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Hi Di,
Welcome back!! Hope you're doing great... I have read your stories on Ishra based on yhm post leap and was pretty impressed and so with this too... I haven't read this story before so read all the parts in one go... The story has been so far engrossing,enthralling and entertaining...
As always Ishra relationship starts with misunderstandings and their nok- jhoks are very amusing... Ishita's character doesn't digress much from the show i.e, she is generous, affectionate, caring and a sweetheart for all, except for Raman, in his case she becomes JKR...
I was taken back by the depth of emotions you portrayed through Raman's character... A blend of sweetness and sourness, a mix of fire and ice, a gush of coldness and warmness makes him standout...He is indifferent towards love because of his undisclosed past and is at crossroads regarding his relationship with Ishita...
The way you nurtured Ishra relationship was commendable.. You didn't hasten their relationship progress but slowly built it over chapters... What all started with scuffles and growls, is now blossomed into friendship but we know its beyond that.. The dance scenes, eye locks , hugs were so vividly described that I could feel them...
However, as always we have Shagun who is going green seeing Ishra relationship.. The way Raman stood for Ishita after the party fiasco was a highlight along with the scene in the tea stall where he wraps her up with his coat to prevent the glares of those devouring eyes surrounding them... However, with the introduction of Ashok and given the determination of Ishita's parents to find a best groom, going forward it will not be an easy trip for Ishra...
Welcome back!! Hope you're doing great... I have read your stories on Ishra based on yhm post leap and was pretty impressed and so with this too... I haven't read this story before so read all the parts in one go... The story has been so far engrossing,enthralling and entertaining...
As always Ishra relationship starts with misunderstandings and their nok- jhoks are very amusing... Ishita's character doesn't digress much from the show i.e, she is generous, affectionate, caring and a sweetheart for all, except for Raman, in his case she becomes JKR...
I was taken back by the depth of emotions you portrayed through Raman's character... A blend of sweetness and sourness, a mix of fire and ice, a gush of coldness and warmness makes him standout...He is indifferent towards love because of his undisclosed past and is at crossroads regarding his relationship with Ishita...
The way you nurtured Ishra relationship was commendable.. You didn't hasten their relationship progress but slowly built it over chapters... What all started with scuffles and growls, is now blossomed into friendship but we know its beyond that.. The dance scenes, eye locks , hugs were so vividly described that I could feel them...
However, as always we have Shagun who is going green seeing Ishra relationship.. The way Raman stood for Ishita after the party fiasco was a highlight along with the scene in the tea stall where he wraps her up with his coat to prevent the glares of those devouring eyes surrounding them... However, with the introduction of Ashok and given the determination of Ishita's parents to find a best groom, going forward it will not be an easy trip for Ishra...
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