New ts:tu mera kon lage update pt r on pg 24 13/01 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the surprise
loved the teaser now even Adi poured out his pain
waiting for the next update continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update and teaser
adi gave proper reply to raman
pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please yaar baby ko kuch math hone dena nd update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I can't understand how to thank you! You portrait every character proficiently. Specially ishrudi, & I have a request to you, please! Don't let enter Raman again in Ishita's life. She's a very respected & independent autogenous woman. Let her live peacefully with her family and children
I am not telling being fed up with the current track
In fact, women in patriarchal society is really very helpless & they are like very poor they have no standard status!
It was only my opinion sorry if it hurts anyone!!...
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hey continue soon waiting for the update
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Part 4


Raman was following d car in which adi n ruhi took ishita...

He was driving but his eyes wer filled wid tears... Tears of happiness
He was happy, he was smiling n blabbering dat mai papa banne wala hoon... My madrasan is pregnant... Our baby...

Pihu who was watching her father was so confused... So c shook raman bringing him out of his trance n asked...

Papa ruhi di adi bhaiya n ishim... I mean ishita aunty yahan aaye hue hai... Woh yahan kya kar rahe hain...

Raman became happy dat pihu was abt 2 call her ishimaa..

Raman said pihu ruhi di ka concert hai yahan par dats why c is here...

Pihu:ohhh... Toh hum jayegen na unka concert dekhne

Raman:ofcourse hum jayege

Pihu wanted 2 ask more abt ishita... C was worried dat wat happend 2 her.. N why adi bhaiya n ruhi di are not talking 2 papa so c askd

Pihu: papa ishita aunty bimar hai kya

Raman:nahi toh... Aap aisa kyn pooch rahe ho

Pihu:toh woh aise faint kyn hogaye

Raman:are pihu woh toh itni dhop hai na so woh faint ho gaye

Pihu:still not convinced... Askd papa hum unke peeche jaa rahe hai na...

Raman was confused abt wat 2 answer... He knew dat pihu might not lyk him ditching d plan of shopping because of ishitaa...

So he said pihu i knw ke apko bura lag raha hai aur papa par gussa bhi aa raha hai ke papa ne apko shopping ka promise kiya but he broke it...

Par beta hum bas ek bar dekh le ke ishita thik hai den will cum back 4 shopping...

I knw u dont want 2 cum... But beta adi bhaiya ruhi di all are new here so dey dont nw nythng... So v shuld help dem na...

Pihu didnt reply

Raman thought pihu is not happy

So he said kk pihu if u dont want 2 cum its fine... U stay in d car... Mai jalid jakar jaldi aa jaunga... Kk

Pihu said its kkk papa... I will also cum wid u... I will meet ruhi di n adi bhaiya... N m hungry too, so i will eat der in d canteen...

But d truth was dat pihu wanted 2 knw hw is ishita... Is c fyn or not...

Adi n ruhi both took ishita inside d room n d doctor follwed dem... She checked ishita...

Meanwhile raman n pihu too reached n saw adi n ruhi taking ishita 2 a room... Dey followed dem n stood outside as doctor was checking ishita...

Raman was continuously starting at ishita...

Adi n ruhi wer tensed... Dey asked dr. Abt ishita...
Dr said... Dat her bp is vry low... N in dis condition dis is not good...

Ryt nw i have given her an injection.. Let her rest 4 sumtym den u can take her home...

But make sure dat dis doesn't happen again...

Adi n ruhi nooded n thanked d dr...

Ruhi was crying n adi was consoling her..

Ruhi said its jst coz of me dat ishimaa is not well now...

I shuld have not forced her 2 cum along...

Adi said ruhi aisa kuch nai... Dis is not coz of u... But ishimaa is in dis condition coz of raman bhalla n pihu...

Pihu was stunned 2 hear dis... Dat coz of her ishita is in hospital... N raman was staring both at adi n ruhi wid so much of pain... D pain dat his children hates him. So much dat dey are not calling him papa also... He was ashamed of himself...

Ruhi said nai adi bhaiya... Its not der fault... But ours... V knew dat dey are here in Australia... But still v bought ishima here... Its all our fault...

