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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi!
I m back again. This time with a OS.
Based on the current track. You all may have gotten the idea of the story from the title.
No suspense; no planning plotting; but a simple story.
Well different from my usual style so lets just pray.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Deja Vu



He stood still in his place when he heard his employees talking.
"Mujhe lagta hai maine apko kahi dekha hai" said one the male employee.
"Lagta hai; apko koi dejavu hua hai." the new female employee said leaving.
"Dejavu tho pata nai par dil me kuch kuch ho raha hai." he said loudly making sure that she heard. And turning to his friend he asked; "Yaar ye devaju kya hota hai?" making all laugh out lould.
Raman slightly laugh listenling it and headed to his office; after finally being sure that it was his cabin. Dont know why but he was not able to remember lots of things. He settle in his chair finally getting rid of those thoughts.
*
He look at Miss Ishita who was engrossed on her laptop typing sth. He saw the a naughty strand of hair blocking his hand. He was about to strech his hand when she put it in the messy bun she had made. He felt his heart crying not again and mind shouting again missed the chance znd he look at his file.
*
He tried to call Miss Ishita for some reason.
"Mi..." his voice trailed off like his tongue isnt used to call her that. He again tried calling her but just "Ishita" came out from his mouth. He dont know why but he knew not any strange look but a sweet smile will be served to him by those rosy lips and they did. He dont know what it was but it was strange almost like a deja vu...
*
He looked at Miss Ishita who was sitting in the passenger seat on his broken car looking at the rain. He dont know why but he move out of the car and poened her door. Like he knew she will pass her hand he took her hand. They laughed; they twriled; they smiled in the rain. He dont if it was dejavu or not but he felt a song ringing in his mind. She leaned towards him and so did he. Their forhead just touched and so were their lips to do but he turned one side. He had felt like someone will press a horn but noone did and his cheek felt some hot sensation. He had felt she will pull out but she stayed their gigling softly.
He didnt know if it already happened or not; he didnt know if it will happen in future or not but it was happening now and he put his hand around her waist enjoying it.
Damn the dejavu; he has her on his arm and he enjoyed it to fullest.

Deja Vu = a feeling of having already experienced the present situation

I know it isnt that nice and not a very new concept. But pls do response and no blashing pls. My first OS so little nervouse little excited.
Will be waiting for the response.

Love you all;
Gia
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os dear...
Congrats on ur first os Gia..
I m loving this deja Vu...
Raman don't remember anything but he feels all t his events in his life happened before...
Raman thinks he saw ishu somewhere...
He don't like Calling miss Ishita he calls ishita...
He loves her smile...our new lover boy... deeply in love with miss Ishita...
Loved their dance in rain...it's like most natural thing for him...afterall they lived this moment before also..
He was really enjoying deja Vu...
Ishita was also enjoying dancing with him..
Do write such os...
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice os
Loved the deja Vu😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one dear
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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a good os dear
write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os!!
Loved it.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for ur first os...
Loved it..
Firstly I got confused with name dejavu..
Awesome update..
Its short but I like it.
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Was it your first os?
You wrote love?? before this hai na.
It was short and nice gia .
Lovely .
Waiting for more from you .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow no words to explain dear
Just fabulous

Why can't CVS try this instead of ugly drama

Really I love it so much

Brilliant written up filled with pure love

Never seem like your first os dear 👏👏👏

Please write more

I am more greedy
Edited by maduragymhasium - 7 years ago

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