Ineffable Love - IshRa Short Story (Chapter One b - Page Two)

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I'm trying to write a story that hasn't yet been attempted by writers here and I hope that I get your much needed support and motivation to encourage me to keep writing further. Without further ado, this story is the journey of a widowed Ishita who is a single mother to her five your old son Aditya.

Ishita who is scarred by the atrocities subjected to her by her ex mother in law and sister in law, fears accepting Raman's marriage proposal because she believes that history will repeat itself.

I sincerely hope that my readers give me a thumbs up because I LOVE writing and I really want to find my audience. Thank you ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter One - Page One
Chapter One (b) - Page Two
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Chapter One

Ishita went about running her regular errands as her thoughts lead her to think about what had lead her to where she was.

It had become unbearable for Ishita to stay a moment longer in a house where she was insulted day and night. It was only for the sake of her husband that she wouldn't speak up. Ishita knew that more than her, it was Karan who was breaking from within. Every day, Ishita would wear a fake smile on her face to reassure Karan that she was brave enough to tolerate the abuse of her step mother and sister in law.

There were so many moments when Ishita felt that Karan and she should just leave everything behind and begin a world of their own but all her hopes would come crushing down the moment she realised it was not possible. Karan was not the biological child of Santosh Sharma and she always reminded him that it was not out of love or even maternal instinct but sheer greed and selfishness to usurp Karan's father's wealth that she had to put up with him. Every week, since he had begun working Santosh Bhalla and Simmi took money from him merely to splurge.

Till Om Prakash was alive, Santosh Sharma posed as an ideal mother but the moment he passed away, the cruel woman took away all the money that Karan's father had saved up for his son's education and humiliated Karan for the meagre amount he would rarely spend on books and other necessities.

Santosh's hatred for Karan intensified the day he got married to Ishita and from then on everything went downhill.

Ishita was a middle class girl who studied at the same institute as Karan. The duo got to know each other as they were chosen by their lecturer to work on the same topic for a presentation. Other than discussing work, Karan and Ishita talked about their lives to each other and in Ishita, Karan found comfort and solace. It was then that he decided he would marry her. It was a decision that Karan took without realising that he is ought to tell Ishita about his demanding and obnoxious step mother and sister.

That's exactly what Ishita held against Karan and would never forgive him for.

Ishita snapped out of her thoughts as her little son ran to her asking to do his tie and quickly give his breakfast.

Ishita dropped Aditya, her five years old to school and drove off to work. She walked into her cabin as her Secretary told her about a woman whose mother in law tried to get her son to divorce her because she only gave birth to daughters. Ishita rolled her eyes at the matter and went ahead to discuss the case with the client. She assured Narmada, a seemingly educated and modern woman that she would get her justice.

It was soon time for her to collect Adi from school so she wrapped up her work and head out for school. Adi was standing at the gate impatiently waiting for his mother but faked anger as he finally saw her coming to him. ishita picked up her tiny tot in her arms and gave him a kiss on his cheek. She felt so much solace as she held her little one close to her heart. His anger melted in seconds and he was quick to ask his Mama out on a ice cream date. Ishita doted on Adi and never refused him any material pleasure because she just couldn't see the only person in her life unhappy. It especially didn't matter if his teeth would get cavities on them! What were the dentists for after all? 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meghna_IshRa

Looking forward to it:)


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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seems interesting..
dont know why the last line made me think if Raman was a dentist indeed...:P
it wud be fun that way ..but looking fwd to see how u have planned this story!!


PS: would u mind sending Pms for this story?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

seems interesting..

dont know why the last line made me think if Raman was a dentist indeed...:P
it wud be fun that way ..but looking fwd to see how u have planned this story!!


PS: would u mind sending Pms for this story?


I'll surely PM you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start.
Felt bad for ishita ,she is living a terrible life .
Hope you continue this .
Update next soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divanru

Nice start.

Felt bad for ishita ,she is living a terrible life .
Hope you continue this .
Update next soon


Good to know that you liked the write up Pooja 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seems different and interesting. Lengthy update will do more good.congrats and all the best
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade...

Seems different and interesting. Lengthy update will do more good.congrats and all the best


I knew that the length would pose as a problem. Thank you 😃
Edited by UmeraTariq - 7 years ago

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