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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
awesome start
Raman liked ishu in the first look itself
very interesting
I like how ishu is so carefree
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Lovely start Gia.
Loved the way of Rkb knowing ishita .
He is trying to forger her but cannot .
On the other hand she didn't know even about his existence.
Update next soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Congratulations on ur new story Gia...
Nice prologue...
Interesting concept...
Title is awesome the rkb's doll..
Ishita is too innocent soul...
She is cute...raman was lost in her beauty...
He likes ishita...
Ishita is cutu...she loves to play with small kids...kudh bhi chotu baby ban jati hai...
Raman is following her...he is admiring...
Waiting to see how this story enfold...
How will Ishita become the rkb's doll want go know
Do updt soon Gia
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Nice update dear...
Raman was lost in ishitas beauty
She was playing like a kid
She dont know about him
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Nice
But a little confusing
He saw nisha or ishita
Is nisha a child or ishitas frnd
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Congratulations for new story
Awesome story
Ishita is very innocent
She is playing with kids
Raman liked her in first glance
Update soon
Pm me plz
Will.be waiting eagerly for ur update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Interesting prologue
seems a mixture of many povs
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
I am in love wid dis story
like rkb has fallen fr her
she is an innocent soul who has captivated his heart n all he could think abt d whole day wss her
do continue soon gia
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

He was angry at himself. It was already evening and all he would think was of her in every spare minute whereas the thing that irritate him most was maybe he wont met her. But it shouldnt matter right? He just saw her. He have seen so many beautiful girls before but only that image came in his mind. And You wont believe but it was really irritating. Well in summary it was an irritating day but in a good way said Raman smiling.

