Ishra 'Main Hun Saath Tere' shot 5 page 27 on 4/12

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Hello my dear friends...

I know.. I know that you are thinking "this girl is again here with a new story when she has to complete her almost every stories.. " but friends i cant stoo myself from updating this story.. Sorry for that han.. This story has only 4 parts.. and i had finished almost the 4 part... I will update every parts without much distence...

I have only one request to do guys please do read and if you like it then please please please give me separate comments for each parts...



**Main**

****Hun***

******Saath***

*******Tere*****


Shot 1 - page 1


Shot 2 - page 1


Shot - 3

Shot - 4




Shot - 5



Thank u friends
With love
Anju

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Main Hun Saath Tere



Shot 1


"she closed her eyes lost in his melodious voice..how much she loves to hear him in every morning...this is the only thing she loves to do while driving..she always get lost in his voice...she met him at once in his her life after nany years...she so wanted to hear those beautifull sulfi songs from his mouth in her entire life...suddenly her trance broke by someone others voice who actually changed the channel of fm...

"kya yar ishu..there is many more singers who beautifully sings but you always want to hear this sulfi songs of yours...kabhi bhi bore nahi hothi kya tu..? mihika complaints to her while switching off the fm..

" hey miku dont switch off that..i want to hear..."she again switch on the fm

mihika: ithna bhi kya special hai yar iss sulfi song mein...agar kuch der aur main yeh suni na tho pakka mein so jaungi..

ishita: chup kar tu..duffer pehale dyan legake sun tho lo..kithna accha leg reha hai sunne mein

mihika:sunne mein yah phir dekhne mein?

ishita: what you mean?

mihika: oh hello dont get surprised...i doubt you..tum songs se love karthe ho yah phir songs gane wale se..han

ishita: ohh over smartness ki dukkan..iss ishita ko kisi se ishq hoga na thab Aazmann barish gira denge...its just that ki i love his voice..nahi tho bhad mein jaye woh...

mihika: han han dekhthe hai..waise bhi mausam barish ka hi hai..

ishita: ha ha ha very funny...

mihika: accha pehale yeh bolo tune programme keliye prepare kiya ki nahi

ishita: kya preparations yar..jo patha hai ussika answer dunga thats it

mihika: ishuuu..amithab bachanji ke saamne baitnevwali ho tum kuch tho knowledge honi chahiye na..aur tujhe patha haina orphanage keliye woh paise kithne kaam ayenge

ishita:tu tension math le darling..kaun banega Crorepati mein na woh kaun main hi banunga..

mihika: confidents accha hai

ishita: haina..tho ab thu chup kar hume waqth pe pohochna hai wahan...saying she drove fast...

ishita iyer a girl in her mid twenties, a social activist, love to everything whatever she like, an open minded girl, Today she is going to attend the famous game show kaun banega crorepati.. Yes she was trying to participate from long and today is the she got chance to show her talent.. Her best friend mihika is also with her...

soon both the ladied reached on their destination.. Settling mihika comfortably between the audience ishita gets ready to attend the quick question which will take her to the main chair... like god was in her favour today she got the first chance to sat on the big chair.. Both mihika and ishita were too happy.. Because for them the purpose of this game show is life for many kids.. Yes they are going to use the winning amout for an orphanage which badly needs money for survival...

soon our big b of our bollywood Mr.Amithab bachan welcomed her tovthe stage..After asking about herself to her he starts the game show with the very first question..And it was a easy question for her..She got 1000 rupees for her answer...And soon she faced many more questions and reached the amount of Rupees 50,00000...it was a happy moment for mihika and ishita..mihika was really proud for her best friend...

soon the host put the last and final question to her..Which will make her crorepati..Tull now she was playing cool so mihika thought she will be tensed at the last question..But our girl was least cared about it..Because she has one more lifeline which she kept for her final battle..

