#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 36

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjna55

Hey

SomeOne just ROCKED!!

Wonderful Awesome N Loveliest Os

Love it

Not only An Amazing story but a moral as well
I love the concept u portrayed for widows!!
Harshu This was the BESSTTT u have ever written!!

I am just amazed

Beautifully Written

LoveYewww..

TakeCare.. :)


@ bold Really sanju 😳
Thank you so much yrr..
I'm so happy that u liked it..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Beautiful os harshita

Apt for the song
Loved how u choosed ishita as widow
It was hatke
Glad she consider him for chaar kadam of her life
Beautiful it was


Thx dii
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t

Awesome os harshi👏

Loved it❤️
Very unique n different concept.
Raman is a writer n he went to ishu village for his work..
Ishu is a widower..
Raman fell for ishu in first sight..
Poor ishu..she suffered so much bec of her villagers..
Raman brought her back to her chirpy self..
Vilagers were against their love but raman made them understand..
Very beautifully written..
Thanks for d pm dear:)


Thx Valli
Yeah its different concept..
Glad u liked it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
very emotional OS i crreid while reading this
raman was ACP a aged man pleaded raman to help her daughter to get justice his daughter was raped and murdered by MLA"s son raman said he will help him raman gathered the evidence he got many threaten calls but he ignored that MLA"s son got punishment of his deeds MLA threaten raman one day raman got urgent call he asked his fmaily to be careful and left for police station asking guards to be alert he was in his work when he got call ishita was on other line she was screaming for help raman ran to his house he was shocked seeing the scene infornt of his eyes his parents were badly injured even litile ruhi was inured badly ishitas condition was very bad MLA killed his whole family infront of his eyes poor raman MLA was monster good raman killed him
thanks Akku for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional update Di...
Raman fought against MLA to give justice to poor girl..
But MLA avenged him and snatched his entire family..
He lost his family in front of his eyes..
He was shattered ..
He lost his mental balance..
And he is living a painful life..
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: afnu19

Beautiful story dear. .

Raman is working in media and inspired many by his words. .Truly he is a Good citizen with fruitful thoughts. .Here ishu is widow leading a caged life following village customs, untill Raman came changed her life like before was lovely. .
Last scene was suberb liked Raman's talk with sarpanch ..
Pls dear add Epilogue so we could get a glimpse of ishra's life ahead from now..
Thanks for the pm.


Thx dear
Glad u liked it
Will try give epilogue..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: threeta

Wow so amazing update

Ishita is widow
Raman faal in love with her
Wants second part of this story


Thx dear
Will try give epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very emotinal update
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
no no no it's not at all gud itna emotional rula dia...m totally hurt ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very very emotional os Rida di...
I had tears in my eyes... 😭Really very painful...I don't know what to comment di...
No one deserves this kind of punishment...😭😭
Poor ishraruh...
Ishra were leading happy life with their daughter rooh..
Raman is ACP...he was getting threats from mla as he arrested his son...
mla killed raman's family one by one even ruhi also such a heartless people... disgusting😡
Raman tried very hard to save them...but he failed to save them..he was all alone he got shock of his life... loosing his whole family..he miss his family a lot...he curses himself...😭

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