Ishra SS_Aashiq surrender hua...[part11 on page 123, 3Rd sep]

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: fSharm
Ishra met at a very bad situation...
Raman is sooo hurt...
Met with the accident...
Even then Raman mesmerized with ishita...
Superb dear..
Update sooon..

Thank you sharmin

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: varna_varma
Awesome update...
plz continue soon...

Thank you vl Update shortly

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
Part 1
Awesome one.
Romi's wish is so funny yaar.
Mihir is just opposite.
Abhimanyu too.
Raman's entry was cool.
Divya is here. Where is Abhishek?
Ishita seems to be simple and sweet.
IshRa are opposite

Thank you for the lovely comment
Am glad that you Liked it .

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
Part 2
I honestly loved the image 😆
Nice part
Raman met with an accident.
Ishita took him to hospital
Raman saw her blurred image and sensed her fear.
His friends ragging her.

Thanks...
Am glad that you Liked the image...

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

waiting for the next update

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Hello friends...
Am back with a new update...
Do comment your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
- Love viji... ❤️

Part 3:

Raman's friends reached hospital and rushed towards raman's ward... They saw raman's mother sitting beside him making orange juice with a small juicer scolding him for his carefree attitude...

Toshi : kitni dafa bola meine... Bike deere chalao... Par mere baat tum sunte kaha ho... Puttar these days you don't even come home properly .. Aur tere papaji ji bhi tum par bahot gusse mein hai...

None of her words reached raman's ears he was lost in some deep thoughts...

His friends entered the room...Seeing his friends his mother started another round of drama with them... Raman was irritated Seeing her not stopping her non stop chants...

Raman : maa... Bas karo yaar.. Ab aap in logo ko kyun paka rahi ho... Please maa... Aap ghar jao... I am completely fine now... Mein kudh ghar aagaonga...

Toshi : deka meine bola na... Kaise apne maa se baat kar raha hai.. Even your papaji is angry on you...

Raman : maa kya papaji papaji karke sar kaa rahe ho... Aap jao yahan se... Mujhe unke baare mein kuch nahi sunna... He said in a louder tone...

His friends were feeling uncomfortable seeing him behaving like that to his mother...

Toshi walked out of the room shedding tears...

Romi: raman... Tum maa se aise kyun baat kar raha hai...

Mihir : haan raman... This is not right... Poor her... She loves you that is why she us concerned about you man...

Raman : arey yaar tum log bhi shuru mat hojana... Even I love her equally... I will speak to her later and console her... You guys don't worry about that... Aap log yeh batao... Ashok ko kahin dekha?..

Abhimanyu : raman ... Tum pagal ho kya phirse ashok... Stop fighting with him... Tera haal dekha.. Thank god kisi ladki ne sahi time par tumhe hospital le aaya.. Warna kya hua hoga...

Romi : haan yaar... Kaun hai woh ladki... Tumne dekha hai kya usse...

That's when the whole incident flashed in raman's mind... He was recollecting the entire scene that was echoing in his ears... How a girl fought with auto driver to save him... How she was giving him hopes... He was Trying hard to recollect her face but only her voice and blurred image was visible... His head started aching as he pressurized himself... His trance was broken by mihir's voice..

Mihir : raman... Are you listening... Where have you lost...

Raman : haan.. Woh.. I dont know who that girl is.. Aur waise bhi mujhe pata karna hoga... He said smiling widely..

All his friends knew verywell, why playboy raman wants to know about the girl..They just gave a glare seeing him smiling like that...

Abhimanyu : tum na kabhi bhi nahi sudhrega raman... Hospital bed par bhi tumhe ladki patane ke baare mein soch rahi ho na...

Raman : arey... I just wanted to thank her... Warna mein kyun pochoonga... He said with a naughty smile...

Romi : arey woh sab chodo... Raman you know what aaj college mein ek ladki dekha hai... By god.. How beautiful she was.. I have fallen for her completely he said dreamily...

Abhimanyu : romi... I already told you... Don't try to hit on her... She is going to be your bhabhi...

Both started thier tu tu mein mein... Making raman and Mihir laught at them giving a hi fi...

Mihir : par raman... To tell the truth.. Woh Ladki toh really bohot sundar thi...

Raman : aise konsi ladki hai... That you all are prasing so much... Mujhe bhi dekhna hai bhai... He said taking the goggles from mihir's tee and putting on with a full on attitude...

Abhimanyu : hey raman... I know what is running in your mind.. But yaar this time I am serious.. So kuch gad bad mat karna...

Raman : arey relax relax... Abhi ke liye.. Mere pass kuch aur important kaam hai...Pehle mujhe jo ladki mujhe bachaya na usse doondna hoga... So.. I have no time for that girl of yours...

