New SS- Ek duje ke vaaste , pt 22 on pg no 147 on 3/7

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Amazing start dear

Feel so bad for ruman

Can't see them in so much pain

Ruhi choose Ishu over her parents but she has to choose either her parents court give her some time for it

Raman is too good

His anger is justified but why Ishu did like this is not clear may be we get clear by next part

Feel so bad for him his past life is more horrible

Disgusting Shagun she deserves men like Ashok .only

Update soon dear

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sharmilasairam

@sharmilasairam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Awesome update dr. So nice.

Don't make ishra relationship as Ruhi ke liye type.

I want mani track.

I feel cv didn't completed that track well. I want ishu should understand raman pain in that track.

She as understand his love for her in that track.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Indeed Congratulations to you

on been on your 3rd year as Writer

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Congratulations on your new story

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Its a Superb Start

Shagun and Raman had gotten a divorce

but in all this Raman blames Ishita for making it easy on taking Ruhi

away from him

but it now seems like he wants to avenge Ishita

though I wonder why she had chosen to take Ruhi away from her father

when she was just the nanny

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Congratulations di

Nice start

It's time we will enjoy our favorite show through this story again

Seems Raman doesn't hate ruhi in this

He earned money and cane back to lead a happy life with his daughter but everything spoiled ,he assumes it is because if ishita

My favorite track is oaram track but u have already given a separate story on that

Accident track, and medical license track r also good

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nadia yesmin

@nadiay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

it's really an awesome update n just write your own story...bt pl change it to sumthing soft...jaise start mein ishra fights mein the wo jyada mat rakhna...just show it with slow slow romance and understanding...just an advice...rest upto u

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

waiting for Ishra confrontation...

worried about Raman's anger though

continue soon

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Ishraru

@Ishraruadpi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Super old yhm Iam excited I want Ishita pregnancy track in it

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Divanru

@Divanru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

TEASER

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Ishita parked her car and was going to her house when she saw toshiji and Romi coming down . They were looking so worried while talking , she downcasted her eyes to avoid toshiji and was crossing them when toshiji saw her and spoke " ishita if something happened to my puttar I will not spare you ".

I- what are you saying ?.

T- main tujhe warning de rahin hoon ,all this is happening because of you , rab jaane tu kyun aayi hamari zindagi mein .

She cursed ishita while she looked at Romi with questioning eyes,when Romi informed that Raman has gone somewhere and now they are not able to trace him .Neighter he is home, nor at office, even non know about him . Ishita too got worried listening to him and asked " where are you going ".

Ro- going to police station .

I- I will also come .

That's all for teaser .

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