IshRa FF: Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi (Note on Page 10)03.06

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Hello everyone. Well I am back. I am here to start a new Fan Fiction.

IshRa FF: Kuch Rang
Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi
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So, here I am starting one more story. Well this at first it will be written in a simple way but as the story will proceed the way of writing of this story will be changed as per requirements. I know many of you may not be understanding about what I am saying. For example below is the prologue given which I have written in a new way. If you understand, do let me know. And if you don't them also do let me know. I will change it.
This story will be written with, both hindi and english dialogues.

Hope you all like it!
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The below post has the prologue in hindi.
While the post below that has the prologue in english.



Edited by ...Forever... - 8 years ago
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Prologue

Conversation is going on between Ishita Adi & Raman Ruhi

I/R: Adi/Ruhi plz ek baar baat toh suno beta

A/Ru: Nahi mujhe nahi sunni aapki baat, aap jao yahan se

I/R: Lekin beta

A/Ru: Nahi aap mujhse bilkul pyaar nahi karti/karte ho. Mere saare friends k pass mummy papa hai. Lekin mere pass papa bhi nahi hai mummy bhi nahi hai. Aap jao yahan se.

I/R: No beta aisa nahi hai. Mai aapse bahut pyaar karti/karta hoon. I know ki maine bahut saari mistakes ki hai or aapke saath toh bahut bura kiya lekin please mujhe ek chance de do. I promise mai aapko chhodh k kabhi nahi jaungi/jaunga or hamesha aapke saath rahungi/rahuga.

A/Ru: nahi aap jhooth bol rahi/rahe ho aap jao. Mujhe nahi baat karni aapse. Jao.

Ishita/Raman started to leave. Just as she/he was about to step out of the door, she/he heard

A/Ru: rukiye

Ishita/Raman turned

A/Ru: aap sach mein mujhse pyaar karti/karte ho

I/R: haan

A/Ru: aap hamesha mere saath rahogi/rahoge

I/R: haan

A/Ru: theek hai. Toh mai aapko ek chance dunga/dungi

I/R: sach

A/Ru: lekin

I/R: lekin kya

A/Ru: lekin mai aapke saath nahi so-unga/so-ungi. Mai pati/dadi k saath so-unga/so-ungi

I/R(hurt): theek hai

A/Ru: mai aapke hath se khana bhi nahi kha-unga/kha-unga

I/R: theek hai

A/Ru: aap tab bhi mere saath rahogi/rahoge (smiling)

I/R: haan (smiling)

A/Ru: sachhi

I/R: muchhi

Ishita/Raman came forward to hug Adi/Ruhi. But just then

A/R: mai abhi pati/dadi ko bata ke aata/aati hoon

And Adi/Ruhi ran from there without giving a second look Ishita/Ramam

Ishita/Raman looked on hurt.

Edited by ...Forever... - 8 years ago
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Prologue

Conversation is going on between Ishita Adi & Raman Ruhi

I/R: Adi/Ruhi please listen to me once baby

A/Ru: No, I don't want to talk to you. Go away.

I/R: But baby

A/Ru: No, you don't love me. My every friend have parents. But I don't have either mummy or papa. You go away from here.

I/R: No beta it's not like that. I really love you. I know I have done so many wrong things especially with you but please give me one chance. I promise I won't leave you and will always be with You.

A/Ru: no you are lieing. Go away. I don't want to talk to you. Go

Ishita/Raman turned to leave. Just as she/he was about to step out of the room, she/he heard

A/Ru: one minute

Ishita/Raman turned

A/Ru: you really love me

I/R: yes

A/Ru: will you always be with me

I/R: yes

A/Ru: ok then I am giving you one chance

I/R: really

A/Ru: but

I/R: but what

A/Ru: I won't sleep with you. I will sleep with pati/dadi.

I/R(hurt): ok

A/Ru: I won't eat by your hands.

I/R: ok

A/Ru: then also you will be with me(smiling)

I/R: yes (smiling)

A/Ru: sachhi

I/R: muchhi

Ishita/Raman came forward to hug Adi/Ruhi. But then

A/Ru: I will go and tell this to pati/dadi

And Adi/Ruhi ran from there without giving a second look Ishita/Raman

Ishita/Raman looked on hurt.
Edited by ...Forever... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update in a slightly smaller font next time. It'll make it easier for us to read it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start .
But is ht on original yhm .
How old are adiru
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Prologue.😊
The Banner was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is confusing..
Who is talking raman or ishita?
But nyc update
Update soon

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