him.

'kash Sameer ek bar tumse keh pati ki kitna chahti hu tumhe, pichle 2 saal o se, ek hi ladke ki bare mein soch ti hoon aur woh tum ho...kash tumhare zindagi ka hissa main hoti''

She looked at his hand which was an inch far from hers, how badly she wanted to touch it but she resisted and looked at him who was now mimicking this friend of his and everyone around him was laughing. Sameer suddenly looked at naina and said
'Ab dekho naina kaise baat kari hain' and then he mimicked her with funny noises. Naina laughed really hard. This was so weird that Sameer was the boy who made her cry and then he was the one who made her laugh all unintentionally.
Despite the fact that Sameer and she were not really 'friends'' and he never really left any chance to joke around her or tease her about something, she sometimes felt that maybe maybe he liked her. She sometimes caught him staring at her, always being near her and the one thing that really hit her was when he showed concern about her. When she cried he tried to make her laugh. One day just before the exam was going to start, Naina was going through her chemistry book for the very last time when she felt a brush against her arm, she looked sideways and found him standing next to her and looking very closely at her book. He was so close that she could smell his bodyspray and till today she has not forgotten that smell. She was starting to gather the courage to go and tell him in the hope that maybe he liked her too

But all her hopes shattered into pieces when her friends told her that Sameer's friends are trying to hook him up with Riya, the new girl in school.
'Tu usse saab bata de'' said swati
'Bata du?? Phir? Phir kya hoga? Sameer riya ko chorke mujhe date karega?? Tunei Riya ko dekha hai? Aur muje dikha hai?' she smirked 'Sameer haasei ga mujhpe swati...main usei kuch nahi bolungi''

And soon Sameer started dating her.
Oh! What a pretty girl she was. She was a short fair girl with a tiny waist and excellent academic results. At first, naina used to dislike her but later on she realized Riya was not a bad human being.
'Its not her fault that Sameer fell in love with her'' said Swati and naina understood but 'dil ko kaun samjhaye''


Later that day she saw him feeding Riya she closed her eyes and looked away. But she was happy for him because Riya was a nice girl and Sameer was proud of her. Naina felt Sameer would never have been proud of her, if she was his girlfriend.
'Why would he? Kya hai mujhme??'' naina asked herself standing in front of the mirror, she looked at her frizzy hair, her dark circles, her fats, she looked at the report card she was holding.
'na akaal hai na shakaal'' the words said by one of Sameer's friends rang in her ears. She closed her ears and kneeled down.
'Nahi main kabhi Sameer ko nahi bolungi ki mere dil mein uske liye kya hai..kabhi nahi varna varna woh mujhse baat karna bhi band kar dege'' she promised herself.
And just like this in silence years passed away. Sameer and naina grew up and started preparing for college. Meanwhile, Sameer had broken up with Riya and he was preparing to move to Australia.
'Acha Mansi Sameer aur Riya ka break up kyun hua tha?'' Naina asked one of Riya's friends
'Arei yaar Sameer bohut possessive tha...Riya ko kisi bhi ladke se baat nahi karne deta tha...ek baar tou haat bhi uthaya tha us paar''
haat bhi uthaya tha uspaar...these words got stuck in her! Haath uthaya tha?? Sameer ne?? She could not believe those words but then again she knew his anger but how could he???

Naina was now in college and Sameer had moved to Australia. Naina started dating Varun, a senior in her college. Varun was one guy who never cared about the fact that Naina was messy or chubby. He proudly introduced her to his friends. He taught her that love does not mean any external beauty if you love someone their imperfections will be perfection for you. She loved being with him and was dating him for 3 years. But still, she could not forget Sameer. She has not seen him for 4years but still she could not get over those memories. She had the most amazing loving boy as her boyfriend yet she craved to see Sameer and still she cried for him.



What do you guys think naina still loves sameer despite of being in a relationship with varun or it is just an infatuation??

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Posted: 7 years ago
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A great story Ramisa...though tbh I'm very possessive about the leads myself n do not want or like them to date anyone else...So I would consider the leads as some other Sameer n Naina...haha sorry...pls do not feel offended...but that set aside...I really admire your story...this is what an average girl relates to..Varun seems to be a nice guy here, n Naina might like him a lot, but then if she is still thinking about Sameer then probably it might have been more than an infatuation...let's see what you have in store for us...now that they are much older n they meet, I'm sure it's going to be a very different scenario, with both of them matured to an extent. I always believe if love is true, it finds a way back to you. Keep up the good work! I'm waiting for more.

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