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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: sweetdivya24
Superbly fantastic update
Loved it totally
Loved raman's linebazi
He was high on flirting..
Ishita also started liking him...interesting
Update soon
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Thank you so much dear
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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Hello friends...
Am back with a new update...
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Part 8:

Raman and his friends gang as usual were at the entrance of the college... His friends were chatting randomly and teasing and ragging everyone around... But raman was impatiently waiting for ishita...

Raman : yeh lolita bhi na... Abhi tak nahi aay... Kahi ghar jaakar so gai hogi toh... Nahi... Nahi... She promised me that she will be coming... Phir itna late kyu kar rahi hai... yeh ladki bhi na pagal kardegi mujhe... He was pacing to and fro looking at the gate from time to time...

He smiled widely seeing ishita entering the college in her Scooty...

Raman : wah meri lolita... Aagai...

She was wearing a black salwaar sleeveless... With minimal make up on her face... She left her hair open, which flew in the air for the cool breeze... It was a complete treat for raman to watch...

Raman : Kya ladki hai yaar... Uff lolita you are killing me baby... You will be the reason for my death... He said dreamily lost in her angelic Beauty... Seeing her raman immediately hide himself behind the tree to see her reaction...

She parked her scooty and saw raman and friends as usual involved in thier naughty acts... Her eyes scanned for raman...

Ishita : raman's friends are here... Par yeh raman kahan gai... College aaya bhi ya nahi ...

Raman : Oh my god... My lolita is searching for me... He totally enjoyed her restlessness... The way she was fiddling with her dupatta looking around her in search of him... He in a slow motion made his entry from behind the tree...
Seeing him ishita smiled widely walking towards them...

Mihir : oye romi... Udhar dekho... yeh ishita kyun hamari taraf aarahi hai... Woh bhi aise muskurake... Jaise koi boy friend se milne jaise...

Raman blushes listening to thier talks... Without taking his eyes off ishita...

Mani : aap logon ko nahi patha haina... Meine ishu ko pata liya... She is coming to meet me I guess... He said smiling like a fool...

For which raman gave a deadly glare to him...

Romi : kya tum aur ishita ko?... That too within such a short period of time.. bakwas...

Mani : lagi shart... Ab dekho... Mani got down from his bike putting his goggles on with full style... and took few steps ahead smiling at ishita...

Mani : hello... Ishu... Good morning..

Ishita : ishu?... Yeh mani bhi na... Bahot chipku hai... She muttered under breath... Good morning she faked smile... And looked at raman who was standing in the corner watching all this...

Mani : ishu... You need any help?... You can feel free to ask me any kind of help ishu...

Romi : haan... You can ask him any kind of help... He is always free... Koi kaam vaam nahi hai iski... Waise bhi college mein bhi kuch kaas nahi karta hai... You can use him for any kind of work... He said laughing loudly giving a hifi to mihir... Ishita too laughed with them...

Mani gave a I will kill you look at him...

Raman (St): madrasan... How beautiful you look when you laugh like this whole heartedly... Bas Zindagi baar tumhe aise muskurake dekhna chahoonga...

Mani : chup karo warna maar daloonga saale... He said leaning towards romi...

Mani : ishu... Nee ivanunge pechellam kekadhe vetti pasange... Naan irukken unaku... (ishu.. You don't listen to thier talks... They are just useless people... I am there for you) He said holding her hands... Making raman burn in jealousy...

She shrugged his hands immediately...
Fake smiling...

Raman : abey yeh toh kuch zyada hi fast chal raha hai... Ab dekho mein tera kya karoonga... He smiled wickedly... Seeing his friend raj going by that side...

Raman : raaj... Raaaj... He shouted loudly gaining everyone's attention...

Raj came towards them with his head down...

Ishita's eyes popped listened to the name...

Raj: kya hai raman... Kyun bulaya mujhe...

Raman : arey mere bhai itna udhas kyun ho...

Raj: tumhe nahi pata hai kya... Woh...

Raman : haan... Haan Kyun pata... You and your lover had a fight right...

Raj: hmm...He said in a sad kyun...

Raman : mani... Kyun yaar aise kyun karta hai tum...

Mani : mein?... Meine kya kiya...

Raman leaned forward and pulled mani by his arms...

Raman : abey sun... This is very good chance make use of it and impress your ishu... He whispered in his ears...

Mani : raman... Kaise yaar... Please batao na... I need to impress ishita...

Ishita was trying hard to listen to thier talks but she wasn't able to hear even a single word...

Raman : dekho... Ab raj bahot udas hai... Because he fought with his girlfriend... Tum kuch karo... Cheer him up... Tabhi ishita ko lagega na... Awee how sweet mani is... He is concerned of everyone...

Mani : raman... Tum toh genius ho yaar... Abhi dekho mera performance... He said folding his shirt all set to console raj...

Raman went near ishita and stood beside her...

Ishita : raman... Raj... Mani.. Yeh...

Raman : haan ishita... Bechare dono ke beech kuch ladai hogai hai... That is what I was advising him... To console raj... It is not good to fight with our loved ones right...

