IshRa New OS - Swayamvar

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(Based on a Telugu Movie Story)



Characters-

Raman- only son of om&toshi bhalla..
His parents r normal like other couples,but he feels like his father don't care for mother.

Mr.bhalla have big music recording studio along with other companies

Ishita- only daughter of viswa&madhu iyer
She loves singing & have good voice

Mani- common friend of Ishita,Raman..
He loves ishita,but she don't gv much importance to him

Romi,mihir,bala- friends of raman who stay in bhalla house most of time

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Mihir and mihika talking in park..

Raman waiting for mihir in car
He presses horn..

Mihir- OK miku we wil meet tmrw
Bye

Miku- what's so urgent..tell ur driver to wait

Mihir- I have some important work..we have to go

They came out of small park

Miku- hello..oh driver..y u always disturb us
Don't u have manners
Idiot
She went..

Raman glared mihir..
Mihir sat in passenger seat and held his ears

Mihir- sorry bhai..

Raman- I m driver? U stupid..
U r acting like rich boy in front of her
Isn't it wrong?

Mihir- no bhai..ths days girls r interested in boy's salary and family background.
They don't want to understd how much we love

Raman- u don't change
Where r romi,bala..

Mihir- bhai..today s Friday
Our Romeo's must be in temple flirting with girls

They reached temple..

A girl wearing halfsaree doing pooja in temple.

She s looking so pretty,romi and bala looking at her
Raman mihir came and join them

Raman saw her..
He can't take eyes off from her

All 3 looked at him..
Romi- bhai,u feel like if u try any girl fall for u na..

Bala- OK,bet..
U don't need to do anything like kiss or touching her
Just go and ask prasaad from her

Raman- why to ask her? If we go inside..panditji wil give na

All 3 in union..ohhooo so u don't have dare to ask her

Raman- what's dare in it?
That's not big thing.
OK..if she wil give me,what u guys do?

Romi- for the first time,u wil get party from us
Instead of giving us like always

Raman nodded and went near her

Pandit ji blessed her and gave prasaadam to her
She s going out from temple

He s going behind her

Raman- excuse me..

She didn't turn and still walking

He don't know what to do..
He extended his hand and held pallu of her halfsaree..

Pin which held her pallu got open,and pallu slipped lilbit from shoulder

She turned back and glared at him angrily

They checked surroundings..

Glad that no one s thr..
She adjusted her pallu and slapped him

PHAAATTT...

Ishita- r u mad? Who r u? Is it way to behave with girl?

Raman kept hand on cheek..

Raman(st)- what the hell..she slapped me?
A girl slapped him in public?

His friends came there after hearing sound of slap

Mihir- what happened bhai?

They saw his hand on cheek

Romi- how dare u?
U slapped him?
He just want to ask prasaad?

Ishita looked at him..
Ishita- anyone ask prasaad like this?
She kept prasaad in his hand and went without saying sorry to him..

Bala- sorry yaar raman..we don't know she react like ths
Because of us,all ths hpnd

Raman- I wil deal with her later..
Chalo,we have to attend wedding reception tonight..

They went from there..

At night..

They reached venue..raman still can't forget her..err her slap

Then he saw her coming in pink long gown with bouquet in hand

He got idea and ran to lift in which she entered..

She saw him..
Lift closed

Actually his plan is to be with her..
But his good luck,power gone suddenly

She looked at him.

Raman- what? U think u can slap anyone and go like that

He started moving towards her..

Ishita moving back..

Ishita- that's ur mistake..how can u pull pallu like that in public?

Raman- oh,so u r flng it hpnd in public..
U r OK if I do now?
Now we r in private place na

Ishita- NOOo..
plz..I m flng scared
Ask ur ppl to start lift

Raman- kya?
(St)- so,this mad girl thinking I did this to warn her
How cute..

Raman- yes..my frnds did this
They won't start until u say sorry

Ishita- OK,sorry.
Tell them..

