Sameer-Naina SS-Holding It Together (EPILOGUE UPDATED) - Page 4

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Why is he worried for the piece she made?Why is he so mad at the boy?Why is he so disturbed though it should be her ?Why is he concerned about her?

This is what he needs to realize actually ...that there is something between the two which makes them repeatedly cross their ways and they come in front of each other sometimes to help each other and other times they create problems for each other😊

Great piece of writing and now waiting eagerly for the next as she is locked in the washroom...I hope there is no pranks on the part of that guy who was bashed by Sameer...😳

Lovely update...please continue soon😊

Originally posted by: Anjali33

WOW👏 what an update dear!!

Naina n Arjun's convo was full of Arjun's concern for Naina!! Rakesh sir wud actually destroy everything on knowing d truth!!

D lines of d song went so well wid d situation.."bolo na kyu ye chand sitare..." on getting mesmerized by Naina.."Kyu ho tum sharmayi hui si..." when Naina blushed bcz of him holding her hand..AAAND, "Mere rang mein rangne wali..." on Sameer noticing their colour coordinated outfits was d best one

TBH, mujhe pehli baar koi song dalne ka reason ek baar mein samajh aya h😆 else it always takes 2-3 reads for me to understand

Update soon..btw, how many parts hv u planned??

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Outstanding update I must say ❤️u are indeed an awesomeee writer loved it a lottt perfect song n it suited the situation n them ❤️update soon 😊

Originally posted by: queenfaerie25

Awesome story! I love that you maintained the innocence of the characters while adding a teenage butterflies in heart sort of theme :D