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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen99

Superb updt di...

I fully enjoyed it...
I love Raman's character in this story...
Raman is cute and nautenkibaaz
Loved how he calks her lolita...
Raman full flirt hai..
He is following ishita everywhere..
Ishita calls he Prevert...
Raman full on dramebaaz hai ishita ne Prevert bulaya to kitna drama kiya saying she is caling Prevert to Sharif ladka...
Ishita is trying to call her amma to inform her that she won't be able to come...
Ishita is full jkr... Raman ko warnings de rahi thi dur rahene ko...
Raman scared ishita telling her not to open window as snake will come inside...bechare ishita darr ke maare baith gayi...
Raman is chipku aashiq hai pura...loved his flirting with ishita...
Chipkali wala scene funny tha di... Awesome idea di...Chalo ussi bahane raman ko hug bhi mil gayi ishita se
I hope raman truly loves ishita he is even ready to change himself for her...
Raman ne Jo ishita ki tarif ki vo genuine tarif ki hai
Di make ishita fell in love with raman soon...
Last scene was beautiful ishra slept cutely...
Do updt soon di jaldi se aur ha I very well remember u r stories...
Thnx for pm


Thank you so much
For the lovely comment amreen..
Am glad that you Liked it
Vl Update shortly
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi12ishra

is raman is real in the story.

here ishu is not giving him any chance.
and he is talking about marriage and kids.
like really.
but seriously i am loving the character of raman.
and finally the friendship occurred.
not to forget the lizard part was really hilarious.
thanks for pm
continue soon.


Thank you so much aditi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanAngel

Amazing update didu

Ishita and raman locked in library
Raman is happy with ishita and
Doing cute Antics ishita is laughing
Seeing his cute Antics raman ask
They can be friends and ishita
Accept his friendship
Cont soon thanks for pm didu


Thank you so much
For the lovely comment dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: keyzest

So sweet update

Mr.lizard did his part very well
Raman z making all da cute puppy faces to win his lolita
Oopz his wild dreams
He has already married her n have babies tooo
So cute
Finally friends
N it wl surely change to ardent lovers very very soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelydivan

Sooo beautiful update
I like it very much and raman is so cute
Lizard give raman a good chance
He is even dreaming about their kids
Finally they become friends
Hmmm need some friendship moments and some lovely cute moments between ishra


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

Lovely update di
raman enjoying bothering ishita
seriously he dreamt within seconds
ishra bcm frnds
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm


Thank you akku
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

I loved it
I totally totally totally loved it
And the picture before the update
Their expressions... Maar dala
Raman was just so cute here...
Love him always
Sorry for the late reply


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Am glad that you Liked it...
No worries dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaN

fantastic and super cute update
Raman is so naughty
finally ishu accepted him as her friend
do continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: myangels

Nice update...

Ishita was searching for network...
Raman was following her and enjoying the view...
Raman is cute...
Raman was trying to talk with her...
ishita was showing attitude...
Ishita hugged Raman due to lizard..
Raman went to his dream land ...a happy family with her...
They became friends...
Plz update soon...
Thank u...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends..
Am back with a new update...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading...
- Love viji ❤️




Part 7:

Ishita was sleeping peacefully keeping her head on raman's shoulder... Raman was wide awake cursing the mosquitos for disturbing his sleep... He slapped his cheeks irritated and was Waving his hands in air to shoo away the mosquitoes protecting ishita from mosquito bites... He smiled seeing her sleeping like a baby snuggled into him...

Raman : how could someone be so cute while sleeping... He said admiring her angelic face... Few strands of hair fell on her face disturbing his view.. He inched closer and tucked the hair strands behind her earlobe... She pouted in irritation sensing some movements on her face...
He slowly bent down and patted her cheeks making her sleep... He saw her shivering a bit due to the cold weather... He took her dupatta in his hands and was about to cover her with it... But she snuggled more closer to him wounding her hands around his waist... Bringing her head from his shoulder to his chest... With the cute pout on her face... Making him go crazy...

Raman : Oh god... This girl will make me go crazy with her innocent acts... How I wish I could taste these cherry lips... Lolita... Aise pout mat banao baby... Phir kuch galat kar baitoonga... He caressed her face adoring her sleeping form...