Both wer crying hugging each other wen adi received a call...
It was 4rm romi n he was askng ke wat is taking dem so long...

Den adi informed romi abt ishita... N asked him Not 2 tell dadu n dadi as dey will take tension... N its not good 4 dadi.. As her bp keeps on fluctuating...

Romi said k he wont say nything 2 dem... But he is cumng ryt nw 2 hospital... N will make sum bahana...
Adi said k n he cut d call...

On the other side...
Mrs bhalla askd romi ke wat did adi say...
Den romi tld dat babhi wanted 2 eat madrasi food... So adi n ruhi took her 2 a south indian restaurant... And its little far... So dey will cum directly 2 home...

Toshiji said.. Are toh hume bhi bol dete... Hum bhi chal lete unke saath..

Romi said maa woh bhabhi ne bola ke aapko bahut shopping karni hai so dats why adi didnt tell us...

Aap sab shopping kar lo phir hum sab wahan chal lenge.. Thik hai...

Mihika n simmi both found romi 2 b little bit tensed... So as soo as mr n mrs bhalla scattered 4 shopping... Dey both askd romi dat wat d real matter...

N romi tld everything 2 dem... N it made simmi so dem furious...
C said... Aab bhai ko kya chaheya... Kyn woh ishiita ko khush nai rahene de sakte...

Unko jo chaheya tha woh hai na unke pass... Unki beti pihi... Aab kya chaheya unhee..

Romi n mihika said... Simmi di cool down... Nw dont act lyk dis. Mummy ji papaji ko saak ho jayega...

Romi said aap dono unko busy rakho... Mai Hospital jakar kar aata hoon..

B4 going he said simmi di plz normal rahena...

N saying so he left

Der in hospital... Raman n pihu both wer lost... Raman was thinking abt adi n ruhi hw dey are angry n hw dey hate him... N pihu was thinking dat coz of her ishita is in hospital... C was not able 2 understand dat how is c d reason of ishita being in hospital...

So c called raman... But he didnt listen...

C called him many tym but he didnt listen... Finally pihu shook him n was abt 2 ask... Wen raman said.. Are pihu u wer hungry na.. Chalo lets go 2 canteen n have sumthing...
Pihu said but papa i want 2 ask u sumthng... Raman said first u eat something den i will answer all ur questions...

Pihu said promise
Raman in a flow said ruhi promise...

Pihu askd... Wat ruhi promise papa...
Ramam kuch nai... I said promise nly...

Den raman said... Are meri question bank ccum lets eat sumthng nw...
Raman turned n looked 2wards ishitas room.. N den left wid pihu.. Coz he knew dat at dis point adi n ruhi will not allow him 2 meet ishita..

Dey both went 2 canteen n orderd food...

Meanwhile in ishitas room... Romi came der n askd abt ishita... N adi n ruhi tld dat c is resting n is fyn nw...

Den romi askd adi n ruhi 2 go n have sumthng 2 eat as dey have not eaten nythng...
ADI N ruhi denied 1st but wen romi said dat bhabhi will b angry n sad dat coz of her u both are neglecting ur health...

Both adi n ruhi agreed.. N askd romi 2 b der n calk dem if ishimaa wakes up...

Adi n ruhi entered d canteen...
N raman saw dem... He thought dat dis is d ryt tym 2 meet ishita.. As c might b alone...

So c tld pihu 2 start wid her food.. He will b back again aftr attending a call... Pihu said k...

Raman left n went near ishitas room... He was abt 2 enter wen he saw romi der wid her...
Raman so dam wanted 2 barge inside d room but he was doubtful abt romis reaction... He thought if romi wii call adi n inform abt d same den adi 4sure will not allow him 2 meet ishita...

So raman stopped n started waiting 4 romi 2 leave...

Aftr 5 min he saw a nurse was calking romi 2 clear sum formalities... N also tld dat d dr wants 2 meet him regarding d patient...

Romi askd d nurse 2 stay wid ishita... Till ny of his family cum der...
He left...