Raman- not so easily..
Tell that RKB s best

Ishita- RKB? Who's that?

Raman- me..

Ishita- oh OK rkb s best
Tell them to start lift

Raman- say with smile..

Ishita(over smiling)- rkb s best..OK
Tell them..plz

Raman- what can I say?
Power dept s not in my hands..
Thy have to give

Ishita- it means u didn't..

Raman- haa meri maa..y I do that

Ishita- maa? Mein maa lag rahi hoon kya?

Raman- uff..no. I said that casually
If u have guts to hear,I wil say how u r looking..

She looked at him and understd he s not going to say good words

Ishita - no..

Power came..
Lift started

Ishita glared him..and gave 'I will deal with u later' look and went

They both came to same reception..
He followed her throughout event and she got angry on him..

Next day..

Mr.bhalla sent raman to recording studio to select good singers for upcoming movie

He went and got irritated after listening some horrible voices

He held his head and sat..

Mani came there..

Mani- hey raman,I heard that uncle sent u to select singers..

Raman- oh god..my head s aching..those voices r horrible

Mani- but I know a girl who have very sweet voice..

Raman looked at her

Mani smiled..
Raman- what's matter?
U like her?

Mani- yes..if u do this help to me
I wil get good impression
She s trained singer

Raman- OK,then we wil meet evening at hotel
Bring her too

Mani thanked and went to ishu's house

Viswa- singing in movies?
Okk..if she want to do that,I don't have any prob

Mani- thank u uncle

Ishu,be ready at evening
Wil go and meet him

Ishu nodded

At evening-

Mani came to ishu house again
Sometimes she feel irritated with his presence all time in her house

Ishu- how I am looking?

Mani- gorgeous..

Ishu kept a weird face and went with him

There mani saw his old frnd and told her to sit in table no.20

She went there and saw him.

Ishu- u here?
This table is mine

Raman lifted table..
Raman- OK,take this.

Ishu- mine means..we reserved this table
Go and sit at other table..

Raman- I came here first
Why I wil go

Ishu got irritated and going back

Mani- ishu..where r u going..
Come

They went and sat opposite raman
He understd mani liking her

Mani- raman I told u na..
U have to give chance to her

Ishu..he s my frnd who s selecting singers

Ishu- what? He s selecting singers?
How funny?
First of all,he know what s music?
Better to sing on railway platform than singing in his company.

Raman- good,go and sing..
Ur voice s suitable for railway platform only

Mani- stop..stop
Do u know each other ?

Thy nodded

Mani- plz raman,at least hear her voice first..
Then u can decide

He nodded

Next day..

Mr.bhalla also came with raman to hear ishu voice and he liked..

Ishu got chance..
Her first song became superhit

And getting many offers from raman's company

Slowly thy became friends
She started understanding him well

He looks like khadoos outside
But his nature s too good

Raman,mani,ishu used to meet many times

One random night..

Mani called and asked her to come to disco
She denied
She s not liking his presence now days at least as a friend

Later raman called and she accepted

At disco..
Raman saw mani and intensionally asked ishu..

Raman- didn't mani call u?

Ishu- yes,he did
But I said no
I feel so bore with him

Mani heard and went out sadly..

Raman- so,why u don't tell him directly that I don't like u
Don't u know that he likes u

Ishu- I..I don't know

Raman- oh plz..don't lie
Ths days girls na..
What u thought?
He s doing all this as social service?
He likeu,so doing all ths
Tell him what u feel
Don't play with anyone's feelings

He went angrily

They didn't talk 2 days after that..

She pleaded him and he agreed after knowing she talked with mani.

She s loving him way too much..
And he liked her in thr first meet itself

One random day..
They sat on bench

Ishu- how many times I have to call u

Raman- sorry yaar,tell me why u called urgently

Ishu- I m feeling hungry

Raman- why? Ur appa didn't cook today?