Ishita : muthu... Sone do na.. She said irritated rubbing her cheeks...

Raman : muthu?... Yeh muthu kaun hai... yeh jkr toh chupa rustam Nikli.. Koi boy friend bhi hai kya iski... Haan hoga boy friend... Akhir itni khoobsoorat jo hai... Hey matarani... Ab mein kaise iski breakup karwaon?... He tried to part her away him...

Ishita : muthu... Baby... Mamma ko sone dho... She said irritated...

Raman : Oh teri!... Mamma?.. Yeh kaise hua... Isko bacha bhi hai... ab gai bhais paani mein... Mere saare sapne mein paani per diya... Oyee... Lolita... Uto... He said patting her cheeks...

She got up with the jerk startled by his sudden action ..

Ishita : kya hua... Mein kidhar hoon... She said looking around... You pervert... Tum mere dupatta ke saath kya kar rahe ho... Give back my dupatta... She snatched the dupatta from him... Dekho I know we are alone.. Iska matlab yeh nahi that you will take advantage of me... Mujhe kam mat samajhna.. I know karate... So beware... She warned him pointing her finger towards him...

Raman : arey meri maa... You were the one who was hugging me... Aur tumhe tand lag rahi thi... Isiliye I took your dupatta to cover you...

Ishita just looked on and covered herself properly with her dupatta and sat little away from him... Passing a deadly glare at him...

Raman : yeh ladki bhi na... Dekho kaise ghoor rahe hai... As if I raped her... He muttered to himself...

Ishita : kya bad bada rahi ho..

Raman : usse tumhe kya matlab hai... He said irritated..

Ishita : haan... mujhe kya matlab hai... Tum pagal ki tarah bad badate raho... She said and looked at her watch... Oh god aur kitna samay... Subha hogai... Abhi tak yeh librarian kyun nahi aaya hai...

Raman : pagal ladki... Akal naam ki cheez hai ki nahi... It's only 6 itni jaldi kaisa ayega librarian... He said irritated...

Ishita : arey tumhe kya hogaya... Kal raat toh itna sweetly baat kar rahe the.. Ab aise khadoos ban ke kyun baite ho...

Raman : mere saare sapne mein paani per ke... Khadoos ban ke kyun baite ho... Chup raho tode der yaar...

Ishita : kya sapne... Kya bol rahe ho... Teri problem kya hai... Why are you so irritated...

Raman : arey yaar todi der akele chodo mujhe... Kab dekho... Bak bak... Karte rahte hoo... He said and got up from there and went and stood little away from her ...

Ishita : ajeeb admi hai yaar... She said giving a unbelievable look...

Raman : hey matarani... Aise kyun kiya aap mere saath... Ishita ki bachi... Like really... Shakal se toh bachi maa nahi lag rahi hai... Bachi hai toh iska pati kahan hai? Kahin divorce todi na ho gai.. Par she is so happy, divorcee kaise ho sakti hai... Boyfriend hai toh... Breakup easily karwa sakta hoon... Ab iski pati se divorce kaise karwaon... Pagal madrasan mujhe pagal kardiya... He was glacing her from time to time standing away from her...

He saw looking at her phone and smiling cutely...

Raman : aise kisse dek kar has rahi hogi... Oyee aunty... He called her in irritation...

Ishita: how dare you... Mein kis angle se tumhe aunty dikta hoon... She said in her jkr avtar... Coming towards him...

Raman (St): dekne mein toh nahi dikti haina... Wahi toh problem hai...

Raman : woh... Galti se... Mujhe tumhe dek kar meri aunty... Pammi aunty ji yaad aagai isiliye... He said taking a step back fearing of her...

Ishita just glared at him...

Raman : sorry yaar... Now please stop staring at me...

Ishita : teekhe bolo kyun bulaya...

Raman : woh phone dek kar kyun has rahi ho...

Ishita : usse tera kya matlab hai...

Raman : mera koi matlab nahi hai... Just like that... Socha toda General knowledge bada doon... He said cutely peeping into her phone...