N raman found it ryt tym 2 meet ishita... So he went inside...
D nurse askd him who is he n he said he is d patient husband... So d nurse left

Raman den went near ishita n was looking at her wid tears in his eyes... He so much wanted 2 hug her 2 kiss but... But he knew dat ryt knw he cant do dis... 1st he need 2 talk 2 her

He set on d stool near d bed n hesitantly kept his hand on her baby bump...
He was smiling n said hi baby its me ur papa... D baby kicked as if answering him... Raman became so happy..
Den he said... M sry baby i knw u might b angry wid ur papa d baby kicked again as if saying dat yes he is angry.. Raman said i knw i was not der wid u... I m sry baby... Plz 4give papa... Der was no response...
Raman said plz baby dont b angry.. Papa is rly sry... Plzzz he started crying...
Baby kicked as if saying dat he 4gave raman n asking him not 2 cry... Raman became happy n wiped his tears... N said
I promise u baby dat knw papa will b wid u all d tym... N was abt 2 kiss d bump... Wen he heard ishitas voice... Saying dont make promises dat u will break in future... Coz u never have kept n fulfilled ny of ur promises...

Raman immediately looked at ishita n said ishita m sorry...

Ishita said why r u here... Plz leave b4 ur daughter see u wid me... N koi problem ho jaye plz leave...

Raman was stunned 2 hear ur daughter 4rm ishita... He said ishita wat are u saying my daughter... Did u 4get dat c is our daughter

Ishita said one sec raman d last tym i checked pihu was nly ur daughter... Coz according 2 u i didnt deserve her... I was not fit 2 b called as a mother... Infact i was a barren who didnt have ny motherly feeling inside me... Ryt... Yahi sab kaha tha na apne...

Raman was so daam guilty... 1st tym he saw hate 4 him in ishitas eyes..

He tld ishita aur kitna giraogi mujhe apne he nazarooo mai... Plz plz 4give me...

Ishita said m sry but dis tym i cant... N plz leave...

Raman said fyn u dont want 2 4give me now.. So it k i will wait 4 ur 4givess...

Ishita said den wait till 4ever... Coz u r not gono get it... N dont waste ur tym on dis

Raman said my tym n my wish as 2 wer i have 2 waste it...

Ishita didnt rply nything...

Raman stood der waiting 4 ishita 2 say sumthng but c didnt even looked at him once.. Raman was so shattered ... Dat wat have he made her...
D ishita who used 2 love him more den her life was not even looking at him...

But he wanted 2 ask her so much...
So he asked k fym u dont wana look at me but u can answer me.. C still didnt say nythng

Raman finally askd he ke why didnt u inform me abt u being pregnant... Bolo ishita kyn nai bataya Yeh baccha toh humara sapna tha na... aur tumnhe mujhe bata na zaruri bhi nai samjha baap... M d father i have all d ryts on dis child...
Finally ishita turned 2 him n said
Toh pihu bhi humara sapna hi thi... Jitni woh apki hai utni he meri...toh kya apne bataya tha pihu ko mere bare mai... Nahi na..
Raman said mai kya batata usko... Tab tum thi he nahi... Ishita said a bit loudly toh mai kyn batati apko aap bhi toh chod kar chale gaye thai... Toh mai kyn batati.. Raman lowerd his eyes aa he knew dat dis tym ishita is ryt
Aab bolo hai kuch apke pass bolne ko... Nahi hai na... Toh plz leave

Raman:ishita tum jaisa bol rahi ho aisa nai hai
Ishita:toh kaisa hai raman... Chalo aap batoo mujhe..
Aap toh pihu ko iss duniya mai mere liye he lana chahte thai na... Maa hu na mai uski...
Toh fir kyn aap sirf meri pihu meri pihu karte rahete ho...

Raman:ishita mere kahne ka matlab woh nai hai... Tum janti ho mai gusse mai kuch bhi bol dete hoon

Ishita:raman gusse se kahi baatien inshan ek bar doo bar bhul sakta hai but woh baat gusse mai baar baar bolna.. Koi inshann kaise maaf kar sakta hai

Jab bhi Pihu ke saath kuch hota aap sara blame mujh par daal dete ho..
U point fingers towards my motherhood... Aapko pata bhi hai kitna hurt hota hai... Kitni choobti hai aapki yeh sab baatien...

