New ts:tu mera kon lage update pt r on pg 24 13/01

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guyz. . . .m planning 2 write a one shot on d basis of all d spoilers v r getting . . . .
So dis will b aftr d leap story . . . .

N ppl who luvs raman character may not lyk it. . . Coz in dis raman gono go wid shagun n pihu. . .



Introduction

Raman and ishita are married now...pihu n shagun in my story doesnot come 2 d wedding venue...

But pihu cum 2 knw d truth of der wedding as shagun make her watch der wedding cd

Adi n alia are engaged

Ruhi started her study which c manages wid her singing
...


Raman n ishita n d family was happy... It was 3rd mnth aftr der wedding dat everything became a mess... Pihu get 2 knw abt der wedding secret...ishita telling her d truth, pihu not accepting her as shagun has brain washed her, pihu attempting suicide, raman blaming ishita 4 d same... Differences created btw raman n ishita coz of pihu...


Raman leaves ishita n family 4 pihu...


N den d story starts aftr 7 mnths of leap...



Part 1 : pg 2
Teaser : pg 5
Part 2 : pg 11
Teaser : pg 13
Part 3 : pg 16
Teaser : pg 18
Part 4 : pg 20
Part 5 : pg 24
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls go ahead but show ishita as a self respected women pls..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Go ahead buddy...it really doesn't matter now...pm me..thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NYc dear..
cont soon
If possible pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one dear..continue soon..
Pm me when you update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue par don't let ishu forgive Raman jaldi. Bahut papad belwana. And if u could pls pm me. Will be eagerly waiting for part1
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice shot
Atleast make ishu stand for herself
She is not at all getting any respect from raman
Update soon
Pm me if u can
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

7mnths aftr raman left his family


Australia...

Raman was sitting in his living room watching tv... He was suffeling d channels... But one thing caught his eye n he stopped on dat channel...
I was his daughter's interview...

His ruhis interview...
It was an interview regarding d award which ruhann received 4 being d best teen sensation...

Raman was so happy 2 see his daughter aftr almost 7mnth...
He felt nothing hv changed c still luks d same... He was jst watching her widout blinking wen one question 4rm d reporter broke his trance... N his smile jst vanished 4rm his face

Reporter:so ruhi raman bhalla who is better knw as ruhaan... I wuld lyk 2 ask u... But ruhi started talking cutting d reporter in between


Ruhi:its ruhi ishita bhalla... Der is no ruhi raman bhalla...

D one who is standing in front of you is ruhi ishita bhalla... Now u can continue


Report : sry ruhann... So how does it feel dat u have achieved so much in music industry in dis small age... Do u consider urself lucky...

Ruhi:it feels gr8 dat ur work is appreciated...

N abt lucky.. Yes i am d luckiest prsn on earth... Coz i got d best family who supports me so much... N mst importantly i have got worlds bestest maa... My ishimaa wid me...

U see der...
D camera turned wer ruhi was pointing... N raman can c his whole family present der..all wer lukng so happy n he can c hw every1 was proud of his little princess..

Ruhi: d smile dats der on those faces matters 2 me d most... N m lucky dat i am one of d reasons 4 dat smile... N d pride dat i c on my ishimaas face helps me 2 achieve more n more...

Report : n wat abt ur father..

Raman was waiting dat wats ruhi gono rply

Ruhi: my ishimaa is both my mom n my dad... Nly c n my family matters 2 me n no one else... N plz no more personal questions...

Report :so wats ur nxt project n ur future plan...

Ruhi:nxt week me along wid my family are flying 2 Australia.. For a charity event... N u can say dat 2 b our family vacation also...

Reporter: ur all family members are here, but wat abt ur mother

Ruhi.. Slightly smiling... C must b busy arranging a welcum party 4 me... Coz c was vry confident dat m gono return home wid d award... So c is waiting 4 me in our home... So i will take ur leave... N b wid my family.. Thank u

Ruhi went 2 wer bhalla family was der... Dey all hugged her congratulated her... N all left d party



Raman aftr seeing his family was happy n sad both... Happy coz all of dem wer so happy... N sad coz he was not able 2 see ishita..