Ishita : raman... Tum na... Ekdum pagal ho.. She said giving a unbelievable look...

Raman : bolo na ishita ... Ab toh hum friends haina...

Ishita : friends?.. Yeh kab hua...

Raman : arey gajni ki behan hai kya... Kal raat jab chipakali idhar chipak rah tha... He said touching her shoulder...

She shrugged his hands... Giving a angry glare...

Raman : I mean... Meine help kiya na.. then we became friends... Don't you remember...

Ishita : haan toh kya...

Raman: toh bolo na Kya hai aise tere phone me...

Ishita : ok.. I will tell... No.. No... Il show you something idhar aao... She said with wide smile...

Raman : aise kya dikane wali ho...

Ishita : woh mera baby ka photo...

Raman made a sad face and stood beside her...

Ishita : yeh dekho yeh hai mera baby muthu... She said showing the pic in her phone...

Raman : kyaaa... Yeh muthu?... Oh god... Yeh kutha muthu hai... He said laughing like a fool...

Ishita : raman... Yeh kutha nahi hai... She said with a angry pout...

Raman : Oh sorry hamare yahan toh isse kutha hi kehte hain... Chennai mein kuthe ko kya kehte hain...

Ishita : ramann... Phirse kutha mat bolo... Mujhe gussa ayega... Yeh mera beta hai... Mein uska mamma... She said carresing the pic in her phone..

Raman (St): thank you matarani... Iss pagal ki chakkar mein todi der mein mujhe heart attack aane waale tha... Kaise pagal hai... But soo cute... Look at her...koi Itna cute kaise ho sakta hai... Awee my baby... I feel like eating you up... He said looking at ishita who was busy admiring her muthu...

Ishita : raman... See this pic... Muthu and me... She said showing her pic with muthu...

Raman : ishita... Your muthu is soo cute yaar... He said kissing her pic...

Ishita : that's me not muthu.. Muthu idhar hai... She said glaring at him...

Raman : Oh sorry... Galti se.. Instead of kissing this side I kissed this side he said smiling cheekily...

Ishita : raman... You know... My baby would have not slept whole night... Bechara... Pata nahi what my baby will be doing...

Raman (St): what else will a dog do... It will be barking you crazy girl...

Ishita :He would be worried for me Raman... She said sadly...

Raman : muthu... Aap chinta mat karo... Aapki mamma ko papa ache se kayal rakoonga... He said looking at the pic...

Ishita : kyaa.. She asked completely shocked...

Raman : kya hua...

Ishita : yeh kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum...
Papa and all...

Raman : arey isme bakwas kya hai... If someone is so cute kisi ko bhi pyaar ho jaayega na... He said looking at her face...

She just gave a cold stare...

Raman : I mean muthu... Muthu Itna Pyaara hai mujhe usse pyaar hogaya... Jaise tum usse apni beta maanti ho pyaar se.. Mein bhi pyaar se beta maan sakta hoon na... So mein muthu ki papa haina..

Ishita : ha ha... Very smart... She said sarcastically..

Raman : I know... That I am... He said raising his collar proudly...

Ishita : kitna chaalu hai na tum... Kaise line maar rahe ho... Par this will not work with me... Mein koi tere chaal mein phasne wali ladki nahi hai... Got it... She said smiling at the way he was trying to trick her in her own words...

Raman : hayee... Madrasan... Ladki hassi toh phassi... Don't you know that... He said dreamily looking at her... Making her smile at his crazy antics...

...

The time passed in jiffy... The librarian came and switched on the main lights and they heard him opening the door...

Ishita : raman... Lagta hai... Librarian aagai... She said running towards the door in utter happiness...

Raman : kyaa... Itne jaldi?

Ishita turned and glared at him..

Raman : matlab... Wah... Itne jaldi... Kya punctuality hai bande ki...

Ishita : tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na...

Raman : kabhi bhi nahi... He said smiling cheekily...

The librarian opened the door and was shocked to see ishra inside...

Librarian : aap dono ander kaise aay ho...
But before he could talk further... Ishita cut him short...

Ishita : how irresponsible you are... You locked us inside... Without checking properly... Aapke wajah se poore raat hum dono ko ander rehna pada... She was going on on with her round of lecture making him give a confused look...

