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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jinan.

Beautiful update.
They confessed finally!!❤️
Waiting for the next.
Thanx for the pm


thnx jinan
glad u lykd it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru

Lovely updare akku .

Ishra kissed each other and for their surprise non of them we're regreting instead tgry liked it .
Both slept reminshing all their moments from childhood to now .
Even Raman had fight with shagun because of his unbreakable relationship with ishita .
Raman was so restless in the morning that he entered ishitas room without knocking and got embrassed .
Atlast both let go their awkwardness and confessed theur feeling .
Update next part soon


thnx di
glad u lykd it
will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely updt sorry for late comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

TS -KAR LE TU BHI MOHABBAT

SHOT 3

4 years later

Ishita woke up caged in those strong pair of arms, her eyes twinkled at the sight of her husband sleeping peacefully after the havoc of the last night, she smiled brightly and adjusted her head just to have a more clear view of his sleeping features. She had seen him, actually admired him in his sleep many times in these four years but she never got tired of doing it. Nothing is more peaceful and serene than admiring your love in his sleep especially when he's sleeping like a cute little baby in your arms. She awed at his sight, that scrunched nose, slightly parted lips, hand resting on her waist and face half buried in the pillow. She bend down and dropped a feather light kiss on his cheek, careful not to disturb him but seems like his peaceful sleep was not acceptable to their little devils as the next moment, they began crying not liking their father getting all of their mother's attention.

"shh adi, ru don't cry baba see papa is sleeping" she picked them from their crib and tried to calm them down as she showed them raman's sleeping figure and ruhi tried to jump out of her hold making her chuckle.

I -yeh achcha hai madam ka, she didn't let me or raman sleep peacefully last night and even now not letting him sleep, mera gandu bachcha

R -come on ish, don't scold my princess

His voice reached her ears making her turn. He got up from the bed and took ruhi from ishita's arms who snuggled to him the very next moment. He pecked her forehead and then adi's who was very calmly playing with ishita's mangalsutra and on a cue, ishita also forwarded her forehead. Raman shook his head at her behaviour, she was still the chotu ishita, nothing had changed.

Ishita shook him bringing him out of his thoughts and pointed to her forehead telling him that she is still waiting for her kiss.

R -ishita, you are a mother of two now, behave like one at least sometimes

I (making a dirty face) -and where is it written that a mother of two can't get a good morning kiss from her husband and waise bhi dil to bachcha hai ji

She beamed a smile getting two pecks from him and adiru began their crying session again. She fed them one by one while raman rocked the other and both kids were back to sleep. He placed them in their crib and joined ishita in bed who seemed to be lost in some thoughts. He shook her to gain her attention and wrapped his arms around her.

R -what are you thinking about?

I -nothing... I was just thinking about the day we had confessed our feelings to the other.

Raman also smiled recalling that day.

FLASHBACK

Soon after ishra confessed their feelings to the other, they had announced the same to their parents, who were more than happy with their kids decision, after all they had always wanted the same. Ishra had got engaged in a week and married soon after too. Their life was passing happily, ishita managed both her clinic and home really well and raman had been really supportive. Her pregnancy had only added to their happiness and she saw a different side of raman, his care and his pampering made her feel like the queen of the world. Their kids were born and they had named them aditya and ruhi, adiru had become the jaan of the whole family in no time.

FLASHBACK ENDS

I -kal ki hi baat lagti hai na raman, how time flies, can't believe adiru have turned one.

R -hmm... though this one year was not easy at all

Both chuckled recalling how they had a really tough time handling two kids together, managing to steal some small moments for themselves and those sleepless nights these two devils had given them, the last night being one of them when ruhi was being extra cranky though adi was being a good boy and had slept on time.

I -raman

R -hmm

I -I wanted to say something

R -yahi na, that our anniversary is nearing

I -hmm... four years of our togetherness

R -yes

I -but this time I want to celebrate it with you and our kids, I want to go on a small vacation with you and adiru... we are usually so busy that we hardly get some family time, so this anniversary, I want to spend some quality time with you and kids, away from our daily life and work stress.

R -that's a good idea. Do you have any location in mind?

I -that is up to you, you decide where we should go, I just want you and my babies with me.

R -okay boss

I -I love you

R -I love you too

I & R -and we love adiru too

Ishra smiled giving an air kiss to the sleeping adiru and soon got busy with their routines. The day passed normally and the evening, raman told everyone that he and ishita are planning a small trip to Mumbai along with the kids. The parents and siblings teased them a little and ishra along with adiru left for Mumbai after two days.

They landed safely and settled in their hotel. Ishra had planned to visit some places and that they would celebrate the night of their anniversary with a candle light dinner in their hotel room only, as they couldn't leave adiru alone.

