Mohabbat....part 16....24/10 - Page 17

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Ishita was thinking why she let raman kiss her she decided to maintain distance from raman mimka were happy as ishra are in love and decided not to interfere in thier matter anymore next day bhalls decided to celebrate mr.bhalla and mrs.bhalla anniversary next day ishita had to go at bhalla office for meeting she reached there and was asked to sit in confrenece room raman came there he decided to ask forgivness from her for kiss he was about to say sorry to her till than mr.raghav came ishita hugged him as he was mani her best friend loved how raman was jealous finally raman realized he loves ishita and decided to confess his feelings

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Raman now wants to apologize to Ishita because he kissed her yesterday

when Mr Raghav arrived for the meeting Ishita and him know each other

this made Raman feel somewhat jealous and when Mani

ask Ishita to spend time with him immediately Raman makes an excuse

telling her that he needs to discuss about the project

Raman finally apologizes to her

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Raman: yes i love her..... i will tell her that i love her.... I will make her mine....but how....if she denied me then....she is already upset with me because of yesterday and top of it she said now we should maintain safe distance between us..... And if that shani proposed her tomorrow morning.....no no... I will not let this happen.. I will make her believe in me yes yes..... You are great raman....now wait and watch my madrassan how will i going to make you mine......

He said smilingly ruffling his hair. At evening he came back home and directly went to kitchen only to found busy toshiji who was giving instructions to helps for dinner. He hugged her from behind and kissed her cheek.

Raman: how much you work maa..... U should rest naa.... Come.....

Toshiji smiles on his concern and spoke caressing his cheek: ki hoya.... Puttar aaj toh tu bda khus hai.... Kuch khaas baat hai kya....

Raman dragged her out of the kitchen and spoke: kya maa.... Aap bhi naa.... Can't i come to you without any reason.... Do i need any reason to come to you....

Toshiji: esa toh nhi kha mene..... Acha bta kya baat hai....

Raman: Baat kuch nhi bs baat yeh hai ki aap apna dhyaan nhi rakhte ho.... Itne helps hain naa ghar mein... Let them work.....why do you always exert yourself.

Toshiji: acha.....esi baat hai toh meri responsibility kam krde.....

Raman: aap bolo.... Mai esa kya kru jisse aap ki responsibilities kam ho.... Bolo

Toshiji: mujhe meri bahu deker.... Ishita maan gyi kya.....

Raman: esi baat nhi hai maa.....

Toshiji: toh kesi baat hai.... Dekh puttar mujhe pta hai ki tu ishita ko pasand krta hai.... Karta hai na....

Raman kept his head in her lap and spoke: haan maa krta hu..... But pta nhi vo mujhe pasand krti hai ya nhi....

Toshiji: toh fikar ki koi baat hi nhi hai.... Mai bhalla ji se baat krke tera rishta ishita ke liye leke chle jate hai unke ghar....

Raman: its not easy maa......vo madrassan mujhse boht nafrat krti hai.....usse mnana asan nhi hai....

Toshiji: toh hum punjabi kya kisi se kam hai kya....

Raman: esa nhi hai..... Mai pehle hum dono ke bich sb kuch thik krna chahta hu..... Aap bs mujhe thoda time de do....jb hum dono ke bich sb kuch thik ho jayega tb mai khud apko apna rishta le ker bhejuga.....

Toshiji kissed his temple and spoke while caressing his hair: jesi teri marzi..... Pr ab mujhe bahu ishita hi chahiye aur koi nhi.... Smjha...

Raman smiled and nodded.

In iyer mansion. All were having their dinner when ishita spoke.

Ishita: appa you know aaj jinke sath humari meeting thi vo kon hai......

Mr. Iyer: mani..... I know kanna...

Ishita: what!.... Apko pta tha appa....fir bhi apne mujhe nhi btaya.... So bad

Mr. Iyer: kanna..... Usne mujhe mna kiya tha vo tumhe surprise dena chahta tha isliye mene nhi btaya.... Sorry...

Ishita: its ok appa.....

Mrs. Iyer: ayyo... Ishu... Agar mani yahi hai... Toh usse dinner per invite lyu nhi kiya.... Hum bh in mil lete usse....

