Preeti Pandit TS: Wo Ek Din Last Part on Pg 5

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Awww so cute and impressive start Manisha di 👏👏

I loved Preeti helping Naina going with her, and Pandit falling from the back seat 🤣

Munna oh bechara 😛 and and.. Sehgal 😆

And Sameer enjoying the ride 😉 an angle in between i enjoyed ❤️

Lovely beginning, and me looking forward to the picnic and Preeti - Pandit ka ek din ek saath Waiting for the next, lovees 🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Nice to see a new love angle from you Manisha dear... ⭐️👏

Cute n delightful... !!!!

So,, its the picnic for four,,, n Pandit preeti episode to be shown,, !

The interesting scene was he sitting at the back,, Preeti driving the bicycle n he fell,,,, 😆 cuteness personified... 😛

Nice that she helped Naina,,, n see getting paired by none other than... Shekhchilli,,, 😆

Nice going.,, will be waiting for the chemistry between this pair,,, !!!

Hats Off to the initiative.. 👏👏

Keep going dear...

God bless.. !

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Tara_Vjian

@Tara_Vjian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Shaikhchilli🤣

Loving preeti and pandit

Awesome

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

As always, your stories are a treat to read Manisha ❤️ 🤗

Thanks so much for take on Pandit and Preeti 👏

Nice start and good chance of their meeting! must be given credit to SatyaNarayan Pooja 😉

Liked to see them in convo, i mean a boy at the back and the girl is riding his cycle with him falling on the ground 😆

Poor chap! he will have a good time with her all the way 😛

Munna leaves, for Swati, and Pandit Preeti pair gets a chance to progress! Nice and so thoughtful of you! ⭐️

In the meanwhile, like shona said, we gets to enjoy the Saina ride as well, so that's a plus point that whichever be the pair, we get to see them together, every time! 😉

Lovely take with no romcom, but i must say this is going to be a cute, romantic of it's style 😳 Going to wait for the next update.

Thanks and luv ya more!

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Amazing update dear 😳
loved PreeDit nok-jhok 😆
Please update the next part soon

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Mansi

@Vampire2468

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Beautifully written ❤️loved tbe nok jhok of Preeti n Pandit 😳SaIna can't wait for the next part 😳

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Funny plus cute start
Pandit and Preeti's nok-jhok is awesome 😆
Bechara Munna 😆
Continue soon!

Thanks dear😃

i'm glad you liked their nok jhok...Munna is actually a bechara😆

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Luv it
Poor pandit
Tumhe koi jagayega aur kahega ye tumhara sapna hai
Hehehe
Nice punch..
Beautifully written

This punch just came to my mind while writing...I'm not very good at this...But I'm so glad I could write this😆

Thanks a lot for liking it😃😆

Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
That was so hilarious.My God! Have to admit,this couple has an awesome comic timing.Love them and their brewing chemistry.
The setting is apt.Writting is too goood.👏
Can't wait to read the next part.Plz update soon.😃

Really...these two characters are unique in their own way...this is missing in the show...I too enjoyed writing this😆

I'll be soon updating😃😆

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: VeebafanSonam
Hey thanks for full filling my wish😳
Loved it...

It was awesome update.

Please continue soon..and pls try to keep it longer..

I'm glad you liked to read it...i'll be keeping it longer in the last part...hope you like that too😃😆

I'll soon update this😃