Ishita : awee raman... You are so sweet bilkul teek kaha tum ne...

Raman : wah beta... Isse kehte hai... Chance pe dance... How genius you are raman... He praised himself... In his mind...

Mani went towards raj and hugged him Trying to cheer him up... Raj broke out crying dramatically in his arms...

Ishita was totally shocked seeing the scene in front of her eyes... She stood numb to react...

Raj : woh ladki aise kaise kar sakti hai bhaiii... He cried louder...

Ishita : raman... Kis ladki ke baare mein baat kar rah hai...

Raman : woh.. Hmm... Possessiveness... Mani na kal ek ladki se baat kar raha tha... That is why in dono ko beech mein ladai hue hain...

Ishita : Ohhh... She said in a low tone totally confused by thier behavior...

He took a deep breath for managing the situation...

Raman : Yeh lolita bhi na... So innocent... She believes everything... He laughed at the way she was looking at them...

Raman : oyee mani... Chalo... Poor raj kitna udas hai... He would have not had his breakfast too... Tum usse canteen le chalo aur kuch kilao bichare ko... He said trying to chase them from there...

Mani : Wah yeh raman... Kitna acha plans banata hai... If I take raj to the canteen now... Ishu will be completely impressed by my helping nature... He thought for himself... Ishu... Tum yahi ruko... I will be back soon... Poor raj he needs me now... He said and showed thumbs up to raman and went from there taking his gang of friends with him...

Raman : saale... Meri girlfriend ko mere saamne pataoge kya... Abhi dekho meri lolita tumse kaise bagegi ... He smiled naughtily... Thinking of poor mani...

Raman : finally... Sab log gayein... Ab tum bolo lolita... He sighed in relief and placed his hands on her shoulder...

For which he earned a glare from her...

Raman : oops... Sorry... ishita... He said taking back his hands in jiffy... Making her smile at him...

Raman : thank you... He went closer and husked in her ear... Seeing her smile like that...

Ishita : thank you kyun?... She asked confused...

Raman : hmm.. Bahot saare thank you bolna hai.. Sunna chahti ho...

Ishita just looked on ...

He plucked some flowers from the garden area nearby and handed her a flower...

She took back a step with hesitation...

Raman smiled at her verywell knowing why she was hesitant...

Raman : daro mat ishita... I am not gonna propose you now...

She took a deep breath and smiled at him...

Raman : woh sab baad mein... He said winking at her...

Ishita : baad mein kya... She asked verywell knowing what he meant...

Raman : kuch nahi... Pehle lets concentrate on this Thank you speech...

Ishita : Thank you speech? Tum bhi na raman.. She smacked his arms playfully..

Raman : ye lo.. This one is for accepting me as your friend.. Kal raat deno kuch nahi tha na...Thank you... He gave a her a flower... She took that from him with wide smile...

Raman : this one is for coming to college on my insistence...

Ishita : haan... Tum ne bola Miku will miss me na isiliye aay hoon warna mein nahi aane waale thi.. She said taking the flower...

For which raman made a dirty face... Making her laugh at him ...

Ishita : kyun ruk gai continue karo...

Raman : hmmm... Ye lo... This one is for wearing my favorite color salwaar...

Ishita : Black is your favorite color?... Mujhe toh nahi pata tha... She said taking the flower...

Raman : nahi... Blue is my favorite... tumhe blue mein dek kar... Black mere favourite colour ban gai... He said smiling cheekily...

Ishita : nautanki ho tum ekdum... Itne saare cheese lines kahan se laate ho... She said smiling at his cute antics...

Raman : woh sab tumhe dek kar aapne aapme ander se Uber ke nikal aata hai he said raising his collar... Making her smile wholeheartedly... and ye lo final thanks... For this beautiful smile... Aise hi tumhe zindagi bar muskurate dekna chaloonga... Kya mein tere iss muskaan ki wajah ban sakta hoon...

She looked deeply into his eyes listening to his confession... Sharing a brief eyelock... Raman saw her lost in her world...

Raman : kya hua lolita kuch toh bolo... He said waving his hands infront of her...
Making her come out of thoughts...

Ishita : hmm... Woh.. She stammered still lost on his thoughts... Kya bola...

Raman : kya mein zindagi bhar tere... Tere .. Tere?

Ishita : meri kyaaa...

Raman : teri dost ban sakta hoon?... Friends for life? He said forwarding the flower... Flashing his dimpled smile...

Ishita(St) : hayee yeh raman na mujhe pagal kar dega... Look at that killer smile... Uff... I feel like biting that dimpled cheeks...

Raman : bolo na lolita... He said impatiently...

Ishita : hmm... I will be your friend... Friends for life... She said taking the last flower from him..

Raman (St): hayee mein mar jawaan... We will be together forever... Bas jaldi meri biwi ban jao lolita... He blushed thinking of his thoughts...

Ishita : tk raman... So mein chalti hoon...

Raman : arey... kyun?... Kahan?..

Ishita : kahan matlab class aur kahan...