Ishu- stop jokes raman..
Today we celebrated varalakshmi vrat in house
My Amma didn't eat coz she want my appa to break her fast
My chachi also didn't eat coz she want chacha ji to break her fast

Raman- why didn't u eat

Ishu- coz I am waiting u to break my fast

Raman- what? What u said?

She blushed..

Raman- u liking me?

She nodded and gave food to him
He fed her and she ate while blushing so much

Raman- I fed u na..tum bhi kuch Karo..
Mere liye

Ishu- kya?

Raman- kiss Karo

Ishu- ayyooo..kiss?

He closed his eyes and she know he get what he want

She kissed on cheek and smiled

Raman- u don't know where to kiss
I am not a kid that u gave kiss on cheek

He cupped her face,and tokk her lips kn his..thy had thr first kiss.

They used to meet,talk and kisses,hugs became casual for them
He never tried to take advantage

Ishu's parents observing her behavior
And she told him that she and raman loving each other.
Appa didn't have prob as bhalla family have good name in society

Next day..

Raman getting ready in his room..
He heard knock.and opened door

Ishita stood there wearing Saree and many gold ornaments

Raman- looking so beautiful jaan
..
Why u came home suddenly?

Ishu- not only me..Amma appa Also came..
To talk abt our mrg with ur parents..

Raman- what?
Marriage?
Who said I wil.marry u?

Ishu- don't start ur pranks raman
Please
Not in this matter

Raman- I m not joking..
That's true
Tell me,did I ever discuss u abt mrg?

She nodded..
Ishu- but u love me na

Raman- of course I love u a lot..

But that doesn't mean I wil marry u

Ishita fell down on floor..
What s this?
He loves me but don't want to marry me

He came downstairs..
Toshi- raman,thy r ishita's parents.

And he declared..

Raman- plz..u ppl can go if u r here to talk abt our mrg
I don't wanna marry her

She came downstairs while crying

Bhallaji- what? U don't want to marry her?
Don't u love her?

Raman- for god's sake..why ppl link btwn love and mrg

I am loving her..it means I have to marry her?
Is it a rule?

Ishita- but y u don't wanna marry me?
What's my fault?
I did any mistake?

Raman cupped her face..
Raman- jaan don't cry
Plz I can't see tears in ur eyes
U know that
U didn't do any mistake
I don't believe in marriage.
I won't marry anyone in my life
But I wil love u for lifetime

She s confused,looking at him..

Appa held her hand and dragged her from house

In iyer's house..
Appa- madhu,tell her..if she meet him anytime..I won't spare her

How rude he s
He don't even care abt her feelings

I will settle match for u..
U have to marry that person

She s crying nonstop in room..
Finally decided to know reason behind his denial

She convinced appa somehow and went to music college where thy used to meet

He s there waiting for her..
She sat beside him..

He looked at her and understd she cried a lot..

Ishita- u love me na?
Raman- don't u know..

Ishita- kuch prob hai kya?
Raman- MATLAB..
Ishita looked from.top to bottom

Ishu- I mean like any sexual prob..
Don't worry
I won't tell.. We can consult doc for treatment

Raman glared her..
Raman- what the hell..
I m perfectly alright

Ishita- then what's prob raman?

Raman gotup and went angrily

Other day..
Ishu wanted to go to mall..but appa accompanied her thinking raman may come

He got info from his friends and reached there..

She went to changing room with dress..
He went in room in a jiffy and locked door..

Ishu- raman..u Here?
Appa came with me..
Please go

Raman held and pulled her closer

Raman- kyun?
U have doubt that I have any sexual prob na
So,I want to clarify..

She widened her eyes..

Ishu- chuupp..go out

He started kissing her and slide his hands inside her kurti,carassing her bareback..

Ishu- Ramannn..ahh stop it

She pushed him from changing room..
That's when appa came there to know y ishu tkng much time..