Ishita: amma... Ab vo apka pehle wala mani kanna nhi rha.... Ab vo boht bda business man ho gya hai.... Busy rehta hai isliye usne mna kr diya but its ok.... Aap chinta mat kro mene usse kal ke liye invite koya hai..... Aap sb usse kal mil lena.....

Vandu: vese ishu tujhse ek baat puchu.... Tu raman se kyu itna nafrat krti hai.....

Ishita choked her food off and started coughing mrs. Iyer gave her glass of water which she gulped down immediately while mrs. Iyer was caressing her back while shouting on ishita

Mrs. Iyer: araam se ishu.... Abhi bhi bachon jesi harkte hai ese khana hate hai....dhyaan se khana chahiye naa.... But nhi tumhe toh jaldi jaldi khana hai.... Jb se office shuru kiya hai tb se sb kaam jaldi jaldi....aur toh aur Khana bhi jaldi mai krna hai.....

Mihika: amma thik hain ab akka....why are u scolding her.... Akka are you fine?

Mihika asked out of concern to which ishita nodded in yes. Ishita looks at vandu and was giving deadly glare to her in response vandu smiled sheepishly. Vandu again spoke gaining everyone's attention

Vandu: so ishu.... I was saying that why do you hate....

She was cut off by ishita while glaring her faking smile.

Ishita: akka.... Where is jiju....

Vandu: he has gone out of station for college conference....

Ishita: then why didn't you go with him... He must be feeling lonely naa..... Poor jiju....

Ishita said while teasing vandu. Every body smiled hearing ishita.

Vandu: haan.... Hans lo jitna hasna meri bari ane do ishu fir puchungi mai...

Mihika: haan akka... Inke wala toh kisi ki sunta bhi nhi...

Saying so mihika and vandu smiled. While ishita opened her mouth in o shape and spoke in warning tone

Ishita: mihiku.... Enough now.... Don't test my patience....

Mrs.iyer who was mute spectre till now spoke eyeing ishita

Mrs. Iyer: sunta nhi hai means.....what does that mean mihiku

Mihika suddenly become conscious and looked at ishita from the side of corner on the other hand ishita was in shock and looked at her parents who were waiting for their answer.

Vandu: mihiku..... Amma is asking something....

Mihika composed herself and spoke trying hard to be normal while ishita was eyeing her for not tell anything to anyone.

Mihika: no..nothing amma.... There is nothing like that .....its just slip tongue... Nothing else... And do you think that ishu akka would hide something from you.

Appa: what madhavi.....why are you interrogating them.... I know my daughters they will never hide something from us... Haina ishu...

Ishita nodded her head and sighed in relief. After a while all retired to their room after dinner. Ishita was waiting for mihika in her room pacing to and fro in room. She was cursing her. Soon mihika showed up in her room and went towards cupboard ignoring ishita. Ishita called her while folding her arms to her chest.

Ishita: mihiku......

Mihika while taking out her night clothes : haan... Akka bolo....

Ishita: what was that mihiku....

Mihika: what....

Ishita: don't act as if you don't know what i m asking about

Mihika: how am i know akka.... Until u don't tell

Ishita: at dinner..... What was that ....u were about to tell about raman..... U should have thought once mihiku....

Mihika: by the way akka.....i didn't take his name..... How do you know that I was talking about raman bhalla....

Mihika asked while suspecting her. Ishita mentally smacked herself for uttering raman's name in front of mihika. She very well know that now mihika will not leave her easily. Ishita looked here and there thinking some excuse to get out of this detective mihika iyer investigation round.

Mihika came towards her and spoke nudging ishita: say akka.... Is there something between you two ...

Ishita sat on couch and took out a random magzine and spoke as if ignoring mihika's question: nothing like that mihiku..... There is nothing between us.... And there couldn't be anything between us ....

Mihika while settling beside her: oh.... So there is nothing ok.... If you are saying then.... I think i should believe you by the way akka.... He is handsome smart eligible bachelor there is nothing wrong if something is there between you and amma toh maan hi jayegi as she already smitten by him. He is not that bad the way you describe us....