Raman : ishita... Bas chod dho na... Bechare ko..

Ishita : dekhiye I am warning you... dont repeat this again... Please be little responsible... She said And went out...

Raman : wah... Bhai... Kya kaam kiya tumne... Thank you so much bhai... He said hugging the librarian and kissed his cheeks making him confused... Thank you bhai... He said and ran behind ishita...

Librarian : dono ka dono pagal hai... Ek daat rahi hai... Aur doosra... Kiss kar raha gai... Pagal log... He said hitting his head...

Raman : oyeee... Lolita... Kahan jaa rahi ho.. He ran behind her...

Ishita : ghar... Aur kahan jaaongi...

Raman : Oh... Ghar Jaana Hai na... He said making a sad face... Teekhe... Jaldi jaake freshen up hoke aajao...

Ishita : arey kyun... Aaj mein college nahi aaoongi... I am so tired I need to rest...

Raman : arey yaar... Aise mat bolo... Kya tired... Poori raat pahad todi na tode... Please aajao yaar...

Ishita : kyun raman...

Raman : kyunki... Kyunki... Haan... Teri dost kya naam tha uski...

Ishita : mihika?..

Raman : haan... Mihika tujhe miss karegi na... Tum nahi aaogi toh bichari ro ro kar bura haal kardengi na uski... Aur kaise dost ho tum... Aise apni friend ko akele chod rahi ho.. Aur... Yeh...

Ishita : raman... Ramann... Bas... Saans le lo... Mein aajaongi teekhe... Ab kush...

Raman : haan... Jaldi aajana... I was just worried for your friend... Isiliye... Warna mujhe kya matlab hai...

Ishita : haan... I know... Woh toh mujhe samaj aa rahi hai.. Who will be worried... She said smiling at him.. Verywell knowing who will miss her if she did not come...

She bid bye to him and went from there... He was just standing rooted to the place smiling like a fool looking the way she left... And half heartedly left from there to freshen and be back as soon as possible...

...

Ishita reached her home and was bombarded with n number of questions from her parents...

Ishita : appa... Amma... Relax... Dono... Idhar aao mere saath... Baito idhar... She made them sit on the couch... Paani chahiye?..

Amma : ishu... Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum... Where were you whole night... You know how worried we were for you...

Appa : ishu... Bolo beta... Kaha thi tum...
Ishita explained the whole scenario to her parents cursing the irresponsible librarian...

Amma : aise kaise kar sakta hai woh... Ishu... I think you should inform the management regarding this...

Amma was worried for her and questioning her continously...

Appa : madhu... Let her go rest for sometime... Look at her she looks so tired... Tum Jao beta... He said caressing her hair...

Ishita went to her and and was welcomed by her muthu... Who came running towards her licking her toe...

Ishita : awee muthu... Mera bacha... Mamma ko miss kiya aapne... She said picking muthu in her arms... He started liking her face saying that he missed her lot..

Ishita : awee bas... Bas muthu... Mamma... Will not let you alone here onwards... She said kissing him back...

That's when raman's face flashed in her mind...

"Papa hoon na mamma ki kayal rakhne ko"... His words echoed in her mind...

Ishita : papa?.. Like really... Nautanki hai... Poore ke poore dramebaz hai... Par he is cute too... She said smiling thinking of Raman's naughty and cute antics...

She freshened up quickly and got ready to college and came out of her room...

Ishita : amma jaldi break fast lagao... Mujhe late ho raha hai...

Amma : kahan jaa rahi ho ishu ...

Ishita : college amma...

Amma : ishu... You should rest today kanna... Jao rest karo...

Ishita : Nahi amma... Mujhe jaana hai...

Amma : kyun?... Ek din mein kya hojayega...

Ishita : woh.. Ram.. I mean... Meri important class hai aaj... I can't miss that...

Amma : teekhe... Ruko... Il serve you Breakfast...

Ishita : yeh raman ki wajah se... Mujhe amma se jhoot bolna pad raha hai... Aur kya karoon... Aise cutely maang raha tha... Please aajao... Mihika ke liye... She mimicked him and smiled at his antics...


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