Appa glared him..
Took ishu with him

He warned ishu again in home that she didnt stop meeting him even after warning

Appa came to bhalla house..
Appa- see mr.bhalla.
I agreed when she said she wana marry raman
He denied
Its over
But still he s following her
I want to do her mrg,tell me is it wrong?
Every girl's father wish s to see her daughter happy with her husband.
Already people started calling her with bad names..
Tell him to stop meeting her..
Or else I don't know what I do

Later toshiji told raman..raman got angry and went to iyer house to meet appa

Amma - he went to meeting,come inside..

He went with her as she working in kitchen

Raman- aunty,u r also angry with me?

Just then ishita came frommusic class
Stood outside kitchen to listen

Amma- of course,I was very happy that ishu wilhave such good husband
U spoiled al my hopes.

He held her shoulders..

Raman- aunty,look at me.
I saw my mom,dad aunty..
They used to be very loving when I was small..
But now arguing,ignoring eachother..
I can't bear all these aunty

Amma- all ths r common raman..

Raman- but not for me aunty
In love,we care for other..
But after mrg maybe like other husbands I may also become careless..

I don't want that..

When we r in love,we just wait when our lover call us and meet us
But after mrg..ppl think like thy can wait for us,as we r husband wife already

I don't like that relationship aunty
I don't believe in mrg
Love s imp in life..
Not mrg..
How many married ppl truly loving each other ?

I love her..I wil love her until my last breath.
Thats it..

Ishita bcm very happy after listening that..

She held his hand..he turned to her side..
She cupped his face,and kissed him

Ishita- I love u..I love u a lot raman
Please keep loving me like this forever

She said while kissing him..
Just then Amma came out from kitchen and bcm shocked..
Appa came there..

He slapped raman

Appa- how dare u?
I warned u many times
Still.u came to my house and kissing her

Ishita- appa,its me who kissed him

He slapped her twice and raman held appa collar in anger

Appa glared raman..
Appa- madhu,take her and go inside

He warned raman again..

Next day..
Appa thinking to do her mrg asap

He remembered that mani used to like ishu a lot..
He called her and asked to marry her

Mani- but uncle,thy r loving each other..

Appa- I just asked u wil marry her or not..
Or else I wil.settle other match

Mani agreed

Mani called raman and asked to meet him

Mani- raman,my mrg got fixed

Raman looked at mani..

Mani- with ishita
Her father came and asked me
I said yes,or else he wil go to others

He held mani collar..
Raman- don't u dare..

Mani- I also want ishita happiness raman.

If u want to marry her,tell me
I wil convince uncle even now

Raman s silent..

Mani- so u don't change ur decision..
Y u r so stubborn raman

Raman went from there angrily

Ishu s in music class..
She got call from appa that he fixed her mrg with mani

Appa- if u don't marry him..
Forget that u have parents.
Don't even come to see my dead body

He emotionally blackmailed her and she agreed

Ishita- plz appa.
Don't do anything like that
I wil do what u say

She said and started crying madly

Her frnds have water to her..
And called raman

Raman came there within 10mins

Raman- ishita..jaan why u r crying?

Ishita- appa..appa fixed my mrg raman

Raman- u must be denied na

She std silent..

Raman- u denied him na

She nodded like NO.

Ishita- i..I agreed

He slapped her..

PHHAATTT...

He held her shoulders in anger..

Raman- u wil leave me?
Ur raman?
Look into my eyes..
U want to leave me?

She looked at him,and his eyes r red and teary
She never saw him like that

Raman- u'l live happily without me?
I can't live without u jaan..

She hugged him tightly..and both cried

Appa got info abt ths..he came and dragged her from there

Wedding day..

Appa came to bhalla house and warned mr.bhalla that if raman try to stop mrg,he won't comeback safely..

Toshiji went to raman room.

