##chaha hai tujko updt part 15 on pg 133 on 14/7 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DikshaN

nice
have already posted my comment on the other thread

Due to my stupidity it become new topic
N thank u
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb story...
Read both the parts in a go...
Totally loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb Update
loved it
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Awesome story dear
Read both parts in a go
Loved it
Update soon
If possible please do pm me when you update
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Awesome
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Congrats on ur first story and it's simply awesome
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Here is part 3 of my story


Ishra are sleeping peacefully in each other arms

Raman open his eyes n feel some weight over him n sees isita fully sleeping on him her head was rest on his chest n leg are in tangle wid him n a peaceful smile was crept on her lips.

Raman mesmerized seeing the sight in front of him

Ishitas hair has been spread on the pillow Raman cares her hairs n says how somebody can be beautiful inside n out cares her hair

Due to some movements isita stirs in sleep n Raman saw that n close his eyes immediately to see his madrasan reaction

Isita open her eyes n saw she sleep fully on Raman n blush crept around her face

Raman who was not sleeping click some idea to tease his Madrasan

He purposefully kept her hand on isita waist n pull her towards him

Due to sudden pull ishita gets more close to Raman n they were that much close that their breathe touch their skin

Ishita shivers under Raman touches

Ishu come more close to Raman kiss his forehead n says

Yesterday when I bring shagun home I was very scared what if she want u again in her life n she use adi for it n make us part away from each other.I can't live without u Raman coz I love u very much.

But yesterday I saw love n concern for me in ur eyes n my all fears r like just vanished

Now I don't have any fear n insecurities about my love n I trust my love

I LOVE U RAMAN

N give a quick peck on his lips n leave washroom for doing her morning chores

While Raman sit on the bed n Care's his lip where ishita has kiss him n remember her talk which she was telling to a him thinking that he was sleeping.

Raman says this I will not hurt u break ur trust for anyone not even for Adi

Coz I also love u very much n again sleep

In dinning table
All had decided yesterday that they will ignore shagun presence in the house n live peacefully like before only

Mrs.bhalla- O bhallaji chetti chetti nasta karlo aur ruhi puttur nu school chardo

Mr.bhalla- ha nasta dijiye muje toshi ji air hamari ruhi putar kidar hai.

just then Adi n shagun come to hall from their respective rooms

Ruhi- dadu mein ready aaj muje simmi bus me ready kiya mein kaise lag rai ho flaunting herself cutely

Romi Mr & Mrs bhalla smiles on ruhi antics

Mr bhalla- see adi n shagun ( he ignored shagun n asks adi to come for break fast).
Aaja adi adi puttar dadi ne bade aache parthe Banay hai.aaja putar

Adi go silently n sit there coz shagun has manipulate his mind against bhallas n especially ishita

Flaskback
Adi goes to shagun room n says
Mom hum yaha kab jayenge

Shagun- adi abhi hame yahi rehna yeh hamara ghar Jaha uss eeshita n kabza kar raka hai sab log is esita k aage piche ghumte hai aur hame bhi isita se baat karni hogi warna woh hame hamare hi ghar se nikal degi.

Adi- OK mom

And both leaves for break fast
Flashback ends

All see shagun but ignore her

Mr.bhalla n ruhi leaves for school

Simmi- ma yeh bhai aur bhabhi kaha reh gaye.

Romi- simmi di rehne thake huwe hoge so reh honge sone de unko waise bhi log unhe paresham karne k liye kam nai hai.

Ishita come hurriedly downstairs n says

Sorry mummy ji late hogaya sab kuch aap ko karna pada hoga...
Ruhi school chali hai na

While shagun just looking at ishita n says adi dekha ishita kaise behave kar ri hai jaise use Sab ki bohat fikar hai. .

While Raman comes n says
Saas lele madrasan warna chal basi GI

Ishita glare at Raman n says aap bhi kuch bhi bolte hai.

N goes to kitchen to help mummy ji n simmi

Simmi- kya ishita aisa kya huwa Raat ko k tuje itna late hogaya said teasingly

Ishu- aisa kuch nai hai aur tu kaam par dhyan de muje chedna band kar

Simmi- OK chal nai chedungi pehle bata hotel siute mein kya huwa.

Ishita remember how has confessed his love n dinner n automatically blush crept around her face which obliviously noticed by simmi

Simmi- kya ishita Maine toh sirf pochi aur tu blush kar ri hai ab to muje pakka janna hai k kya huwa tha kal aur yeh manhoos shagun kaha mili tuke...