She uses "Phone-a-Friend" lifeline,and the host give her three persons to choose which is given by her..Mihika was surprised to see the options because she was not especting the name of ishitas favorite sulfi singer there..Mr.Raman bhalla...Without thinking for an another name ishita choose to call raman... and the host calls Raman to help her answer the last question which was based On sulfi singers,..

Raman kumar bhalla..A boy in his mid twenties..Loves to sing sulfi songs and working as a sulfi singer on Fm channels..He is an orphan..His parents died during an accident when he was 19..from there he was living his life alone...

when the phone buzzed inside his pocket he was getting ready to go to his work..He was little surprised by seeing an unknown number on his phone..Pressing the answer button he attend the call and the bollywood star amithab bachan gave him his intro..He was happily surprised..Wishing him good morning he asked about the purpose..Thats when he heard that one girl named ishita is participating in crorepati competeion and now she reached to the last question..As a helpline she choose to call him..Raman was confused thinking why this girl choosed him..He dont know her even he was hearing her nane for the first time...

he was thinking when he heard her voice which is asking question to fet the answer..Keeping his confusions a side he listened her and tried to answer her..Mihika was very tensed seeing the helpline getting late but ishita was sitting their making a cool face..Atlast when the time reached at the last second he give an answer to her..But before she could confirm it the call got disconnected...

ishita look at mihika and she nodded her head negatively to dont go with ramans answer..But ishita choose to go with him and the answer got locked..It was a hell tensed situation for mihika..ishita was trying hard to sat there without any tension..But the host's unwanted presuring made her little tensed...She closed her eyes to face the result..And the host announced her as crorepati...Thats it mihika jumbed out from her place and runs to ishita..Both the girls shared their happiness by hugging each other...

it was after winning the programme ishita and mihika left ti home after conpleting the formalities..Both are really happy so ishita offered a treat with shopping to mihika in mall..Mihika waa very excited for her shopping...

" waise ishu that sulfi singer of yours was intelligent.." mihika said while selecting sone dresses..

ishita:oh hello it was not him its me whobis intelligent..Akhir usse poochne ka decision meri thi..

mihika: agar woh galt jawab diya hotha thi?

ishita: buddhu..the question was about sulfi singers..So sahir si baath hai usse patha hona hi tha..

mihika: not bad madam...They were talking when ishitas eyes got attention of someone who was passing through infront of them..Ishita was quicj enough to regonise him..it was raman who comes for a small purchase for himself..

seeing him there ishitas mind peepped out with some naughtiness and she runs behind him picking a rose from the near by table..Mihika looked at her all confused and at the next monent she too runs behind him...

" hey..Stop..." hearing a girly voice raman stops there and turns to back only to find a girl coming to him running..At first he got confused thinking she was calling hin or not but soon his confusion got cleared when she stood just few inch away from him..

" Me.." he asked pointing towards himself still getting confused for which ishita nodded her head positively panting hard..

raman: excuse me..he tried to ask the matter but before that she forwards the rose to him then said...

ishita:I love you...That's it raman left there fully open mouthed while ishita gave him rose and with the trance he forwards his hand to take the rose but at the next second she pressed the rose and water splits on his face making him caugh..Laughing at his funny face she runs from there after giving a wink to him...When he come out from his trance she was allready gone from there...but got embarressed seeing the people laughing at his state...mihika was hell shocked with ishitas action..

" ishuuu..What was that..You told me that you dont have any feeling for him then what was that?..you just proposed them in public..Ayyo murugan kisi ne appa amma ko khabar di tho...Soch ke bhi dar leg rehi hai...Mihika was scolding her by running behind her but ishita was least interested to hear her...Without minding her words ishita get in to the car then said..

" dont take me serious yar..that was just for fun"..

mihika: its not funny ishu...You should say sorry to him

ishita: dont be spoil spot miku..Like me he will also take it as a fun..You know life mein entertainment honi chahiye

mihika: aur nahi liya tho

ishita: tho kya?..kuch din aur bewakoof banalenge usse...Now shut up and come...

mihika: tu nahi sudhregi ishu...