Toshiji- happy? U r happy now?
Noone talked with him like this..
He have such good name in society

What u said ? U don't want to marry coz u saw how ur dad ignored me?
Really raman?
Maybe some dfrncs came btwn us
But he never hurt me,or he can't see me sad
But u..what u r doing? U didn't marry her,but then also u making her cry every min
She s crying because of u

U love her a lot na
U can't see her tears
But listen,u r saying abt future
In present,u r the reason for each and every tear of her
Is it way of loving?
If u have so much love on her..why can't u trust ur love
Why u fearing that love wil bcm less after mrg

U r ruining ur life and hers
When if u change ur decision now..
She can be urs

Do what u want

She went..

Raman reached mrg venue with mihir,romi,bala

Appa saw them,but don't want to start argument in mrg

They settled in first row..

Just then pandit told to bring dulhan
Raman glared mani..mani bent his head

Amma brought ishita and she sat beside mani

She looked upwards and saw raman.
His eyes r too red and tears flowing from his eyes
She can bear anything but seeing him cry for her
Its hell for her

She bent his head..
Pandit told to tie mangalsutra

She looked at him,maybe he stop mrg at least now
Tears flowing from her eyes nonstop

Raman remembered toshiji words..
'He s reason of her every tear'

He so wana take her in hug and say infinite sorry's to her for every tear

Mani brought mangalsutra near her neck

NOO..
She can't be anyone else's
She is His jaan..

He got up from his chair..

She got up from her place and ran to him..

They hugged each other tightly..

Ishita- plz raman..take me from here
I want to live with u
I love u
U don't want to marry na..
OK,I won't ask it ever
Let me be with u
I don't care what name ppl wil give me
I don't care if thy call our love as AFFAIR..
Take me with u

He saw her..

How wrong he is..
Here she s ready to bear anything for him
But can't he just marry her

He wiped her tears..
Raman- no ishita..
If ths ppl just need a name for relation..come,I wil marry u

U gt ready to take anything to be with me
Can't I just marry u

Ishita smiled..

They walked towards mandap..
Appa came forward to stop them,but mani stopped him and said NO

He tied mangalsutra.. Pheres completed..
She hugged him happily

Toshi&om got to know abt ths,bcm happy

They came and tk them to bhalla house
Toshiji arranged SR with special flowers..as thy missed mrg

Ishita entered room wearing white Saree
Raman std near window and looking at moon

Ishita ran to him and hugged him from backside

Raman smiled..
Raman- wife have to be shy yaar,but my jaan bcmng bold on her SR

Ishita held his ear..
Raman- chodo yaar

Ishita- I wont spare u,if u give class abt wife's responsibilities
I am ur jaan and wilbe always..

Don't u dare ignore me like other husbands

Raman- never..
So can we start our SR

She blushed
He kissed her,unpinned her pallu and nibbled her earlobe..
She started moaning his name

He kissed her bossoms,removed blouse and then sucked her orbs

They covered themselves with duvet and made love..

They have 4-5 rounds of passionate lovemaking..

He kept his head in her valley

Raman- sorry jaan.. I made u cry lots

Ishita carassing his hair..

Ishita- I understd ur concern raman
U love me a lot..don't want to hurt me

But I stucked btwn appa,and u..

I want to say thank you to u raman..

Raman- no thank you,sorry jaan..
This room deserves to be filled with us moaning each other names..

Ishu- besharam

Raman- don't be like boring wife..
As thy say I have work,someone wil come..blah blah
Huh

Ishita pulled him upwards.

Ishita- when I said NO..
Come on

And again thr lovemaking started..

They lived happily ever after

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beautiful and amazing os dear
love it
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Its based on swayamvaram telugu movie right..
But beautifully written by you more interesting than that movie
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Originally posted by: Suma1012

Its based on swayamvaram telugu movie right..
But beautifully written by you more interesting than that movie
Awesome os loved it


Yeah..
I mentioned that before writing story..
Did modifications,but concept s based on that movie
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lovely os
raman loved her bt didn't want to marry her thinking it will affect their relationship
finally they gt married

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