Unknown to them shagun was listening all this n get furious that how simmi can call her manhoos

At dinning table raman asks for break fast
Raman- are madrasan tu dono bhabhi nanad ki gapsup khtm ho gai ho aaj nasta milega ya sidha raat ko khane pe aao

Isita- aa ri bilkul bacche ki behave karte ho aap nasta do nasta do
N come with paratha n chai
Raman- bacha ho mein toh bache ki tarah treat Karo na mere Sab kaam karke do jaise meri office bag jamao kapde niklo Jo tum karti ho par bacha ho toh nahla bhi dena kapde bhi pehna dena said only audible to isita

Ishu blush at naught talk of her naughty husband which does not go unnoticed by shagun

Shagun can't tolerate this close ness of ishra but before shagun can create some scene ishita asks adi

Beta aap school nai Gaye kya

Adi don't know what to say so he says

Aap hoti kon hai mujse ye Sab pochne wali

Raman don't like the way he talk with ishita so he says

What is this adi don't u have manner to talk with elder people u like or not but ishita my wife n u have talk with her in proper maaner else don't think twice to slap u

Shagun come in between n says raman tum kya bol...but raman cut her in between n says don't u dare to interfere when I talk to my son just stay quite aur do some work for ur survival coz I will not pay for u n u have to live here to give rent we don't do charity.

Listening to raman shagun says OK ...but u will pay for adi na

Raman- yes coz he is my son n u r no one to me.

Shagun- adi ki school fees baaki isliye woh nai ja raha hai.

Raman says to adi that he will pay the fees N leaves for office.

Shagun says I m also going for searching the job I don't want to be burden for anyone ( she thought that ishita will show her jagatmata avtar but happen exactly opposite

Ishita- ha shagun sahi keh ri tum tumhe rent bhi toh pay karna hai mein raman se poch lungi rent aur bata dungi tumhe u don't worry
Saying this she leaves towards her room

Toshi n simmi are giggling listening to ishita answer

In ishra room
Ishita calls anjali n ask about her appointment n comes to know today there is no appointment so she decide to surprise raman but before goes to hall & help mummy ji in lunch

After that she call to raman about lunch
Raman- Bol madrasan abhi office aaye muje kuch time hi huwa aur tumhe meri yaad aagai not bad Mrs ishita bhalla

Ishita- ha aagai aapki yaad kuch kaam nai tha toh socha kyu na aapko yaad kiya jaye

Raman- MATLAB tumne time pass karne k liye phone kiya

Ishita- aapko kya laga muje aapki yaad aai hai said teasingly

Raman- know every things that his madrasan was making fun of him so he says tumhe pata nai time pass kaise karte ek ladka aur Laski

Ishita- no muje nai pata. . waise aapko kisne kaha ki aap ladke aap toh budhhe ho no.. Mera budhha said blushingly

Raman- mein aur Buddha tujhe toh mein baad mein aapni jawani dikhaunga raat ko hamare bed pe tab bolna mein Buddha ho ya nai

Ishita- how shameless u r always think naughty things.

Raman- kya karu biwi kuch karne nai deti toh soch k hi dil ko mana leta hu if u give permission toh I will do what I was thinking without any shame.

Listening to his naughty talks ishita also become naughty n says

Ishita- aapko permission zarurat nai mein bhi toh dekhu mera safed Baal wala Buddha kitna jawan hai...said with blush

Raman- ohh someone is desperate to see my jawani hai na

Ishita- bas kijiye raman aapki yeh naughty baate kabhi kthm nai hogi

Aapki baato k chakkar mein Jo baat karne k liye phone ki thi woh toh ki hi nai

Raman- kya baat karni the madrasan kuch important tha.

Ishita- ha bohat muje pochna tha k aap lunch par ghar aaoge ya bhijwa doo kisi k hato.

Raman- mein lunch pe nai aa paunga kyuki ek important meeting hai.

Ishita- kitne baje ki hai meeting 12:00 baje ki khtm hote hote 2:00 tak khtm hogi aur ghar pochte tym lag jayega toh tum bhejwa dena lunch

Ishita- thik hai meeting k baad aapka lunch aur dessert dono intezar karengea aapki cabin mein.

Raman- dessert kuch special hai aaj

Ishita- ha aapka dessert special hai.

Raman- OK bye madrasan love u

Ishita- love u too

N disconnect the calls

Here shagun was roaming for job vacancy coz she knew raman will not live her easily this
time.n I have in good books of adi n raman too so she can manipulate adi.

At office raman complete his meeting n goes to cabin for having lunch n remember ishita talk n think kya special desert hoga n enter the cabin

No shocked to see his madrasan sitting on his chair n smiling at him

Up to now the intelligent raman understand which is his special desert waiting

Raman- are madrasan tu yaha kyu kissi k hatho bhijwa deti mera lunch

Ishita-toh kya huwa mein nai LA sakti aapke ke liye

Raman- LA sakti ho par
Cut him In between n ishu says

Par war kuch nai fafafat lunch ki jiye muje bohat bhook lagi hai

Raman- tumne lunch nai kiya Maine kaha tha na meeting mein late hoga phir bhi tum apni chalati ho ( said slightly angrily)

Ishita- pati k liye wait toh problem pati k bina kha lo toh pati ki parwah nai hai har jagah se patni ko hi takleef hoti

Raman-aacha sorry an lunch kare agar aap ki aagya ho toh

Ishita- ha kijiye

They both had their lunch with talking random things

After ishita was arranging every thing when raman ask about desert to ishu

Raman- aaj ka kya special desert hai jo tum muje phone par ke rai thi
Ishita- looks down n blush

Raman understand everything but to tease his madrasan he go close to ishu
N search for desert in lunch box n says

Are isme toh koi sweet nai hai.
Not fair madrasan aise desert k maan lalcha kar desert nai dena buri baat hai...with a cutely pout

Ishita- kya bacho ki tarah behave kae rahe ho mein aapka favorite desert lai ho
Na

Raman come more close to ishita n says bolo na kya hai desert mera

Ishita- one minute ye lijiye apka favorite gulab jamum lai hoo apne hato se banakar u will just love it.