After a long chit chat session raman's friends left from there.. Even raman dozed of due to the effect of Medicine..

Later in night toshi came with some lite home made food...

Raman saw her sad face and felt bad for his behavior earlier this morning... She silently served the food on plate and placed it on the bed...

Raman : maa... Aap nahi kilaoge mujhe?.. He asked making a puppy face...

Toshiji took the plate in her hands and started feeding him without uttering anything...

Raman : maa sorry na... Aap abhi tak gussa ho... Kitne baar meine kahan papa ke baare mein mat baat karo...

Toshiji : puttar i know papaji ne tum par haat utakar bohot galat kiya... But he is your dad... You should forgive him... She said in a pleading voice...

Raman : maa please na... Baar baar iske baare mein baat mat karo... I will never forget the way he insulted me... And I will never forgive him too...

Toshi : par puttar...

Raman : maa please... Unke baare mein baat karna hai toh aap yahan se chale jao... He said stopping her hands that was feeding him...

Toshi : tk tk... Mein kuch nahi bologi tum kao... She said feeding him...

Raman : wah maa... Aapka haath ka kaana kaa kar... I have become perfectly fit and fine now... He said maskafying her...

Toshi : oyee kothe... Maska mat maaro... She said smiling at him...

Raman : maa... Aap na best maa ho... I am sorry meine aapse aise baat kiya... He said hugging her...

Toshi : koi baat nahi puttar... Bas Tum jald se teek hojao... She said pecking his forehead...

...

Next day ishita was sitting in her class waiting for the class to start...A girl came and sat next to her passing a smile...

Girl : hi.. I am mihika.. She said forwarding her hand..

Ishita : hello, ishita... Told with a gentle handshake...

Mihika : ishita... Maine kal tumhe nahi dekha... Is this your first day at college..

Ishita : Oh yah ... Yesterday I missed morning classes... And came for the afternoon classes.. But was again blocked by seniors... Raging you know...

Mihika : haan yaar... They told that there is no raging in this college but... These senior guys are so rude... But don't worry hum bhi kam todi na hai... We will teach them a good lesson... She said with a wink.. Making ishita laugh for her comment...

Both started indulging themselves in a nice chat session... It was lunch break... Ishita and mihika were going towards the cafeteria... The famous boys gang of the college stopped them blocking their way...

Abhimanyu : hi ishita... How come you are here?.. Lunch karne ay ho kya... He asked smiling like a fool...

Mihika : Nahi...kisine kahaan yahan circus chal raha hai so we came to watch the show...
Ishita giggled at her comment...

Seeing abhi's reaction all his friends started laughing with hifi's...

Abhi : oyee ladki zyada zuban mat chalao... I am speaking to her... Tum kyun beech mein aa rahi ho...

Mihir : arey yaar abhi aise kyun daat rahi ho.. Toda pyaar se baat karo na...

Mihika : hame jaana hoga... Please hame jaane do na handsome... She said in a flirty tone coming infront of mihir...

Romi : haan... Haan aap jaayiye na... Arey abhi... Why are you troubling them... He said in a flirty tone...

Ishita and mihika left from there taking a deep breath...

Mihir : oye... Romi... What was that... He said glaring at him...

Romi: kya...

Mihir : uss ladki se aise kyun daant dikao rahe ho...

Romi : Oh mihir... Chill yaar... Oyee abhi ab tera track clear hai... Mujhe ishita nahi chahiye... This girl is mine... He said with a dreamy smile... Making abhi happy...

Mihir : kya bakwas kar rahe ho... You were the one who chose ishita... Stick in to that... Now don't change your mind... She is mine... Don't try to play your tricks on her...

Romi: arey if u chose ishita yeh beech mein aa raha hai... He said pointing towards abhi... Ab yeh ladki chuna toh... You are coming in-between... Mujhe nahi pata I want this girl as my girlfriend... Both started fighting as if kids fighting for candies...
Both mihir and romi started fighting for mihika...

Whereas abhi made a happy dance seeing them fighting like that ..
Abhi: thank god... Mere track toh clear hai ab... He said smiling like a fool...

Precap : ishra meet?...

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

wonderful update
Raman wants to know about ishu
mihika and ishu became friends
now romi and Mihir are fighting for mihika lol
do continue soon

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Twinkle Solanki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Superb update
Continue soon
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thanks for pm

- TWINKLE

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Kadianvi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Awesome. Raman behaved rudely to his maa but later apologize to her. He didn't remember her face and wants to meet her to thanks her or flirt. Gang told him about new girl. Abhi want ishita and Mihir wants Mihika but poor Romi koi Na koi beech me aa jata ha. Waiting for Ishra meeting. Update soon