Raman : jaana Zaroori hai kya... He said making a puppy face...

Ishita : aur nahi toh mein kya karoongi..
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Raman : aao na baitke batein kartein hai...

Ishita : wahi toh kiya hai na hum kal raat bar... Mein chalti hoon raman... Phir class ke liye late hojayega... She said bidding bye to him...

Raman followed her like a puppy...

Ishita : tum kahan aa rahi ho...

Raman : just to drop you... Classroom tak...

She smiled at him and walked towards her classroom...

Ishita : tk raman bye...

Raman : bye he said with a sad pout...

Ishita (St): Oh god yeh raman kitna cute hai... Look at him... Mann hi nahi kar raha hai jaane ko...

She went inside classroom looking back at him from time to time...

Raman : hm... Hmm... Kaise rahoonga mein lolita ke bina... Hey matarani I should wait till lunch break now... He muttered under breath and went from there...

Ishita went inside classroom totally lost in raman's cute antics ... Mihika saw ishita smiling widely... She smiled back thinking she is smiling at her... But ishita walked past mihika going towards the last bench...

Mihika : yeh ishu ko kya hogaya... Ishu... Ishu... She called her loudly making her come out of her thoughts...

Ishita : Oh Miku tum wahan ho kya... She said hitting her head and settled beside mihika...

Mihika : ishu... Kya hua.. Where are you lost... Kal raat ko kaha thi... Aunty ne mujhe call kya... She was so worried for you...

Ishita explained everything to mihika with constant smile on her face...

Mihika : ishu... Ek baat batao... Uss pervert raman bhalla ke saath tum library mein locked thi... What is there to blush in this...

For which she gave a deadly glare...

Mihika : kya aise kyun ghoor rahi ho...

Ishita : pehle kaan kolke sunlo... Raman is a very nice person... He is not a pervert... You know Miku... Poori raat he never tried to misbehave with me... Haan... He was quite irritating... But cute too... And secondly I am not blushing ok she said pointing her finger towards her..

Mihika : Ohhh... Raman is a nice person, cute aur kya kya hai ishu... Meine kab kaha he is a pervert... You were the one who would usually curse him... Woh pervert hai that this and all.. aaj ek hi din mein aise kya hogaya... Aur itne saare phool... Yeh bhi teri woh mr.pervert oops sorry Mr.perfect ne diya hai kya... She said in a teasing tone...

Ishita : chup Miku... She slapped her arms... Tum waise soch rahi ho aise kuch nahi... He is just my friend...

Mihika :meine ne toh kuch bhi nahi socha... meine bhi wahi kahan... That raman is your boy friend... Raman ek ladka hai... Aur teri friend... So boy friend haina ishuuu...

Ishita : tum abhi chup nahi rahoge ya... Maar kaaogi... She said twisting her ears... Making mihika struggle under her hold...

Before they could talk further the lecturer entered the class... And started his lecture... Mihika was busy concentrating on her lecture... But ishita was totally lost in mihika's words...

Ishita (St): yeh Miku bhi na.. Raman mere boy friend and all kya kya bol rahi hai... Haan... Hai raman bohot cute isiliye cute kaha meine... Ekdum cutiepie... Friends for life? She caressed the flowers imagining his hot killer smile... Par boy friend aur raman... Isko toh kitne saare girl friends hai... Aur woh sab fashionista kind of girls hai.. Par Yeh raman ko itne saare girl friends kyun hai... Maanta hoon... He is hot and handsome all girls die for him... Un sab ladkiyon ke chod kar raman kyun mujhse dosti kar raha hai... Mein toh ek simple seedhi saadhi ladki hoon.. oh god ishu... Tum bhi na kya kya soch rahi ho... Chodo woh sab batein... Raman is just your friend and nothing more than that... She said composing herself trying to concentrate on the lecture...

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aditi

@aditi12ishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#503

me first

res.

unres.

so raman wants to show mani as gay in front of ishu.

it was really hilarious.

and raman unique way of telling thank u was nice.

amd ishu is slowly falling for him.

thanks for pm.

continue soon

Edited by aditi12ishra - 8 years ago

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keyzest

@keyzest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#504

Awesome update

Naughty raman zz making all da plans to win his lolitaz lobe

Poor mani..raman made him a fool

How cn mani eye his lolita

Raman z making all da cute faces infront of ishu making her go awee

He z following her like a puppy

Iahu too started developing a soft corner towards raman

Update soon

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sirisha

@jakkula.sirisha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#505

lovely update
ladki pat gayi
ramans thoughts not leaving ishu
she is smiling continuesly
ladki hasi tho phasi
contnue soon

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#506

Awesome chappy Di

Funny too

Update soon Di

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Awesome chappy Di
Funny too
Update soon Di

Thanks for pm Di

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#509

Lovely update
Puttar enjoying her restlessness wen she WS searching for him ..hahah
Mani eying ishita puttar made super plan Mani bay with raj n puttar faking stories abt them ahahaha..she is smitten by puttar he gave her flowers with thank you speech ..he is indeed cute
Mihika teasing ishu hahah
Waiting for next