Ishra visited some places in Mumbai and the kids were really happy seeing the new environment around them. It was a day before their anniversary, ishra decided to go for some shopping. Raman along with adi moved to the men's section to pick something for his boy while ishita took ruhi to the ladies to pick something for herself and ruhi also, though ruhi was making it difficult for her to do anything, she was trying to grab every single thing that her little hands could reach out to.

I -ruhi, stop it baby, let mumma do some shopping na baba

She tried making ruhi understand but she wasn't listening. She felt a tug at her wrist and thinking it to be raman, she turned

I -see na raman, your princess isn't letting me..

Words died in her throat seeing him standing before her after so many years, it wasn't that he affected her anymore or she was hurt that abhi had betrayed her, in fact she was happy and thankful to him for the same, had he not done so, she would have never found her soul mate in raman. She was just surprised seeing him there before her eyes after so many years.

A -hi ishita

I -hmm..hi abhi

A -so how are you doing? Abhi tried to initiate a conversation

I -I am doing great... thank you

Ishita returned a smile and tried engrossing her in her shopping but he wasn't leaving her this easily.

A -I am sorry ishita

I (confused) -sorry for what?

A -I am sorry for all I did to you in the past...it was my fault, I shouldn't have done that, please take me back, let's start afresh

In the men's section, raman and adi were now done with their shopping

R -ok adu, now we are done with our shopping, let's go and see what your mumma and ruhi are doing

Adi smiled showing his consent and raman pinched his cheeks. But before they could go to ishru, a familiar voice gained his attention. He turned and saw shagun standing there. Shagun had been following him ever since he entered the mall and was looking for a way to talk to him, finally she found one. She had been dumped by the same boy for whom she had left raman and now, she was looking for a companion for herself and whom better than raman. But she was surprised seeing him with a kid who so closely resembled him that it was no rocket science to guess it was his baby, still she wanted to have a talk with him as according to her, he still loved her and even if he was married, it would be a marriage of compromise.

S -hello raman

R -hi shagun

S -see raman, I would directly come to the point and not beat around the bush, I realised my mistake, I realised that I did wrong by blaming you, doubting yours and ishita's relationship and I should not have done that, the fact is I have always loved you and I want to be a part of your life again... I know you still love me

Raman smiled lightly seeing her face, he could clearly read why she wanted him back in her life all of a sudden. He thought to answer her his way. He asked her to come along with him and she just nodded.

BACK IN THE LADIES SECTION

A -cute baby, I guess she is raman's..

Abhi said looking at ruhi who was busy playing with the new teddy bear her mumma had bought for her.

R -she is ours

A voice from behind made both turn. Ishita smiled seeing him and so did raman before he authoritatively wrapped his arm around her waist.

R -you were right shagun... you were the one who made me realise what my true love is... she is my true love

He spoke holding ishita's hand making her smile while abhi and shgaun just looked on

R -you know I have always believed that whatever happens, happens for our own good and to be honest, your betrayal had broke me but now that I think, I realise, had that not happened, I would have never realised that I am madly, insanely in love with ishita, I always have loved only her and none else, so thank you for that. We two are really happy in our lives and I pray to god that you two get your deserving partners soon too.

R -good bye, good luck

Abhi smiled seeing the scene as ishita and raman both heeded out of the mall with their kids while him and shgaun were left there only, alone thinking about what they had lost in life due to their own mistakes, though abhi was genuinely happy that his mistake had only benefitted ishita and she was happy in her life, but still somewhere down the line, he was still guilty for what he had done.

Maybe this is what you call life and its nature, it goes on and on without stopping for anyone, we live, we laugh, fall in love, we try to find love forgetting the fact that we don't find love, love finds us and that too at the right time and right place, we just have to wait patiently to get our share of love from life.

He glanced at the happy ishrarudi family one last time and sending a prayer to his god for their well being, moved out of the mall leaving shagun behind who seemed to have got the lesson of her life!!!

THE END

So that's all for this story

Will wait for your responses

LOVE

AKKU

akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
updated the next part
hav a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update...
Raman arrange a trip for family to celebrate their anniversary. Ishita feel bless to hv raman in her life & now with their kids they family is full of happiness. Ishita feel abhi left her for good bzcos she found her soulmate in raman. Raman show shagun how happy he is with his wife & kids...awesome update...thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww so sweet n beatiful adiru soo sweet
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's awesome.
The perfect.
these family of 4 are too adorable.
two soul mates and their twins.
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesom upst
loved it ...

raman cofessed that day anf get married now they hv their lil family ...ISHARUDI ❤️

adi shag comed back to thgem tries to apologies ...bt they get tastre of their own medicine...


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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
ishra are married and proud parents of two adorable kids
they came to Mumbai to celebrate their four year of togetherness
both meet their respective exes in mall
wah raman kya Jamal ka jawab diya hai dono ko
both shagun and Mani are guilty and got their lesson of life
aww but I'm sad that you ended the story so soon and fast
I wish you would have written some more parts
thankyou for the story 😊

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