I HOPE GUYS IT WAS GOOD..PLEASE SHARE YOUR VIEWS FRIENDS..

LOVE
ANJU

Edited by Muskan193 - 7 years ago
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Main Hun Saath Tere



shot 2


it was after 4 days from the mall incident..Raman was watching tv on his home thats when he see kaun banega crorepati telecasr..It was exact the episode which ishita participated...Raman was amused to know the girl who called him for help is the same girl who said i love u to him in the mall..

" ishita iyer.." he whispered reading her name on the tv..With the intro of her he got some common details about her..." hmmm i think it will be interesting to meet her..after all i love u jo bola tha mujhe..Mirchi leg rehi hai ledki...but now raman bhalla won't leave you...Baby...He smirked seeing her on tv..

from that day raman starts to Search for her but he never got any news of her..1month passed like this it was mihikas wedding day..She is going to marry her collegemate Mr.Mihir arora who is a very nice friend of ishita too..But unknown to them Mihir's best friend was Raman..Mihika dont know about this but ishita knows it from long..Actually ishita was lieing to mihika that she dont have any feelings for him..On that day at the mall she really want to tell him everything but she thought to fool raman for some days just for fun..And she verywell knows that from 1 month raman was trying to search her..But she purposly hide herself from him thinking the time is yet to come...

ishita was sure that raman will be here on mimi marriage and she was waiting for his entry and soon her wait got over..He entered inside the wedding hall making her smile fully...mihika was surprised seeing him there but when she gets know that he is mihirs best friend mihika looked at ishita ans see her smiling fully..Mihika somehow assumed the matter and went to talk to her...Meantime raman just see a glimpse of her and tried to caught her but mihir stopped him..Atlast he asked mihir about ishita and he told that she is mihikas friend...

excusing himself from mihir raman went to search ishita..But at the way he stops hearing some noise..It was mihika who was questioning ishita about raman..

mihika: so you lied to me..Why ishu?..tumhe patha tha ki raman mihir ka dost hai..Phir mujhe kyun nahi bathaya tumne..You allready fooled him at the mall then when i said to go and say sorry to him you told that was just for fun...and to get entertained.. But now i dont think so ishu...

raman(st): ohhh so mis.Ishita iyer made fun of me infront of many people just because she want to get entertain...Teek hai as you wish mis.Iyer..i will make you entertain today..That too infront of your family...Saying he left from there without hearing ishitas answer...Ishita told mihika about her and said sorry to her for hiding it..

after sort outing the things ishmi comes back to mihir..It was there wedding time..The panditji called them for the pooja and soon the marriage rituals started..between this raman was looking at her only to get a good chance make his plan work...Soon the marriage got finished and the family made mimi sat on the stage...All were giving sweets to mimi when thry heard someone singing...It was raman who was all ready to break the floor

Raman : Ouhh ankhan de katore surma batore
lagde chhichhore bade hi fi
Dil pe daraati saade chal jaati
Maare dil gulati pucche why why

Ouhh ankhan de katore surma batore
Lagde chhichhore bade hi fi
Dil pe daraati saade chal jaati
Maare dil gulati pucche why why

Chai mein dooba biscut ho gaya

Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya

seeing hin dancing looking at her she tied her dupatta around her waist and comes to the floor pushing him away..


Ishita : Hat re nigode neem ke pakode
Picchha kyon na chhode ghume dayein bayein
Tujhko sudharoon jutti main utaroon
Sar pe de maroon tere dhayein dhayein

Romeo bina permit ho gaya

Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya


Baalon ko main set kitta gel mal ke
Chaati chaudi dolle sholle dand pel ke
Kudiya haraya tune chaal chal ke
Baaton waali baskit ball khel ke

Gel vel dekh chhori patdi nahin
Dolon se umar saari katdi nahin
Khoob pehchanoon tere dil mein hai kya
Fitrat chhoron ki palatdi nahin

Gudh dekha makhi jaisa fit ho gaya

Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya

Ohh mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi

Mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi ainvayi

Ohh mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi

Mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi Lut gaya

Kyon meri galli mein aake wait karda
Harkatein down market karda
Dekhoon jo hatake khidki ka parda
Sitti vitti maar irrirate karda

Chhad attitude kabhi maan kudiye
Blank cheque de doon ya te jaan kudiye
Eentey ka yeh dil kar naram zara
Dekh le yeh gabru jawan kudiye
Chhe fut se dedh fut ho gaya

Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya

all were dancing lost in the song.. Ishita and raman are dancing on the middle..Suddenly raman hold ishitas hand and before she can understand anything he pressed his lips on her making everyone shocked...Ishitas eyes got widened and she tried to push him by her soft palms but his hold was enough strong to stop her..Mimi were left open mouthed with ramans act..All wrre stood there like still..Atlast after sometime raman leaves her and looks at her face...He see a glint of tears in her eyes which made him realise what he did was wrong..Before he can compose himself ishita pushed him and runs from there...

after she went appa clutched on ramans collor slapping him hard.." how dare you to do that with my daughter..You basted..." he was about hit him again but mihir stops him saying give raman a chance to explain...Raman told everything to then why he did this..But mihir made hin understand that what he did was wrong after all she is girl and evryone mock her...Raman asked forgiveness from everyone and went to say sorry to ishita...

soon raman went to meet her while mimi managed everyone in the hall..raman was searching for ishita but she was nowhere to seen atlast he went to check her on the terrace and find her sitting there with a gun..Actually she was throwing her anger on the baloons by shooting then..Raman smiled a little seeing her jkr avatar..And called her name..

" ishi.."thats it before he could complete his words he find himself on her gun point..He quickly put his both hands upward like surredering to her...

" kyun dar geye Mr.Rk..Urf Ravan Kumar.." she said placing the gun point on his heart..

raman: Ishq...A whisper comes out from his mouth realising the girl standing infront of him was his best friend in childhood...

" ohhh tho yad hun tujhe mein..?

raman: ofcorse yar..Kaise bhool saktha hun tujhe..I searched you a lottt..Saying he leaned forwards to her but she pressed the again on him saying to stand like that only..

raman: yar ab goli maregi kya mujhe...its me your ravan kumar...Omg tujhe kaise nahi pehachana main...Shit

ishita: i know..Thab bhi tu ravan tha..Aur ab bhi ravan hai...

raman: tu bhi tho waisi ki waisi tho hai..Jkr..my madrasan

ishita: dont you dare to call me that...

raman: oops sorry mad madrasan..Is it ok

ishita: shut up...She again pressed the gun but with in span of time raman pulled the gun along with her and locked her in his arms by her back." ab samajh mein aya ki tujhe ithnj akkad kyun thi...Mall mein mera mazak utake bhaag geyi aur bhi mujhse chup chupke mujhe bewakoof banathi rehi...You will never change jkr.."

ishita: han tho tu bhi tho nahi badla..Sab ke saamne kiss kiya mujhe...Duffer...

raman: offsorse kis baath ki hai madam..Sabke saamne kiss kiya ya phir chotta pad geya..Han

" idiot..I will kill you.."

raman: you are always welcome my mad madrasan...Saying both laughed aloud...

raman: waise kahan thi tu ithne salo mein...Lendon se kab wapas ageyi..And yeh social activist and all...From when?

ishita: lembi kahani hai baath mein batha dunga...Tu batha akhir tumne apni singing kohigh level thak pohocha hi diya..Han

raman: kya level..Bas fm mein sulfi songs gatha hun..

ishita: i know..I always hear your programme..

raman: phir bhi tu mujhe milne nahi ayi..

ishita:kyun ? tu bhi tho mujhe milbe nahi aya tha

raman: teri address dhodi na patha tha mujhe

ishita: ohh sir..Boarding school mein padthe the hum koyi jangal mein nahi jo tujhe meri address na mile...Acvha chod what about your family..Uncle aunty kaha hai...

raman:maa papa is no more...Accident tha

ishita: oh i m sorry..Accha ab yeh sab chodo aur batha koyi girl friend hai ki nahi teri...She asked expecting a big no from him but he said yes to her making her face fell

raman:hai koyi

ishita:kaun? she asked in her low voice..

raman:dikhaun yah bathaun? he asked testing her patience

ishita: dikhao...

raman slowly takes his wallet from his pocket and took out a photo and showed to her...She was happily surprised to see their school photo in which ishita and raman standing together as ram and seeta..(it was a photo from a drama which they did in their school time...)

raman: iss pagal ledki hai meri girlfriend...Koyi aur ab thak mila hi nahi..You know mere takkar ka...

ishitas eyes were teary seeing the photi and she was unable to believe that he still had her photo with him...Not only that.. He also loves her like she do...

at down stairs all waiting for ishra too come down..As they want to see ishita is ok or not...Soon they see ishra coming down..All looked at them when ishita went to her appa amma and said holding both their hands..

" appa..Amma..I m sorry...I love raman"...she declared making everyone shocked...

appa: what are you saying ishu? is he threatened you?

ishita: no appa..I really love him..No one forced me.. i know raman from years appa..

she tried to explain calmly but appa was not ready to accept..Seeing this raman too comes forward and asked ishitas hand for marriage..Atlast mihir too assured them that raman is a very good boy and he will take care of their daughter like they do...Finally everyone agreed for their marriage...

it was ishras marriage day..Ishita was all decked up in a blood red lehanga..While raman was wearing a cream and maroon sharwani..Raman was just got lost seeing his girl looking very beautifull for him.. soon the rituals started and they took the scared vowes around holly fire after that raman made her wear the mangal sutra and filled her partion with lots of sindhoor claiming that she is now belongs him only...Soon ishra got married happily with the blessings of ishitas parents and both the couple mimi and ishra left for their honeymoon to shimla...

it was very cold weather in shimla both the girls starts to shiver the moment they reached shimla..And seeing this both their lovely hubbies hides their respective wife's in their arms...Soon they checked into an hotel and left to their respective rooms...

SO THATS ALL FOR SHOT 2 FTIENDS..PLEASE DO COMMENT PLEASE

LOVE
ANJU




Edited by Muskan193 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1
Ishu at kon banega carorepati.
And she wins a carore
With the help of Raman.
And then plays a prank by proposing him in srk of ddlj style.
And she loves the voice of Raman.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2.
Raman think to take revenge.
There dance on Mimi marriage.
And the public kiss.
All was suberb.
Loved their flashback .
And they got married so soon.
Waiting for next update.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon

Hope in next term we again get double update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1:

Lovely & a different concept
Ishu is working for an orphange and she participated in KBC
And Raman helped her win.
It was not fair for Ishita to pull a prank on a person in public...too bad
Poor Raman

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update
Love ishra
Hide & sick
Game
Update next part soon
N
Thanks for pm





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Part 2:
Nice update
Raman & Ishita know each other
Raman is no less and kissed her in front of the whole family
They are childhood friends who love each other
They got married and left for honeymoon...so sweet
Cute story
Update soon
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The updates was just awesome
Thank you for the pm
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Originally posted by: aditi12ishra

Part 2.

Raman think to take revenge.
There dance on Mimi marriage.
And the public kiss.
All was suberb.
Loved their flashback .
And they got married so soon.
Waiting for next update.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon

Hope in next term we again get double update.



Thanks dear
Will try to update double parts

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