Hi Surbhi 😃 Thanks for appreciating this piece.😃 About long update I understand.It was a shorter one I too agree.Wanted to push myself a little after so many days of abandoning this story 😆 About the progression in story line,its moving in the planned way.So you need not be worried for getting twists and surprises 😉 Suspense is what keeps this story moving darling.😉 Hope the next update increase your interest.😃Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Wow dear...what an interesting update...I really liked how Nisha discovered that Sameer n Naina knew each other before...their pent up anger coming to the fore slowly...the misunderstandings brimming to the top again...literary fest n maybe the chance meeting of Sameer n Naina that day...
But I have one honest feedback dear...I would like you to make the parts little longer or update sooner...coz I don't like to wait so long for the story to continue...the story is moving a little slower than expected...though the story is really creative...just my two cents dear...hope you don't mind...I'm just too eager for the suspense to unfold :)