Ishita(sarcastically): oh... Handsome and vo ravan kumar......he is not that handsome haan.... There are lots of boys around who are more handsome than him.... And by the way tum kab se uss ravan kumaar ko handsome kehne lagi.....

Mihika leaned over her a little and spoke while taking out magazine from ishita's hand: since the time u started reading this magazine from opposite side....

Ishita realised that she has been holding it from opposite side, she shut her eyes tightly being caught by mihika. And tried to cover it

Ishita: oh... I know that i was holding it from opposite side it just that i was looking at its design....

Mihika:oh...so you were observing its design.... Don't pretend akka admit it that you were trying to avoid my questions about raman bhalla in this process u pick it up from wrong side....now tell me is something bothering you u know naa u can share anything with me....

Ishita sighed defeatedly and spoke: no mihiku... There is nothing.....and vandu akka always bring marriage issue....sometimes i use to feel like vandu akka doesn't love me....she is....

But before ishita would have completed her sentence she snapped by vandu who overheard their conversation.

Vandu: ishu.... This is not done yaar... I love u yaar.... And don't you dare to think so again....

Ishita and mihika laughed at her. Ishita made her sit beside her and side hugged her

Ishita: akka... Toh aap ravan kumar ki baat kyu kr rhi thi amma ke samne....

Vandu: so what.... What's wrong with raman...

Ishita: akka... U know naa he is my rival nothing else.....and mai kbhi usko hate krti hu.... You are understanding naa what i m saying....

Vandu: but ishu.... Amma likes him alot na...i think Vo tumhe pasand krta hai....

Mihika: vandu akka... But ishu akka unhe hate krti hai... Aap smjho naa...

She eyed her while stressing on word 'smjho'. Vandu understand her sign and spoke

Vandu:ok...ok... Sorry ...mai agli baar se nhi kahungi esa ok.... And yes raman is not so bsd haan...just think about that .... Budhu...

Ishita made face:ayyo murugun... Mujhe pta hai aap log kya krne ki try kr rhe ho....bs... Ab chlo so jate hain kafi late ho gya hai....

Next day at iyer house. All were having their breakfast when mani arrived. Seeing mani all gets happy. He took blessing of mr. And mrs. Iyer. Mrs. Iyer asked him to have breakfast. He happily agreed to her. after having breakfast ishita and mani went out for their day out.

At bhalla industries raman was pacing to and fro in his cabin getting restless thinking about ishita and mani. He spoke to him self

Raman: Don't know how to find out where they went. Her secretary was also saying that she cancelled all her meeting today. It means they are together. The way they were hugging each other and talking, it doesn't look like they are friends. What if ishita loves that shani then....aur vo toh mujhse nafrat krti hai....

He was thinking when his phone rang breaking his trance. He looked at the screen and found romi's name and picked up his call

Romi: hello!... Bhai

Raman: bol rha hu....

Romi: bhai aap kahaan ho abhi....

Raman: kyu ese kyu puch rha hai... Kuch kaand kiya kya tune fir se....

Romi: aree bhai.... Mai toh isliye puch rha tha ki kyu na mummy papa ki anniversary party hotel mein ki jaye kesi rhegi...

Romi was talking on phone when raman heard ishita's voice from the other end. He recognised her voice over phone and thought to himself how come she is there, what she is doing there. When he remembered mani and his proposal to her. Without wasting he asked romi restaurant's name.

Raman: what's the hotel name romi?

Romi: the oriental hotel bhai.... Booking kr doo....

Raman: stay there for while... Am just coming....

Romi: but bhai apko ane ki kya jrurat hai.... I will handle by my own....

Raman: baad mein btayunga.....u just stay there aur dekh whana tere ass pass ishita iyer bethi hogi....

Romi looks around and found her at next table: yes bhai hai vo but aap kyu puch rhe ho....

Raman: tu uss pe nazar rakh mai aa rha hu...

Saying so he cut the call and left from office.

After half an hour he reached. He went inside the hotel and scanned all the restaurant and there he found ishita sitting with mani smiling and talking to him. Seeing them together he fumed in jealousy.

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