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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

IshRa and their non stop bickering

Prateek is irritating

I always love ur stories based on show

U have always given a different shade to it

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abha

@..abha..

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Haila itna tamasha...pta h in these two updates i just love only one thing...she is mine...
Huhhh!!!! Just cant get over this ...She is mine...

Raman is jealous a kind in part 1...haina...or i am overthinking...the way he bandaged her and spoke to her...anyone will blush that was magical yar...

On the whole superb gayuuu...Just cant stop loving this one...

Update soon!!!!
I dont see u in wa...why???

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Part 1

A great start!!
I love the way you explore different avenues in which to produce your stories with the same initial background - absolutely amazing!!!

Please continue in this vein - you should be writing the show stories

Raman explaining to Ishita a little bit about himself and of giving second chances to people and all her family agree with him!!!
She is thinking about him and blushing and Mihika and Vandu think that she is thinking about Pratick!!!
I really don't like this Pratick!!😡

Just as Ishita thinks that things will improve everything as back to square one when Raman and Mihika start arguing!!!

He does throw away the cigarette!!!!😉

Looking forward to the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!

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divz9769

@divz9769

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Amazing update

raman wants secure ishita life so he asked o

pratik to marry her

ishita was blushing because of raman😳

omg mihika and raman fight

pls update soon

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Awesomeness..
Loved it
Last part was lovely
Update soon

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abha

@..abha..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

So everything seems to be mess up while in past they still figuring about each other in present small mu made one not listen him and other with lots of ego but on brighter side it is he loves her and would not give upon her.

Pratik is upto something and i dont like this man. I dont get ur sudden favoritism with pratik . whats in ur mind? Sometimes Subbu and sometimes abhi now its Pratik the bakra😆.

Frankly its all mess but intense too. I feel so tensed at one pt when Raman left and then was releaved in the end when he told her that he love.

Seeing ishu in so much in pain even i felt bad.

Liked the update.

Continue soon.

Get well soon and come with other stories update.

Waiting.

Thnx for pm.