Ishra SS : Tujhko Mein Rakhloon Dil Mein last shot pg 81 jan/7 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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hello friends..

majority of you wanted to read this story so thought to give you surprise with this early update... soon i will update kasak dil ki also

i hope you all didnt forgot the background of this story.. so thinking to again give you all a short summary. this story is based on the yhm track of raman memory loss when pihu got kidnapped and ishita was injected with blue coral poison.. but with some changes and addition of twist and turns i hope you all will enjoy reading this story..

enjoy reading

want 150 likes for next update

Tujhko Mein Rakhloon Dil Mein

Shot 1

Ishita searching for pihu worriedly in dark isolated place. She sigh in relief seeing pihu sitting on chair but soon her relief change into worry as she was tied with ropes and looking very pale and weak.. she runs towards pihu and hugs her tightly and mumbles: pihu.. baby open your eyes... you will be fine.. ishimaa will save you.. she was trying to open the ropes but a masked man comes and injects something to ishita making her fall on ground like a dead corpse while her eyes were open...

Other side, raman who was with police searching for pihu got call from home that ishita is missing.. he got more worried.. police officer ask raman to call on ishita number... raman tries the number but got none response...

Police officer ask his team to track the gps of ishita number to locate where she went as he thinks that pihu kidnapping is related with it... soon police trace the location and they reaches the site... raman was searching for ishita and pihu.. his heart was pounding fastly... Pihu who have just got conscious back gets shocked to see her ishimaa laying in front of her.. she shouts: ishimaa...

All got alert listening to pihu scream... raman runs towards the direction of the voice and got shocked to see ishita laying unconscious while pihu tied on chair crying for ishita.. he hugs pihu opens the ropes and says: don't worry pihu.. papa is here na...

Pihu: papa.. see what happen to ishimaa... she was crying

Raman looks at ishita and touches her hand which were too cold.. while her lips were blue.. he takes her in his arms and shouts: lets go to hospital miss ishita need immediate medical attention..

Hospital

Raman was pacing to and fro while bhallas and iyers were too present there.. Aditya and ruhi were crying for their ishimaa while mrs iyer was consoling them... mihika was with pihu who was in other ward to treat her wounds...

Doctor comes out of the icu while raman and other family members goes towards him and start asking questions about ishita health... doc ask them to be silent and says: we have found blue coral poison in miss ishita body thankfully mr bhalla brought her on time or else she wouldnt have survived.. listening to doctor words raman heart skip beat for a moment...

Doctor continues to say: we have given her antidote she will be kept in under observation for next 24 hours probably she will gain her conscious soon.. she need lots of rest and care as this poison will affect her body...saying this he leaves...

Mihika comes and says: jeej... raman bhai.. pihu is not listening to me she is continuously asking for akka... please ap usy aik baar dekh lain.. raman nods and leaves to see pihu...

Adi ruhi hugs mihika and says: chitthi ishimaa will get fine na... mihika nods and says: you both don't worry... she caresses their hairs and prays to god to make ishita alright soon..

After 24 hours

Ishita gains her senses and sees all family standing there worriedly looking at her..while raman and pihu standingin the corner.. ishita opens her arms for pihu and calls her name.. pihu runs towards her and hugs her tightly and cries..

Ishita caresses her hairs and says: betu... stop crying baba... see I am all fine.. kuch nahe hua hai muje...

Raman was not getting why his daughter is so much attach to miss iyer but he kept quiet as he is indebted to miss iyer for saving his daughter life..

Ishita was talking to pihu while adi and ruhi were standing looking at their ishimaa.. ishita sees them and signs them also to come to her.. both goes to her and hugs her.. ishita smiles having her children in her arms.. raman was looking at them unknown to him he start smiling...

Ashok comes and ask worriedly: ishita.. are you fine??? I was worried for you...

Ishita nods her head and says: I am fine...

Ashok smiles and sign something to ishita making her worried but ashok presses his eyes and assure that he will handle everything... raman who was witnessing all this doesn't like the presences of ashok..

He calls pihu and says: I think miss iyer should rest... I will bring pihu tomorrow...

Ishita nods..

