Ishra TS : Koi Tumsa Nhi (Part-3 (last) on pg 11 on 29/04/2020) - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kadianvi

Hello everyone.

I'm here with second part of this new TS but before that I would like to say that while writing this TS, KI Ka movie was not in my mind, I didn't even know about its concept. Coincidentally, it somewhere shares the concept but I want t clear it that it's different from the movie.

Just wanted to clear it.


Scroll down for next part....


Where it is?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you so much for the lovely response. Glad you liked this concept.

Part-2

I - That I know, your name, your work everything. And by your behavior, I got to know that you don’t know me. Right?

R (surprised) - You know me? How? And I really don’t know you.

I - How will you know me? You don’t like business parties, don’t come to the office, don't even consider birthday invitations….

R - Wait. Birthday invitations? Are you Ishita Iyer, daughter of Iyer uncle, our company’s fifty percent shareholder?

He asked excitedly while Ishita nodded smiling.

R - Hello, So finally we met, not in a good situation but we met. And yes, Wish you a very happy two days belated birthday.

I - Thank you so much. So this is how you compensate.

R - I know I behaved rudely neglecting or I should say rejecting your invitation. So sorry for that but I just… Ok I will not give any excuses because I really don’t have and I don’t like to tell a….

I - Lie.

R - Yes, I must say you know so much about me.

I - You are sooo good that people talk a lot about you.

R - And this is not my mistake that I don’t know you. I mean I always know about Iyer uncle, Papa’s best friend from college, they started the company together and uncle shifted to Chennai after marriage, only uncle used to come here two to three times a year and now when your family settled here in delhi, that time I was out of city and then you were completing your studies is Bangalore.

I - Yes, but It has been three months since I came to delhi and finally we met today.

R - Yes. By the way, not only you, but I also heard a lot about you. You were topper in your university and now doing well in office. Papa used to praise you a lot.

I - By the way, what were you doing there?

R - Actually, I was escaping from the biggest problem of my life. You know what’s that - my marriage.

I - Marriage and biggest problem.

R - Yes, my mother india is behind me, always saying get married get settled, always doing emotional drama, showing me photos of different girls and arranging meetings with those stupid girls.

I - Stupid girls?

R - Yes, I mean I’m not saying it for all girls but whoever I met, she is definitely stupid. Either she wants only money and a party lover or she wants me to join my father's business just to have a share of his properties or if there is any working lady then having a homemaker husband will make her feel shame and for them house and even children can be taken care by the maids caretaker. So, now I’m fed up with them. That’s why this time I didn’t even see her photo or read her bio data. I just came here, sat in the cafe, had a coffee, will show this bill to my mother india and will say that she didn’t come.

I (little angrily) - Why did you start it today? Muhrat dekha tha koi?

R - No, but why are you getting angry?

I - Nothing. (thought) - name bhi nhi pta aur photo to dur ki bat hai.. Idiot.

R - Ok, I think they must have gone now. I should go and bring my car…

I - It’s ok. I mean, I don’t think so. They must be waiting for you only. I will drop you wherever you want. You can send someone else later on.

Raman agreed and told her to drop at his home, his mother must be waiting. She drove towards Bhalla mansion. Soon they reached there. Raman told her to come inside to which she agreed. Mrs Bhalla was sitting in the hall when she saw them entering inside. Ishita greeted her to which she blessed her and asked him,

Mrs Bhalla - Puttar kaisi rhi meeting sheeting. Is bar tujhe ladki jarur pasand aa gai hogi.

R - Kya Maa, kaisi ladki pasand karte ho, time ki aur insan ki koi kadar hi nhi hai. Aapko pta hai, maine puri 20 minutes wait kia par vo aai hi nhi to main aa gaya.

Mrs Bhalla looked at Ishita confused and asked,

Mrs Bhalla - Ladki nhi aai to tujhe Ishita puttar kaha mili?

Raman told her how they met, making his mother to think and she asked if he had seen the girl’s photo and read her biodata to which he lied but she told him to tell the truth and he said that he didn’t get the time and went to his room to escape from her questions while Mrs Bhalla shouted,

Mrs Bhalla - Oye khoteya, ek bar us photo ko dekhle taki tujhe pta chale ki tune kitni badi mistake kar di.

Raman heard her and went to his room irritatedly. He sat to do some work but her mother’s words were ringing in his mind.

R - Ek bar dekh leta hu ki vo kon hai, aisa kya khas hai usme, vaise vo mujhe kitna bhi shadi ke liye kahe par kabhi bhi kisi ladki ke liye aise nhi bola aaj tak…. Aur ek bar dekhne mein kya burai hai.

He stood up and searched for the envelope having the photo with the biodata. After thinking for some time, he opened it and first saw the photo only to get shocked. He hit his forehead realising his mistake. He thought for a few minutes if he should rectify it or not and finally decided to rectify his mistake. He ran to the hall only to find it empty. Maid told him that Mrs Bhalla went to see off Ishita outside. He ran only to see Ishita had already started the car and his mother was bidding her bye. Both ladies looked at him.

