Ishra OS - Dil kyun ye mera shor kare,epilogue on pg 9 on 6 /1

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divz9769

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Beautiful os

Raman slapped ishita when she told him she is his wife ishita was broken simmi smirked ishita ran to her room raman shurged simmis hand and went to his room he was regretting slapping ishita he banged his hand his hand got injured Simmi and toshiji came to him hearing noise raman asked them to e

leave he tried to remember his past but was not able to he goggled and was shocked seeing his spouse name ishita bhalla and seeing photo he got sure she is same ishita he took adress from simmi of pihus school he didn't gave damn to simmi ishra scene was emotional and nice

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Akanksha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Great os dii

Happy new year

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Dhristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Happy New Year n awesome part n hope ishra ll became one soon n waiting for ur take on next part n please update soon

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sweetdivya24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Happy New Year didu...

Superb os

Loved it

Raman feeling restless after slapping ishita

Ishita shattered n crying uncontrollably

Raman googled n came to know the truth ishita being his wife

N adi ruhi his family

He brought pihu to meet ishu

Ishita too happy to meet pihu

Raman apologised for his behaviour n ask her to come to bhalla house

Ishu taking into consideration his state agreed

Loved it didu well written ...

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arooshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Happy New Year...

May 2018 give you all what you desire...

Stay healthy and Blessed...

Thank you so much for writing something for me...

I just loved your gesture...Thanks a lot dear for considering my request...

Coming to the Os...It was a wonderful piece...

Ya I was frustrated with Raman's attitude...But You wrote it beautifully...Ending it on a positive note...Yet reminding Raman is always influenced by his family..

Liked the way ishita was reluctant to go with raman and reminded Raman that he is always a puppet of simmi ma...

Raman wanted to slap simmi and ignored simmi and toshhiji...And bring pihu to meet ishita was a nice move... Atleast he is trying to redeem himself...And also he wants to move out with ishita...That's also nice on his part...

Overall a very good os apt for Raman ISHITA situation...

Thank you once again...

Its indeed a special happy new year gift for me...

May we witness and able to read lot many wonderful stories from you in this 2018...

Continue writing...I just love your writing...You are one of the BESTEST WRITERS in this forum...

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sanjana_nanda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Awesome Os..

Loved it

Thank you for the pm

Happy new year di

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nafnaf

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

A superb OS!!
Kaash aessei show mein hota!!!!
It was good to see his regret of slapping her!!
And when he punished his hand ( I was so hoping this would happen in the show)
Finally he used his common sense and googled his profile!!!!
(I don't know why he doesn't do that on the show?!?!?)
Loved it when he brought Pihu to Ishita!!!
IshPi scene was beautiful!!!
Loved the way he manofies Ishita!!!
He confesses that he may not remember his old love but he has fallen in love with her all over again - aaawww so sweet!!!
She cannot resist for too long - she just loves him so much!!!

Pooja please please continue soon!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

Thank you so much for your wishes!!
A very happy New Year to you too!!
May you and your family be blessed always with good health, happiness and prosperity!!

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Vijaya Priyadarshini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Superb
Fab
Loved it
Awesome

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swathin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Superb update
Raman remembering ishu
Loved it

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shavetamehta32

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous incredible super se bhi uper brilliantly written beautiful I liked the story very much plzzz update soon next part waiting for the next update. update soon