Raman:was crying n saying i knw ishita dat all my talks hurted u... N m rly sry.. Plzzz maaf kar do plzzz
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Ishita was lukng blankly n said
Yaad hai apne kahan tha ke mai kabhi baccho ke sath koi connection nai bana paye... Sirf maa hoon but aajtak baccho ke liye kiya kya hai...

So here i promise u mr bhalla dat iss bacche ke saath mera connection bhi hoga aur pura ryt bhi... I dont have 2 share dis baby wid ny1... I will do everything 4 d baby... Mai isse duniya ke har khushi dungi... Woh khushi jo apne aur maine, jab mai 1st tym pregnant hui thi.. Toh usse baby se promise ke thi woh sab dungi...
Kya hua agar aap apni promises puri nai kar pata... But mai woh sab promises puri karungi...
N iss baby ko kabhi bhi sad nai hone dungi...
Dis baby is gono b d lukiest baby... Coz uske pass itni pyaar karne wali family hai... Dadu dadi bhua chahchu di bhaiya mummaaa... Who are early waiting 4 his arrival..

Raman said aur papa...

Ishita smiled a little... Abhi bhi wat u care is 4 urself..
Dont wry i wont do lyk u... Mai aap jaisi kabhi nai baane wali...

Mai iss baby ko uske papa ke barr mai zaroor batungi...

I dont want my baby 2 go through all dis wat pihu is gong through...

I might hate u... But i dont want dis baby to hate his father... Coz i knw d pain of a parent wen ur child dont knw abt u n hate u so much...

Kya batoogi ke uske papa hai yha nai hai... Yha maar gaye.. Bolo kya bolgi

Jo sacch hai woh bolungi... Ke isske papa ko humare zarurat nai thi aur na hi humse pyaar tha toh woh chale gaye chod kar humne...

Raman jst broke down... N said between his hiccups dat zarurat bhi hai aur pyaar bhi tha hai aur humesa rahega...

Bas meri kismat acchi nai hai... Jo mujhe humsa aapno mai se kiski ek ho choice karne par majboor kar deti hai...

He wiped his tears n stood up n said... But iss bar i wont allow my faith 2 run my lyf...
Chahe mujhe zindagi bhar tumse maafi mangi pare but m not gono leave asking 4 ur 4giveness...

N i promise dat our baby who is abt 2 cum... Will c dat how much his papa luvs him...
Raman came 4ward n bend down 2 kiss ishita baby bump... N dis tym ishita allowed him 2 do so...

Raman aftr kissing looked at ishita wid a smile n said thank u 4 not shrugging me off
Ishita said Dont think dat i 4give u...

I allowed u 2 do so coz jitni bhi mai nafrat kar loon aapse... Par humesha mera pyaar jo maine apne beintehaa kiya tha woh jeet jata hai...

Raman said mai bhi tumse itni he pyaar karta hoon... N vry soon my luv 4 u will also win...

N jo tum bol rahi ho na ke tumne ne mujhe pyaar kiya hai... Usko ko mai... Mai pyaar karti hoon aur humse karti rahungi mai badal dunga

Ishita said... If u r done wid everything toh plz leave... Coz adi n ruhi can cum nytym n i dont want dat dey get upset...

N in anger dey both misbehave wid der faather...

Raman didnt say nythng more n left d room... But not b4 kissing ishita on her 4head...n silently promising dat he is gono make every thing k... N jst lyk b4



So guyzzz here is d nxt part... Hope u will njoy it... Its quite long... So m wishing 4 loads n loads of lyks...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Please dear give regulars.. UPDATE soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantabulous Deepika just loved every word ishita.. pls continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice.

I want this convo between Ishra where they tell each other what hurts them.

Ishitha can tell how his words hurt her and Raman can say how her hiding things and being mahaan hurts him
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional update
adi ruu are very scared of loosing their ishima
pihu has a great change in her towrds her point of view regarding ishita
emotional convo btwn ishita & raman
hope this time ishita doesnt forgive raman quickly
so we can see a despo & his pagalpan for his madrasan😉
hope adi & ru forgive their father
update soon & pls pm me if possible

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