Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#651

Minu beautiful writing again but I am getting more intrigued with each part...ab darwaza uff suspense tod bhi do😆

You have an amazing knack for keeping the reader hooked onto the story! Naina's emotional turmoil was depicted so well during the wedding including her pulling out the Banarsi saree from the cupboard.I wish her family could have blessed her at least those who mattered to her but I am glad she has Sameer, Nisha and other friends by her side.

Nisha and Rishav inka kya kehna. I was laughing like crazy during their antiques especially the one where Rishav says will you decorate my room as well when I recover, simply hilarious.

Naina and Sameer seem like they have been husband-wife for ages and the marriage was only a formality 😉 the way Sameer got down to the business of discussing the important matter at hand.

Can't wait for the next part, I bet the best is yet to come 😊

This week has been crazy at my end so couldn't catch up before. All the best for your exams!!

Cheers⭐️,

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#652

awesome update
loved it
the only thing I missed is naina's family
may be now we will get samaina ka past
update soon

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: Komalp1391
Thanku minu di for long update
It was amazing like always
Nisha and rishav innocence has won the hearts of all the readers frankly saying i enjoy rishav and nisha scenes more than samaina scenes
So finally shaadi is done
Now the story will unfold about their pasts very excited for that eagerly wanted to know naina and sameers whole story
Rishav explanation about shaadi is so cute loved it

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear Komal.Glad you loved it so much.This appreciation keeps me going.😃 Nisha and Rishav scenes seems to have take the cake.😉😆

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Minu! You have an amazing talent. You stop at the most crucial moment! Matlab...kya yaar!! Ab I'm eagerly waiting for Part 18...you said you'd written 2-3 parts in advance na...I'm all in to read the back story of Sameer and Naina now...
The moment I would describe it as most beautiful was:
Naina ascending the stairs in the simple, red, banarasi sari...no makeup, her hair tied in a bun, decked with gajra...and sunlight adding to the tint on her cheeks...I could really imagine how beautiful she must have been looking...Sameer ke man me kya chal raha hoga yaar! I'm a strong proponent of beauty in simplicty! n Sameer ka wo sherwani pehenana...
n dono dulha dulhan ka aise act karna jaise this is just a compromise for them...but asal me...they both know that it was meant to be...they were meant to be...now that they are husband and wife...they do need to trust themselves completely n let the other know about their side of the story...
Nisha in that cute lehenga...girte padte...Sameer taking care of her...Nisha n Rishav asking questions about the decorations of the room for the first night...was pure innocent...I loved those scenes...
Sameer and Naina have gone through a strange journey in your story- a myriad of emotions. A perfect example of how unpredictable life is.
I'm falling more in love with the story Minu!
Keep Writing dear! coz u rock!!

Love,
Sur

Hi Sur! Thank you so much for the appreciation.Glad you loved it so much.😳 and yes the scene you loved it is indeed beautiful to visualise too.I myself too is believer in simplicity and the exuding beauty out of it.Sameer -Nisha scenes give me happiness.The unending love from someone not related by blood is incredible.😃

This appreciation keeps me going.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Hayye what a beautiful update..
Minu.. u r truly blessed... your stories take me to a different world...
And just like the show there is a realistic touch to your writing

Loved reading this part and nisha and Rishav lol true antique pieces...

The last scene was romantic in itself,.

And uff your cliffhangers..

Though u gave a long one but still yeh dil maange more..

Thanks Di for your review.I am glad it touched right chords with you.😳 Hope your quench is satiated in the upcoming updates.😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: angelic567
Hey minu
Another amazing one

I love the way you are portraying friendship in this story... Be it swati-naina, niru-naina or even nikita-naina... What will naina do without swati and niru by her side.. Such true friends they both are... Also naina dedicating her whole life for the promise given to her dear friend nikita... Naina remembering the moments shared with her nikita didi was so heartwrenching😭

All the elements were presei. nt in this chapter... Rishav nisha scenes made me laugh... Kids are so innocent... Nisha and her questions.😆.. I can totally understand naina's predicament... Nisha asking Rishav whether they should also get married as they are best friends was so cute 😳
... Nisha thinks the bed is being decorated for her and her mumma😆... Nisha - rishav drank the milk and even slept on the bed... Niru's reaction... Oh gosh... I can't stop laughing... Bacchon ne sachme chaupat karne waala tha first night ka. 😆

Sameer is clearly in love with naina.. Otherwise he won't be admiring her beauty... Naina's thoughts are occupied by nisha all the time... Everything she does is for nisha... She is a true mother... Loved nisha moments as usual... I just want nisha to address sam as 'papa'... That would be such a wonderful moment.

Is sameer's house too small to not have a double cot?.. Naina getting nervous and sameer trying to ease her was very nice.. Loved the authoritative sameer.. Saying i'm ur husband and i have right to know ur past... Holding her hand, helping her remove the gajra was a typical husband antics... I am guessing naina was engaged to someone before... May be after Nisha's parents death, she broke off the engagement to take care of nisha... There is so much room for predictions..

Waiting for the past to unfold... Hopefully sameer will share about his past too in the next update... Why do you have to always leave us on cliff hangers yaar... Intezaar karna mushkil hai.

Love u minu

Love you Simi..🤗

Such a long reply..😳 Yeah friendships are actual strength of our lives.Naina has really got good friends who have supported her in kitha nd kin and have not made her feel the absence of her family so is with Sameer.

Bache hein to nautanki karenge na.They seem over excited and curious about everything..😆

Since Sameer and Nanu are living in someone else's house on rent so its small and arrangements are not like for a married couple's house.

Thank you for your constant encouragement and love.❤️

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Loved it !! Loved it!! Loved it! !! Minu you are very talented...you should think of making this ur career..Make portfolio of ur wrks and approach some production houses dear...not many can write each scene with so much of details...its a god given gift...god bless!!!

Thank you so much Ashu Di for the appreciation.😃You truly made my day with such a reply.Writing is something i would definitely choose as my second career.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: Veda1125
Minu,
Beautiful update! Loved it! Awaiting for the next one!

Thank you so much for the appreciation.Glad you loved it so much.This appreciation keeps me going.😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: Bluebee
Amazing update minu di...loved it very much.
So now samina have married ...and sameer asked about her past with authority .
Nisha and rishav scene was so cute...both are so innocent n sweet.

Thank you so much Ishu for the appreciation.Glad you loved it so much.This appreciation keeps me going.Nisha and Rishav scenes seems to have take the cake.😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Rishav and Nisha scenes stole my heart.
Am hoping that now Samaina are married the past will start unfolding.
Thank you for the super long update and the pm

Nisha and Rishav scenes seems to have take the cake.Yes!The past will unfold as the storyline rolls on.😳