Part 2

He was shocked from himself. He need to talk to someone. Just the his eyes felt on the photoframe on his table. It was the photo of his dead grandmother and a cute barbie doll in red frock. He picked it up and peck the frame.
"Pata hai dadi I met her. She was sleeping... bilkul isski tara." he said smiling pointing towards the doll. Just then it clicked him. It made sense why he held sudden sttraction toward her. He was smiling but tears were just flowing through his eyes. "Doolll... doolll... kkk...kkyya...wooo tu tumm...tum thi?" he was scared from denial so much that he didnt let a question erupt in his mind. Wo itna dara hua tha ki ussne photoframe ko table par rakha aur started moving to door ta ki who pics mana na kar paye, ye na k paye ki nahi wo mai nahi hu, wo nahi hai tumhari doll. Par what he missed was the twinkle in his dadi and that doll's eyes. Chahe wo suraj ki kirno se hi kyu na ho wo Raman ko dissapoint hone nahi dete par he missed it.
*
He was smiling and smiling throughout the whole journey to home. His diver was also shocked but didnt dare to ask. He was looking every bus just to take another beautiful look of her face but only get dissapointment. He saw a tag line on one of the bus back that, "Har chamakti cheez sona nahi hota.". Then unwantingly his heart spoke, "Agar wo wo nahi hue tho?" but his mind answered, "Nahi hue tho bhi wo meri hogi. Ek bar usko khochuka hu abki bar nahi jipaunga. Mei to jinda bhi iss umeed mai tha ki wo wapas aayegi.". "Mei bhi" his heart whispered. He closed his eyes when his heart remember the beautiful face and mind tried to connect the detail of 3 yrs kid and 21 yrs angel. While he was smiling remembering her, she was playing with kids and he just missed her from his window. Maybe it was the first time RKB missed sth and that to thing of his interest. Really it was a memorial day.
*
Raman moved inside his home shouting for his mother, "Maaa, Maaa" and Toshiji came running. Why wont she after years Raman came back in happy mood from office without tired and dead face. He just pulled her toward his room. Made her sit on his bed and himself settled on her lap. Toshiji began to caress his hair. "Maa meinne na aaj usse dekha" he said while her hand just stopped. He pulled her hand again on his hair, still with closed eyes, signalling her to continue which she obeid. "Wooo aai thi?" her voice was heavy but Raman just smiled. "Pata nahi kon thi par bilkul uss ki tara thi. Woo bus k seat pe so rahi thi par pata hai hallka sa hath bahar tha. Wo yesa kese kar sakti hai. Agar kuch ho jata tho? Jab hum saath honge na tho I wont let her move out alone." he blaberring and blabering how beautiful she was looking, how she didnt let him concentrate on his work like a child explain about his day to her mother after coming from school.
She was smiling looking at him and his concern for her safety but today also after 18 yrs the possessivness in his voice scares her.
Flashback starts:-18 yrs back
A women was driving a car with a kid of 6 no 7 she smiled remembering how he shouted in this morning that Raman is a big boy as he turned 7 today.
"Kya dolls ke saath khelna galat hai dadi?" He asked again.
"Nahi baba. Hum doll shop hi tho ja rahe hai na tumhare liye doll lene" she said making him smile.
"Tho fir Rajveer bhai kyu ke rahe the ki playing with dolls is girr girr" "Girly" she said.
"ha girly" he said happily.
"Wo iss liye kyu ki mostly girls like dolls isska ye matlab tho nahi hai na boys cant play with dolls" She said " par tumne mujhe nahi bataya why do you like dolls so much?" She asked the question she has been waiting for so much. Yes she was scared if he was different from normal boys because of his attraction to dolls but he was only attracted to dolls not any other girls likeness.
Unknown of her thinking Raman said, "Maine na Rajveer bhai aur unnke friends ke saath Robot(flim) heri thi. Chiti(a robot) hai na wo kitna diiferent aur powerfull tha. Par wo phir bad boy ho gaya" he pouted "Aur aapko pata hai?" suddenly being exicted. While his dadi just shook her head listening to his talks as she was thinking so many possibilities whereas her grandson only wanted a robot.*
Continued below
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Continued from above
While his dadi just shook her head listening to his talks as she was thinking so many possibilities whereas her grandson only wanted a robot.
"T
oh hum Robot lete hai na!" Dadi said teasingly.
But he frowned and said, "Par mei robot ka kya karunga? Mere lia tho Simmi Di ki tara Doll hi teek hai. Jo mere saath khele, baath kare aur humhesa saath rahe. Haa hum aapke liye Chitti order karenge. Wo aapke kaam bhi karega aur aapko entertain bhi karega. Aur wo Dadu ki tara aapki unglimei naache ga bhi." Raman said with so much excitation.
"Chup badmaash! Wo ungli wali baath kisne ki?" she said unplugging his seatbelt. She was settling his hair when he spoke, "Badima was saying ki aap dadu ko apne ungli mei nachatethe." and ran toward Doll shop to pick the best and pretties doll in the shop. While a red hue formed on her cheek remembering how her husband used to say, "Hum tho apke mutthi mei keed hai. Chahe aap ungli mei nachaye ya dil mei basaya." A shiver ran through her remembering her husband saying but she shook her head with smile and move toward the Doll shop to look after her naughty grandson.
*
Raman was looking all dolls, examining very single detail of every doll when his eyes were catched by a figure leaning to plang of cupboard. It was very pretty in red frock and looking very unique with closed eyes and just human like hands, leg and a pretty face. He was so happy when he thought he got a Chitti in a doll form just like he wanted but now the main problem was how to wake her up sry sry switch her on(his words not mine)?

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Hi guys! Hope u remember me. I m very late; I know and my other ff are also unupdated. Dont worry will update tomorrow[fingercrossed]. A reason for being late was I didnt get desired likes and other was my crazy cousins. Trust me how much u love them; when they poke theirs nose in every single thing; you just want to kill them.
Ok coming to the point I dont know how it is as I wrote it in single sitting so pls ignore grammetical mistake and spelling mistakes.
I need at least 2 page comment and 25+ likes in this update for next part. And trust me guys; I m not gonna post it without it. Enough of my talks will be waiting for ur response.

Love you all;
Gia
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago

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