#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

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hi friends
Get ready with tissue box to read this extremely emotional and tragic story
Ishra One Shot: Koi fariyaad
An aged man comes in police station scared... he talks to constable to file a complaint against the son of MLA for raping and murdering his daughter...constable says: what... are you mad kon MLA kay bete kay against fir likhega...
Man: please meri beti ko insaaf dela dain...
Constable: arrry jao yahan say... time mat zaya karo humain apni aur apni family ki life important hai...
Man: please...
Constable: bola na ja...
Whats going on here?? he comes out of his room and looks at the man and constable.. man comes and falls in the feet of the officer and tells all.. officier immediately holds man and makes him stand and says: you don't worry... I am with you... its my promise that your daughter will get justice... ye raman kumar bhalla ka wada hai... man looks gratefully at raman and leaves...
Constable: acp sir... wo bohat dangerous log hain...
Raman: I don't care... jaldi say evidence collect karo I want to solve this case as soon as possible...
Saying this he leaves...
Bhalla house
Raman comes back home and smiles seeing his small family having fun time as little ruhi was talking in own language to her mumma dadi and dadu...
Raman: ary wah meri princess to sab say baatain kar rahi hai...Ruhi looks at her papa and opens her arms... raman takes her in his arms and showers numerous kisses on her little face...
Time start passing.. raman gets many threat call but he was firm on his decision to get the culprit punished... gathering all the evidences and giving security to girls family... MLA gets angry as the case was moving fastly against his son... raman fulfilled his promise and girl gets justiced...outside court MLA threatens raman.
MLA: ye acha nahe kiya raman tumne... You have to pay for this...
Raman: jo kar sakta hai kar ly per you will be loser only... and he leaves...
After hearing he goes back to home and he spends time with his family... he was happy in his own world but due to sudden work at police station he leaves asking family to be careful.. he instruct all the security guards to be alert..
He was busy in work... his phone rings... seeing ishita name flashing on his phone he takes the call but gets shocked listening...Raman... raman... Bacha lo muje raman... the loud scream echoes... phone slips from his hands... he immediately takes his gun and rushes towards his home... he drives rashly to reach his home as soon as poosible.. her cries was making him restless... he covers the 20 minutes distance in hardly 8 minutes by driving at the speed of 150... thrice he get saved from an accident today his main target is to save his wife his ishita...
As he runs inside the house he sees his family, his mother and father tied up with rope badly injured his eyes searched for his wife and his baby ... The cries of his little baby gains his attention he sees his six month daughter ruhi laying on floor while her body was also injured... he calls out.. ruhi...
Ruhi looks at her father and stops crying... Raman tries to go to his baby to hold her in his arms but got a tight hit on his head he falls down...he was just looking at his baby who was pleading by her eyes to save her...
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Seeing his family in worst state he tries to look for ishita... Whenever he tries to help his family he got hit
Raman: please leave my family...
A man comes clutching ishita neck and kicks raman on his stomach and says: kiyon bay saari akar nikal gayi... mr ACP raman kumar bhalla...
Ishita struggling in his arms... raman looks at ishita her eyes were all red in pain and helplessness...
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Her body was all blue due to constant beating and her state was very bad the loss of breath was making it more worsen...
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise
ishita... he screams and gets up in the middle of night... he tries to get up but the chain on his legs were stopping him from moving... he sees ishita sitting beside holding their ruhi...
Raman: ishita...
Ishita smiles...
Raman: I knew that you will come...
As he tries to hold her hand he couldn't as it was all his imagination...
Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
He remembers her eyes pleading to him to save her... her helplessness... her pain...
Mujhse kuch teri nazar pooch rahi ho jaise
He screams again... ishita... He takes the chalk and draws her and ruhi picture on wall while already all wall were filled with ruhi and ishita pictures...
Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai
Raman murmurs to himself: I know ishita tum yahain ho mere pass... haan ishita aur ruhi yahain hi hain...
Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise
He closes his eyes but suddenly memories of unfateful night flash across his eyes...
Raman struggling in the hold of goons while MLA was laughing at raman state and says: dekh mein ne bola tha mere bete ko saza na dila... ab dekh teri family kaise till till mar rahi hai... teri chey mahine ki bachi wahan pari hai jo kabhi bhi...
Raman shouts: shut up...
Mla: abh bohat akar hai...
Raman: choor do meri family ko...
MLA: kiyon ??
Raman: please...
MLA: chalo aik lesson deta hoon tumhain... ye sab galat kehte hain kay achoon kay saath acha hi hota hai dekho tumhare saath kitna bura ho raha hai...
He shoots bullet at mr bhalla... raman shouts: papa...Raman hit the goons and takes out his gun at MLA... And says: I will shoot you...
MLA: acha shoot kar.. teri bachi ko kon bachayega...
Raman sees one of goon coming towards ruhi... raman shoots him dead... and rushes towards ruhi..
MLA: acp.. tumhari maa...
Raman looks helplessly at his mother.. and shouts: no... don't harm her...
MLA: chal teri biwi...
Raman: NO...
MLA: aik chance diya kisi aik ko bacha lay...
Raman sees guns pointed at ruhi ishita and mrs bhalla... his helplessness was making him more weak... he madly runs towards his mother, his wife and his daughter but MLA: tell me kiya decide kiya...chalo mein hi help kar deta hoon...
He shoots at mrs bhalla...
Raman screams: maa...
Ishita: raman... ruhi ko bacha lo...
Raman: ishita...
Ishita: apko meri kasam...
Raman takes the little baby in his arms and signs ishita that he will save her ishita smiles...
MLA points gun at raman and was about to shoot but ishita comes in front taking the bullet... raman screams: ishita... He fires bullet on MLA ...
Taking her in his arms he shakes her and says: ishita... ishita open your eyes... jaan... mein tumhain kuch nahe hone doonga...
Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar
Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise
Ishita slightly open her eyes a lone tear escape and she breathes her last in his lap...he hugs ishita and ruhi in his arms.. sensing the coldness of the body of little ruhi... he looks for heart beat of his baby but found none... Unable to bear the trauma he too falls lifelessly...
His breath start heavily remembering the painful moment...he cries remembering his ishita...
Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hoon main Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rahta hoon main
Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise
Raman was looking at walls thinking about his happy family their special moments, their happinesss, how everything was fine and suddenly everything got ruined he couldn't saved his family... his family got murdered in front of his eyes and he couldn't do anything...he curses himself for still alive...
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise
That's it my dear friends I really hope you will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like also...
Love you

Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago

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divya17.8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: harshiidiv
Updated my first Os for this osthon..

Beautiful os. Nice concept. Raman's character was so strong and influential. Loved the os.

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Twinkle Solanki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#333

Superb update

Love ishra

Love raman

It's an awesome emotional

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Akriti di

It's an awesome story

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Dilpreet kaur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#334

Very emotional and painful one 😭

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Priyanka2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#335

Lovely os

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Kavya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Emotional os Di

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Kavya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#338

Superb awesome emotional update dear

Plz continue soon

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#339

very tragic nd painful story. kuch accha karne se agar ye award milegi tou kabhi koi kisi ki accha nehi karega. I wish ki Raman could also die with his family kyuki ye maut se but badkar saza hai.