Her Insecurities(Part 2|Pg 12|Jan 11; Teaser|Pg 18|Jan 17) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: manuishra

Congratulations for the new story

Ishra married nd she is not taking to him continue soon as possible and thank you for the


Tq so much.
Will soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sweetdivya24

Beautiful prologue

Bit confusing
Ishra married n ishu not talking to him
She's infertile from beginning or just came to know??
Continue soon
N haan congrats for new story.


Tq.
Glad you like it.
I think next part will clear all.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: divz9769

congratulations for new story

nice prologue
ishra are married from last 3 months they were happy in their life but suddenly from 2 days ishita have stopped talking with raman poor raman he is hurt with her behavior who have taunted ishita
pls update soon
thanks for the PM


Tq.
Hmm hurt by her but she isbt in that state.
Will soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: harshiidiv

Nice prologue..
Continue soon..


Tq; will soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Rarupatel

Awesome update

Who said all these words to ishu
Raman is missing jkr in her
Update soon
Thanks for pm


Tq.
Wait for nest to be clear.
Hmmm bichara raman.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Priyanka7080

Congratulations for new story dear
interesting prologue
Update soon
Thanks for pm


Thank you.
Will soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: akriti154

Brilliant prologue gia
luvd it
so start it soon
congrats fr d new story


Tq Di.
Will soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Part 1

Ishita looked at the lovey-dovey couple infront of her in park. She dropped Ruhi to school but couldnt move to clinic as her mind is really not focused. The boy teased the girl saying she is turning fat and she just pouted. And the boy began to manofy her. She left the long breath releasing which she didnt even realise was holding. Raman also used to tease her and she would pout making him manofy her. But nowadays those simple taut also feel like sharp knife. She dont know what happened to her optimistic side; she really dont. She looked at the small family infront of her making her smile. She; Raman and Ruhi also used to come to picnic and be happy. She sighed deeply whispering "At least I thought before that day."
*
1 week 3 days ago
"Shhh Raman" she cried looking at the giggling drunk man "koi jaag jayega."
He nodded his head cutely putting his finger in his lips. She shook her head feeling his vibrating shoulder signaling he is still giggling in the dark. She finally shut the bedroom door and he lied on the bed. Ishita pulled his shoes out mumbling some crushes on her native language. She was pulling the cover over him while he just rolled pulling her to him. Ishita didnt even realise what happned. One moment she was pulling the seets and next Raman was over her looking at her with those intense intonxicating eyes.
"Tumhari baal kitne soft-soft hai." he said playing with her hair. His hand slowly slipped downard caressing everywhere where his face perfectly fitted her neck and teeth nibbled her soft skin.
"Rrraaammmaaann" she moaned loudly not being able to control his assult in her virgin body. Raman moved his head above her showing his 1 day stubbles and gave a sweet smile. He kissed her forehead softly and the kiss trailed down while Ishita could do was just enjoy. She felt his kiss lingering near her lips little longer so looked towards him but saw his closed eyes. She pushed him and watched him with open mouth. She turned the light off and slept hugging him tightly muttering "Ravan Kumar" with a sweet smile.
*
Ishita felt some moment beside her and peek from one eye. Seeing him waking she closed her eyes thinking of watching his reaction.
"Kya karte hai Raman tu."
"Control yourself Raman. Pata nai sarab pite hai what happens to you."
"Madrasaan seriously nalele."
And she heard his footsteps and closing of the bathroom door. She quickly open her teary eyes. She has expected him teasing her; sweetly tauting her but never this.
What did he mean by I will take it seriously? Kya wo sab kuch mahine nahi rakta? Was it only because he was drunk? He said he couldnt control him as he was drunk. Agar usski jaga koi bhi hoti tho it wouldnt have mattered? After spending these all three month actually it didnt mattered him. Kya ab bhi its all is sirf Ruhi ke liye?
Thoughts just came in her mind with so flow she didnt even get time to think back about it and she just moved from there to Ruhi to forget it atleast for some moment.
*
Present
Ishita moved to towards her car. She really dont know what Raman has done to her. She never felt that intense pain when Subbu rejected her; when society mocked her and his few lines broke her self-esteem. She really dont know whom shew should blame. Him for those lines; or hereself for being this insecurities. Kya galti sirf uski insecutities ki hai ya uski approach ki?. She really will never understood it because she didnt thought it for once. As her sole focus was on Raman; that Raman who was her husband; with whom she used to fight; with whom she used to flirt; with whom she fell in love; with whose who ride horse with sword on her hand; with whom she turns into a feisty; childish; carefree Ishita from a shy; mature and understanding lady and now who make her feel insecure.


Finally updated 1st part.
Sooo how was it?(bitting nails) Really expecting good response from you all*puppy eyes*. Need good response as I updated part really fast. So pls pls pls do response*puppy eyes*.

@ananyagupta : Hi sweatheart. You should really be less sweet *pout* taki mai kabhi apko no bhi ke saku. Aap ki wajase maine do baar update kiya(I lost the first update 😭. ). What to do wasnt able to deny you. So need your looonnggg comment.

Love you all ❤️;
Gia


AND HAAAPPPYYY NNNEEEWWW YYYEEEAAARRR
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Unres soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Awesome prilogue dear
Eagerly waiting for the update
Update soonish
Thank u for pm

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