Ishra ss-aye humnava mujhe apna banaa#2,pt 11 on pg 127 updt on Mar 31 - Page 4

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Author's note- before updating this part,I want to thank u all my lovely readers for giving me 217 likes in last updt.that's simply huge ,love u all for ur love and support.


PART 6


Ishita hugged him tight crying bitterly.

Ishita- thank God u r fine,aapko pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi,woh log keh rahi thi,keh rahi thi.she couldn't say as words died in her mouth.she was simply hugging him tight .soon she broke the hug and start showering kisses on his face. At first she kisses his eyes,then his cheeks then at last she captured his lips and start chewing it slowly while he was shocked at her act.

She was kissing him while he was too stunned to react anything.he tried to pull himself off her breaking her trance.she realised what she did and broke the kiss in a jiffy .

She looked down feeling embarrassed at her act but then look at him.

Ishita- I know what u r thinking and to be true u r not wrong.koi mujhe iss tarah zabardasti kiss karta toh shayad main bhi aise hi react karti.aap galat nahi ho bas mujhe aapse pyaar ho gaya hai.yes i know u must thinking that hiw can i fell in love with u.even i dont know the answer.u know I tried, I tried harder not to fell in love with him but kya karun.dil meri sunta hi nahi hai,aapki ore chalta jaata hai.mujhe pagal kar diya hai aapne,aankhen bandh karti hoon toh aap dikhte hain aur aankhen kholti hoon toh aapko dekhna chahti hoon.I even don't know u love me or not.pata nahi aap meri baat sunte hai samjhte hai bhi ya nahi but one thing I know for sure that I love u and will marry u only.and for that u have to become fine,kyunki amma mujhe iss tarah aapse shaadi nahi karne degi.so please get well soon.ekdum achche ho jaiye aur mujhe apna bana lijiye.I love u,I really do.she said and hugged him tight again pecking his lips.

While he was all shocked to hear her,yes he can hear her.can hear her every word ,can head her love confession.can hear,feel and evaluate her feelings for him.but is he in a situation to love her back.is he in a situation to fulfill her wish by reciprocating her .

He was thinking about her only when she break the hug and came,aap rest karo.main aapki medicines le kar aati hoon.she said making him lay down on the bed comfortably.she pecked his forehead and went smiling to him while he was just looking at her retreating figure.

Patient's POV-who r u Dr ishita and how can u love me.me who is just a lifeless body .a person who can neither move nor talk.who can't even hug u back or comfort u in pain.a person who can't even protect u infact u r the one who is protecting me against all odds.u r the one who is trying hard to bring me out of this darkness,warna main toh kho hi chuka tha khud ko.I still remember the day when I lost my everything in that unfateful accident.

Flashback

Raman Kumar bhalla,MD of bhalla group of companies, was sitting in his cabin preparing for his presentation in San Francisco when his mobile rang.he got irritated thinking who disturbed him at this hour,but a smile crept of his face reading her name.

Raman picked the call and said- hi janeman kaisi ho.call kyun kiya.

Toshiji- kya bakwaas kar raha hai puttar.main janeman hoon teri.

Raman smiled and said-ofcourse maa,u r the only one in the whole world who can bring such a big smile on my face even in such a tense situation. Toh hui naa aap meri janeman.

Toshiji smiled hearing his talks and said- khotta naa hove the.anyway I called u to inform that we r going to tirupati and while returning we will go to the hospital where u were born.hum tera 26th birthday wahin manayenge.

Raman- maa,what's the need.hum yahin mana lenge.mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Toshiji- isiliye main tainu khotta kehti hoon.hum wahan darshan karne jaa rahe hai.aur puttar,tera janam hua tha wahan.log har saal bulate hai hume.kya tu ek baar nahi jaa sakta.itni akad bhi thik nahi puttar.kabhi kabhi

Raman cut her in between and said- OK my mother India.hum chalenge, but please pravachan dena bandh karo.

Toshiji- jeh tune sidhe sidhe haan bol diya hota toh main pravachan deti hi nahi.

Raman smiled and said- u know maa,u r the best.

Toshiji- I knew that,chal ab chetti chetti ghar aa jaa.

Raman- ji boss,kaun kaun jaa raha hai.

Toshiji- saare.

Raman- aur mere dono chote tinde.

Toshiji smiled and said- nahi tere chote tinde nahi aa rahe,unka exam hai.only me,ur Papa and u r going.

Raman- lucky chote tindes.

Toshiji laughed hearing his talk and hung the call.Raman completed his presentation and instructed his associate and CEO of the company mihir arora to keep try the work intact till he came back.

After that he went his home to go to tirupati with his parents as he can never deny his parents.coz he loves them way too much.

Soon they left for India ,after long flight Raman reached India along with his parents.they went to tirupati to seek blessings from the deity and finally was going to the hospital when suddenly the driver said- sir,the fuel pipe is leaking and the brakes r also failed.

Raman and his parents got horrified hearing this.

Raman- do something,try to stop the car.

Driver- I am trying hard but it's not working.sorry but I can't loose my life for u.bye,zindagi rahi thi phir milenge.saying so he jumped out of the car leaving Raman and his parents life in danger.as the driver was a local resident,he was trained in all this while raman and his parent's turned pale seeing their car without the driver.Raman came on the driver's seat and tried to control the steering but the road had many turns making it difficult for him to drive.

Toshiji- lagta hai ab hum nahi bachne wale .raman tu khud jaa puttar.

Raman- r u mad maa,how can I go leaving u guys alone.

Mr bhalla- ur maa is correct puttar.tu khud jaa,thodi chot aayegi par jaan bach jayegi.

Raman- main aap logon ke bina kahin nahi jaane wala.if I am jumping,u two r also jumping with me.got it.

Toshiji- hume bachane ke chakker mein agar tujhe kuch ho gaya toh unn dono ka kya hoga.unhe kaun sambhalega.

Raman- u don't worry maa,I will control it.main chala lunga gaadi.

Mr bhalla- no Raman,fuel is about to finish.gaadi disbalance ho jayegi.and will fall off the road,saare Mar jayenge.Raman please jump beta.

Raman- no Papa I can't.

Mr bhalla- u have to.

Raman- Papa chalo saath mein kudte hai,may be we all can be saved .

Toshiji- OK,let's give it a chance.main aur Papa saath main nikalte hai aur tu uss taraf kood.

Raman nodded and all three jump out of the car.Raman fell on ground and start rolling down .Mr and Mrs bhalla tried to jump off but toshiji was scared .

Raman- maa jump,Papa jump.he was shouting when he head banged with a big stone making his bleed.

Toshiji saw this and screamed Raman,she tried to came to jump on his side,which disbalanced the car and it went down breaking the barriers.

Raman screamed - maa Papa.he tried hard and got up with great difficulty.ran to them only to see his car getting blast in front of his eyes .

Raman screamed maa and soon loose his sense as his head was spinning due to banging on the huge rock.

Author's note- next part is not a part of raman's flashback as he was unconcsious.its narration part for the readers to know how raman reached the hospital.

A bus full of interns who was coming from a picnic saw the big blast.they stopped the bus and ran to the place only to see ashes of a burnt car.the senior doctor with them called the local police in charge to come and do the needful.they were going back when a boy's eyes fell on raman.

He screamed- sir a man is laying there.

All ran to him and saw him fainted filled with blood.

Doctor signalled two interns to go and check, he is alive or not .

They went and checked Raman.

Boy- doc,he is alive .

Doc- good,took him to the bus,usse hospital le chalte hai,may be he survive.

The internss nodded and picked Raman in their arms and took him to the hospital.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and like hit ,will wait for it.

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Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago

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