#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29

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jaanishra

@jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#321

Lovely story...

Loved raman's dedication to win ishita...

He was ready to face anyone and at last freed all the girls who were suffering like ishita..

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Shivaani Kashyup

@Shivaani009

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Posted: 7 years ago

#322

Such a beautiful story with a very nice concept..
Really good thought...
U really done good job by using this song with this concept..
Loved every bit of it..
Raman helps ishu & make her a old chirpy girl .
Finally their love won..
Can we get an epilogue on this..😉

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Halidha

@afnu19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#323

Beautiful story dear. .

Raman is working in media and inspired many by his words. .Truly he is a Good citizen with fruitful thoughts. .Here ishu is widow leading a caged life following village customs, untill Raman came changed her life like before was lovely. .

Last scene was suberb liked Raman's talk with sarpanch ..

Pls dear add Epilogue so we could get a glimpse of ishra's life ahead from now..

Thanks for the pm.

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threeta

@threeta

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Posted: 7 years ago

#324

Wow so amazing update

Ishita is widow

Raman faal in love with her

Wants second part of this story

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arooshi

@arooshee

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#325

Very nice...Os on a special social topic...

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sweetdivya24

@sweetdivya24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#326

Beautiful os

Loved it

Raman fall for ishu who is widow..

He became successful in bringing old chirpy ishu back..

He proposed her she became happy n accepted..

Raman made villagers understand who were guilty of their act

Well written..

Edited by sweetdivya24 - 7 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#327

this os is so different.nice theme.Raman the journalist falling in love with the widow ishita.because of raman ishita enjoyed after a long time.nice.sweet song.confession part was nice.so cruel of the villagers to try to kill them.luckily mihir brought cops.like raman said it's not a girl's mistake if her husband dies. good that the sarpanch too realised his mistake.last ishra scene was cute

Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago