The RKB's Doll(updated part 5 on Dec 21) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Awesome update dear nice start
Continue soon as possible and
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
congratulations for new story dear
superb update dear
bit confusing but interesting
waiting for next part
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Thanks for the pm.
Ishu's chr is nice n new.
But are these 2 diff instances?Or 2 different females?
One is ishu at some bar/brothel.
The next one is somewhere else with children.
Also is RKB a single person or there is one other person accompanying him?
Pl start your story soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Interesting prologue
And confusing also
Update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
interesting and teasing prologue
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Part 1

It was 9 am and the busy road of Mumbai has again been in traffic. Yes traffic which was capable of stopping a already irritated RKB. Well he has been stopped by the single red light all frustated and annoyed. Had it been anyother day he would have called the commisner but today he ddnt have any imp meeting so he was cool[At least than other days]
He was looking at the new presentation when sth sparling came straightly in his left cheek so he looked towards that direction. When he looked there he just kept looking at that direction.
A girl was sleeping on the window of bus and her naughty watch was teasing him. He looked at her deeply trying to absorb very single detail. Those cubby and cute cheeks, that bunny nose, those kissable lipsand that single strain of hair that was teasing her sleep and his agur to tuck it back. God that serene beauty, peace of her face and that innocent yet beautiful face was sth he really want to watch day and night. Then suddenly the bus began to move taking her with itself.
He wanted to call her, stop the bus and take her in his arm but then he ddnt know her name. He was about to open the car door when the car moved as the color changed from red to green. He just looked at those colours.
"You both annoy me a lot. But maybe that's why you are not RKB's favourite color." he said carresing his blue tablet while his diver unaware of whole thing just moved the car towards their direction.

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She felt someone shaking her and she woke up only to see irritated Nisha. She smiled lightly to her still not wanting to woke up but she did.
"Kya yaar Ishita. How can you fall asleep in bus." she said after jumping down of the bus.
"Wo Maa and I were talking aur pata hi nahi chala kab 1 baj gaye sote hue. So need puri nahi hui hai and I slept. Sorry." she said making a cute face and pulling her right ear with her right hand.
"You people stay together and talk so much. Itna bhi kya hota hai ek din mei batane ko?" Nisha asked all confused as her mother hardly pass her a look.
Feeling where the conversation was heading she pointed that their office had came and soon the day started for them as others.

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He was angry at himself. It was already evening and all he would think was of her in every spare minute whereas the thing that irritate him most was maybe he wont met her. But it shouldnt matter right? He just saw her. He have seen so many beautiful girls before but only that image came in his mind. And You wont believe but it was really irritating. Well in summary it was an irritating day but in a good way said Raman smiling.

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Ishita and Nisha were returning home when Ishita saw park and kids playing. And she just made Nisha were her bag and ran towards them like a little girl. And Nisha just shook her head looking at Ishita who had already in half wet and muddy dress and still playing.
She was playing with children happily unknown of the fact that she caught the eye of The RKB, unkown that someone will trying to pull out whereas someone to push her towards him, unknown to the fact that she has so many envious figures already. She is an innocent soul away from the miseries of life. But its her innocence that she caught the RKB's eyes, that she have protecter, that she is gonna have someone to support her all the time, that someone to make her laugh and most important many to envy her, her beauty, her soul, her every single existance without even knowing what she has suffered actually and is going to. And she is gonna be The RKB's Doll.
To know how. Stay tuned.
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Hi! Me again.
First of all thank you to you all guz for liking and commenting this story.
Well the story is gonna unwrap its layer one by one so pls stay tuned to know more.
And Raksha Di. Thank you so much for commenting first. And as you are the first one to comment in this ff so if I will write a drabble for you(next one)
And GBSC I really love the way you read so minor details clearly. And dont hesistate to put forward ur opinion. What is your real name?
And you all know I love you right?
I really do.
30+ likes and long comments for fast and long update.
Love you all;
Gia
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Congratsss for new story dear..
Nice prologue bit confusing too..
Continue soon..
Thx for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Interesting start dear
But bit confusing too
Actually where they met
Is they know each other before
Update soinish
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Interesting😛
The title 'THE RKB's DOLL', attracted me more😊
I thought it was usual ishra romance, but this is diffrent
Please pm me, if you update this😃

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