R - Maa, mehmaan ko tea, coffee ya juice ke liye bhi nhi pucha…..

mrs bhalla - beta aap late ho gaye, har meeting ka time decided hota hai, usse aur bhi kam hai

Both ladies smiled at him while he got embarrassed. Ishita left giving him a last look.

Flashback ended…

Ishita hit him remembering that day,

I - That was so rude of you.

R - Ha to mujhe sapna thodi aaya tha ki jis din se main ladki ki photo dekhna band Kar dunga usi din mujhe Meri life milegi.

I - Achaji… life and all…

R - Arey aap Kya Jane ki Meri wife Meri life hai…. Meri aan…

I - Meri aan baan Shaan, Meri Jaan hai.

She said mimicking him, like they always say for each other. Soon they reached Bhalla mansion where everyone was shouting and living the newly found happiness in their family. Mrs Bhalla congratulated Raman and thanked Ishita and Romi for doing this. Later at night, Ishita was working on her laptop when Raman came and put his head in her lap removing her laptop.

R - Kabhi kabhi is bechare pati ko bhi itna time de dena chahiye.

I - Achaji, mere pati dev bechare kabse ho gaye?

R - Jab se aapse shadi hui hai. Agar itna hi pyar hai is laptop aur files se to inhi se shadi karni chahiye thi, mere peeche kyu padi thi?

I (a little angry) - Achaji to main aapke peeche padi thi.. mujhe aapse pyar nhi hai?? main aapko time nhi deti?? Really Raman you are so bad. For your kind information Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla, you don’t have time, you and your social work, always busy with your NGOs, orphanages and other activities. You are so much into it. Did you forget? How much time you took for just a single meeting that to be when a girl is asking straightforwardly? Sorry, I have some work, I don’t have time today, I have to go to court or the police station, I’m going out of station, this, that etc etc.. You are a package of excuses.

R - Really..

He said and pulled her closer while she smiled and said yes….

Flashback :-

That day, after Ishita left, Raman was thinking if he had really missed something good. His mind was not at rest that day, he was again and again thinking about her only. At night, he was lying on the bed thinking about his mother’s words that Ishita knew everything about him, his work and his decision of being a social worker and a homemaker after marriage forever, after knowing everything about him, she came up with this alliance from the front. He received a message from the unknown number.

Message - You owe me.

He read the message and thought who is this person.

Message - What did you decide about the deal?

Raman thought that it’s related to the deal which he received from some goons to shut down his social service so he answered.

R - Stop troubling yourself for trying on me. I will not agree to your deal.

Message - But why? I’m ready to agree with all your conditions and...

R - But I’ll not agree to your conditions in my whole life.

Message - But I didn’t put any conditions.

R - Really? Listen, I’m warning you for the last time. Stop following me and stop interfering in my work. I’m not going to stop all these because of your threats.

He sent the message and it was received by none other than Ishita who smiled reading his message and wondered if he ever thought other than his work.

I - Ok. I don’t have any problem with your work. I just want dinner or lunch with you.

Raman was shocked reading it and made a dirty face.

R - Are you mad? What are you talking about? Rubbish.

I - How rude? Can’t you do this much little favour to me?

R - No. I can’t.

I - Don’t you want to compensate for today’s coffee??

Raman was about to type something in anger when he realised and then read the whole conversation and thought if it’s Ishita. He called on the number and she picked it immediately.....

Here I'm ending this part.

Precap - Ishra union.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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updated now.... you can see
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Nice, raman n his confusion.


He n his hyper activeness ...


Next what , intresting....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Fabulous update

Loved the flashback 👍🏼

Raman didn’t even realise that ishita was the girl😆

Loved that chat convo😃

Ishita was much straightforward 👍🏼😃

Raman is such an idiot 🤣

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Ty 4 d pm too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful update dr

Ishra conversation is super

Eagerly waiting

Plzzz update soon dr

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome superb update

Lol Raman

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz plz plz continue soon

Nd thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Loved the chat convo.....

Raman was confused.....

Continue soon....

Thank you for the pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Super awesome update

Continue soon

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Thanks for the pm









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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful update

Ishita told raman she knows about him and his work but he don't know her how will he as he never accept any birthday invitation or party raman asked if she is Ishita iyer uncle daughter she said yes he wished her belated happy birthday she thanks him their talk was nice Ishita asked raman what was all that he said he was escaping from marriage torcher his mother is behind him to make him marry she always blackmail him but he don't like meeting those stupid girls ishita said stupid he told her reason why he called those girls stupid he said today he didn't even saw that girl pic or bio data he did time pass here he will go home and show his mother coffee bill ishita was angry she said she will drop him she dropped him he asked her to come in toshiji got happy seeing them she asked raman how was meeting raman said that girl didn't came toshiji was confused she asked him to say truth he told her and was going to his room toshiji asked him to see girl photo atleast than he will realize what mistake he have done raman decided to see girl photo he was shocked seeing ishitas pic hehe toshijis comment was nice ishra talk was lovely flashback was nice raman was thinking about Ishita he got message he thought some goon is sending him message but later realized it's ishita very beautiful story

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

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