Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143 - Page 68

Reswa minu

The plot is too good dear ..

Unres at page 87..

Woooh isko bolts hai ek dumdar episode..

It was as usual brilliant. .. m liking how the story is progressing ... Thsnks for the pm ... Will be waiting for next update

RES

So here I am writing it down once again.
Lesson learnt ---Type long messages in MS Word first.Here on everything in Odia.
Third time pain padhuchi.Kintu kichi skip karibini.
Padhi padhi comment karibi.
Hela?
Mun bhala mood re achi ta.Detailed jibi.
Starting---
Doubt thila Nisha ku kete barsha ki Mumma kahidela?
Vikram first dinar u flirt karichi.Good boy.Seiya kare.
Suzzane-Naina scene
Naina ra condition relatable.Sabu thaiki kichi nathiba.
Ete helpless mun kebe feel karini.Jetiki lines padhiki karuchi.
So that's it.Sudip ku mun daruthili.But eei update re hatred level in sky limit.
Mo Nisha aau Naina ete torture karichi.Raha sabura hisaab niya haba.
Story point of view Naina ku strong haba ku padichi.
But gote point aau fight karihueni.Thank God Sameer achi.
Nisha squealed in joy...line ta...God that brought a smile on my face.
If anyone Naina then he would want Nisha first---Sameer babu na janiki bi thik kama ta karichanti.Nisha ku darichi first.
Preeti achi na eei update re.Bhala kalu.Delhi bi nei asilu.Good girl.
Loka welcome hugs re huanti kintu ama Naina chapuda re.
Hatred level list 2 more added----Taiji aau Tauji
Break journey ta bahut bhala se describe karichu.Shimla pare kehi bi janiparibeni.
Shefali pain dara laguchi.Naina Preeti ku kahilani?
Naina pleaded..Nisha flashed her smile line...I literally had tears..
Bechari kichi janini..And people are after her.
Thank God Nirupama asigale...
Nirupama bhali loka achanti boli ame jinda ache...
My Rishu is pyara bacha..any doubt?
Rishu was crawling giggling and grunting..My babu sona..
Sameer-Naina scene
Bichari...Tightly darithila...Good progress.
Fulfilment...Mun janini..mate kan laguchi..
Forehead re kiss...ILOVEYOU
Mat jao...pain ILOVEYOU.
Sameer-Nisha-Naina scene
Biswas kare mate gote type ra complete complete feeling diye..Nija life re jaha athura achi..seita pura hela bhali lage..
Papa glass anile..Mumma pallu re muhan pochila...Aww..lo..
Papa sua dele...Hugs... Iloveyoubahutsara

Last di ta line pain----- I don't have words..Beautiful it is..
Now this one
Part 12 pare---Writing wise eta mo favourite
Really tu bahut evolve karichu writer bhabare..
Se feeling ta asuthila padhiki..
3^rd time pain padhili tadhapi se feelings change helani..
Bahut bhala heichi.
Naina aau Nisha scenes first time mate bahut bhala lagila...Favourite moments re jiba.
Sameer-Nisha ta you know...ILOVEYOUBAHUTBAHUTSARA.
Jaha lekhichi sabu sata lekhichi..
No overexaggeration and no micha katha.
Thau setiki thau..
Aau baki phone kahibi..
Kintu mun chahun nathili kit u eei update ta ebe de..Chad..
Keep writing like this

Awesome update Minu. It was great to read how the past has unfolded and heartbreaking as well to see all the struggles poor Naina has been through. All the choices that she has made.. such a strong and pure character!

It's good that Sameer now understands and knows everything too.. he will stand by her the way no one ever has.

Loved the closing scene of them getting in a bed together as a family!

Whatever happened with Naina in d past, made me cry!! How much she has suffered in her life..but having an angel like Nisha, in your life..it's worth it!!

Minu! This part had an emotional quality to it...The way you told the story of Naina's hardships in flashback...n then the way Sameer gave her a hug...for the first time, I did not feel that I wanted them to confess their love for each other. Infact, it was as if the words of confession were not needed. The heart knew, the hearts understood and felt each other's pain. Who would've thought that the swag wala Maheshwari who took on a bet to ridicule a girls' honour in front of the entire school would mature so much? This is what life, time and circumstances do to you...each experience you have moulds you and has a part in making you the person you are today- be it good or bad.

Originally posted by: Azraa01

As the saying goes. . The plot thickens..

Cant wait to see how Sameer will protect his 2 ladies.

Thank you dear 😃