Saying this she remove one more box which contain gulab jamun n give it to Raman

But listening to this raman face fell n think tabhi main sochu madrasan achanak bold kaise ho gai

But he is not going to give up so he says

Raman- madrasan aaj mein meri pasand ki sweet khaunga

Ishita thought he was saying this for gulab jamum

Ishita- OK. .aapko kisne Roka hai

Raman- phir muje rokna mat promise
Ishita- kya Raman gulab jamun k liye promise...thik hai I promise mein aap ko biklul nai rokungi

Raman- sochle
Ishita- sochliya raavan Kumar n pinch his nose n tell him to eat

Raman in swift movement pull ishita towards him n kiss her hungrily
Ishita eyes widened in shocked

After around 5 minutes raman leaves ishu n says

My gulab jamun is very tasty said raman

Ishita looks down shyly smile at her naughty husband due to shy her cheeks turns into crimson red color

Raman most beautiful sight to his madrasan blushing coz of him

Raman- madrasan agar mere ek kiss se tu itna sharma k laal hogi toh mein soch raha ho ki jab mein tujhe pyaar karunga tab toh tu puri tamatar ban jayegi hai nai...

Waise don't worry muje tamatar bhi bohat pasand hai

Due to her husband naughty talks her face was becoming more red she can't have control on it n hugs raman tightly n says

Raman kabhi toh kuch aacha bolo

Raman- is mein bura kya hai... I m talking to my wife who become tomata coz of my love n I love to see u in that flush face

Ishita- yeah Sab toh thik hai par muje app se ek aur zarurri baat karni hai(in a serious tone)

Raman- kya huwa ishita Sab thik hai na shagun ya adi ne kuch kaha (cupping her face n ask her)

Ishita- seeing this much concern in his eyes for her she can't control her emotions n hugs him tightly n kiss his heart n says kuch nai kaha un hone

Raman- to phir kya huwa breaking the hug n says batao muje kisi aur ne kuch kaha tumhe

Ishita- raman muje kisi ne kuch nai kaha lekin muje aapse miku k baare mein baat karni hai

Raman- mihika k baare kya huwa.

Ishita- jab mein aap k liye lunch LA ri tab ek mandir aaya toh socha waha ja k matarani aashirwad
lelu for our health & wealth n I saw mihika there

Flashback
Mihika-Purab muje abhi abhi k apne pati ashok se divorce chahiye plzz tum lawyer hona plzz meri help kardo

Purab- ha thik hai miku aacha bata shadi ko kitne mahine huwe hai

Mi- 2 din huwa hai usne much se zabarjasti shadi ki hai dara dhamka kar

Purab- what r u saying tumhe apni family ko batana chahiye iske baare mein

Mi- nai bata sakti sab Maine hi apne aap se dur kar diya hai
Meri shadi mihir se honewali thi aur aahok ki meri nanad shagun se lekin ashok shagun se bored ho gaya tha usne muje proposed bhi kiya tha tab hi Maine socha use exposed karungi par mera plan backfired ho gaya mere family badnaam hui woh alag n narrate every things to purab

Purab- lekin uske against hame proof jama karna pare ga
Lekin tumne use shadi kyu ki

Mi- kyu ki agar mein shadi nai karti mihir k against woh attempt to murder k charges laga dete aur meri akka ki jaan ruhi unhe ruhi ko bhi khona padta ashok shagun k khilaf gawai di phir usne agar Maine koi chalaki ki toh woh ruhi ko akka se dur kar degi

Purab-ok mein puri kosish karunga tum vus ashok k chungal is bahar aa jao

Mi- aur hum hamesha mandir mein hi milenge

Purab-ok done

Flashback end

Ishita- raman meri behen meri wajah se ashok ke jaal mein phas hai n cries for her sister fate

Raman- ssh ishita aise rote nai hum dono milkar mihika ko us kamine ashok se bachenge u don't worry kuch nai hoga mihika ko. No don't cry

Ghar Jana chahiye kaafi late ho gaya hai

Aur ja ishita yeh baat ghar mein abhi kisi ko mat batana.

Ishita- OK Raman

N they both leaves for bhalla house


To be continued.
Edited by Rarupatel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Read all the oarts
Loved the way u r handling this track
Ishuta words to a sleeping ramn how she was scared and how his love removed her insecurity
Beautifully written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
superb update
everyone is ignoring shagun
ishra are gonna help mihika
Raman is so naughty
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Loved it so much
Update soon

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