Raman and pihu leaves while nurse ask other to leave the room as patient needs rest.. ishita asks for her mobile but nurse strictly denies... ishita pleads and says: just one phone call.. nurse nods and give permission to give mobile to ishita.. mihika gives ishita mobile and other leaves leaving ishita alone in room.. she worriedly dails a number knowing he must be searching for her and missing her.. don't know how he is without her she knows how much he cares for her and doesn't want any danger to her...

On second ring, he takes the call and asks about ishita health... ishita assures him that she is fine and will soon come to meet him and ask him not to call him or ashok as she doesn't want anyone to know about him as she has other plans to introduce him to all.. he agrees and asks her to take care of herself.. ishita nods and cuts the call...

Next day

Ishita was having her soup when raman and pihu comes there holding white lillies bouquet. She smiles widely seeing raman and pihu as she was waiting for them from the morning.. her smiles grew more wider seeing the white lillies as she remembers the beautiful moments of past she and raman shared..

Ishita hugs pihu and says: acha hua pihu tum agayi .. I was feeling so bore...

Mrs iyer: kanna... stop talking and have soup...

Ishita: amma.. its so tasteless... yuck..

Pihu: very bad.. muje kehte ho khana finish karna chahiye aur khud choto baby ki tarhaan behave kar rahy ho... come on finish warna strong kaise hogay.. right papa... pihu looks at raman who smiles and says : right... miss ishita.. finish it...

Ishita smiles and says: ab to poora finish karna parega... she sign mrs iyer to feed her... soon ishita finishes her soup.. doctor comes to check ishita and gets satisfied seeing recovery of ishita..

Ishita: doctor...

Doc: yes miss iyer...

Ishita: please can you discharge me today...

Doc: no miss iyer you are still weak...

Ishita: please I have some important work...

Mrs iyer: kanna kaisa kaam...

Ishita: kahin jana hai amma.. please doc I will take care of myself properly...

Raman was listening to ishita conversation with doctor and was not getting why ishita want to discharge today only... he badly wanted to shut her up and tell her to lay on bed and rest till doctor says but he doesn't have any right on her...

Finally after many arguments doctor agrees... ishita asks mrs iyer to leaves as she will return home at her own.. mrs iyer tries to reason but seeing the stubbornness of her daughter she keeps quiet and leaves..raman looks at ishita and says: where you want to go.. I will drop you... apka akele jana safe nahe hai...

Ishita: you don't worry mr bhalla... ashok is coming to pick up... ap ja sakty hain...

Listening to ashok name his blood boils he sternly looks at ishita and holds pihu hand and walks out.. ishita smiles seeing her jallu ravan kumar and smiles and says: aww mera ravan kumar jal raha hai.. but kiya karon mein... I too want to come with you raman but wahan jana bhi zaroori hai...Ashok comes there and both leaves for their destination.

Bhalla house

Raman was sitting in his room thinking about past days from when ishita has entered in his life... he was not getting what he is feeling nowadays... his chain of thought breaks as his phone rings.. he takes the calls and greets the police office.

Police: mr bhalla we have investigated whole matter and we think that kidnapper wanted to harm miss ishita and he only used pihu to get hold of ishita.. I am afraid that he will again try to harm miss ishita again...

Raman: but why he will use pihu? Pihu aur ishita kiya connection hai...

Police: ye to nahe pata.. you don't worry we will caught the kidnapper soon.. but I want to ask something from you

Raman: sure

Police: we want to fix camera in the corridor of your apartment ..

Raman: we have security camera in our apartment

Police: kidnapper can get easily hold of them by bribing.. I want to install secret camera there.. it will be for your family and miss ishita safety..

Raman: okay... apko ja karna hai karain but I want that kidnapper...

Police nods and cuts the call..

That's it my dear friends I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response don't forget to hit like also...

Love you

riddi

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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Nice start
Thank you for the pm and update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Awesome starting dii
Who is this mystery person?
Update soon dii
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Awesome chappy Di
Update soon Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di
Update soon Di



Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Loved the start.
Who is the person?
Ishu's baby?
To much confusion.
Update soon.
Tq for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Interesting updt di
Totally loved it so much
Who is the mystery person in call?? Is ishra baby???Raman is jealous hearing Ashok name. Police calls Raman and suggest him to keep an secret camera in their flat to catch real kidnapper.
Thanx for the pm
Eagerly waiting for an early updt
Plz updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Awesome superb lovely nice update dear
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Superb update
Ishu attacked
Raman jealous
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Nice update dii...Update soon and thanks for pm

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