He was hurt also as d answer dat ruhi gave abt her father broke him... But he managed 2 make himself understand dat wat c said is all ryt... Coz aftr wat he did he deserve dis nly...

But he was happy dat all his family is happy


He was wiping his tears wen pihu came der n said papa lets go out 4 dinner 2day...

Raman siad off course my princess v will definitely go... Me n u...

I d mean tym shagun came der n said... Wats dis pihu ryt nw u came 4rm school u did even changed n u came here... I was searching 4 u in house...

Pihu said offhooo mumma.. U knw na dat aftr cumbg 4rm school i alwz cum 2 papa... So why u search 4 me...

Shagun said yha watever.. Nw cum lets go...

Pihu said kk... C kissed raman n waved him bye.. N said b ready 4 our dinner date papa...


Raman smiled n waved her bye...


Yes raman came 2 Australia along wid pihu.. But here he stay ond opposite flat wer pihu shagun n mani stays...

He misses his familyy adi ruhi n mst importantly his madrasan...but have never ever contacted dem... Coz he was guilty dat his one action n decision dat he took in his anger costed him his relation wid his family children n wife...


He left dem 7 mnths ago...4 pihu... Coz he was not able 2 c pihu getting away 4 him.. So he left everything behind 4 pihu...


At d same tym in india...


Ruhi along wid d family member arrived bhalla house... As soon as d entered d house dey saw it beautifully decorated... All wer vry happy 2 c it...

But dey didnt find d person who behind all dis decoration..
So adi askd neelu di wer is ishimaa...

Neelu... Woohhh wooohhh adi baba woohhh bhabhi

Adi losing his patience as he thought dat sumthng is wrong asked again neelu didi wer is ishimaa


Neelu... Woh bhabhi is in her room... As c is not feeling well n doctor is checking her

Everyone together doctor... Doctor kyn kya hua unnee..

Every1 runs 2wards ishitas room... N wer relieved 2 c her awake.. N mihir was der wid her... N d doctor was instructing her take care of herself n 2 take proper rest n eat time 2 tine... N 2 not take so much of workload...

Ruhi n adi ran 2 ishita n said wid tears in der eyes... Doctor kya hua ishimaa ko.. C is all ryt na...

Doctor smiled dat dem n said yes every thing is fyn bas her bp is lill bit low.. So c fainted n nothing else...

Ruhi n adi immediately turned 2 ishita n saw ishita wid cute pout on her face... Dey jst wanted 2 hug der ishimaa but ryt knw dey knw dey have 2 make der maa understand dat c cant b dis careless c have 2 take care of herself...

So both of dem a little bit strictly aksed... Ishimaa wats all... V jst left you 4 2 hrs n u wer not able 2 take care if urself... N u wer saying dat u all go 2 Australia i will takee care if myself...

Simmi;ishita yaar maine kaha tha na mai ruk jati hoon but tu kisike sunne tab na...

Mrs bhalla:puttra tenu itna kaam karne ko maana kiya na.. Phir kyn aise kaam karti hai...

Mr bhalla:puttar apan khayal rakha kar tujhe kuch hojata hai toh tuje pata hai na hum sab ke kya halat ho jati hai...


Romi:haan bhabui aap jaan ho hum sab ke... Aapko humari bilkkul bhi fikar nai na.. Tabhi toh aise aise stunrs dikhati ho aapp..

Ishita: are bas bhi karo aap sab... Maine zaada kuch nai kiya mai toh bas baithi thi aur mihir aur neelu ko instructions de rahi thi... Aap sab pooch sakte ho mihir see... Every1 turned 2 mihir


Ishita was luking making a puppy face tiwards mihir so dat he support her...

As soon as mihir tried 2 open his mouth ruhi n adi said mamu aap sacch bolna no jhoot...

Every1 was waiting 4 his answer wen his phn rang.. N he excused himself saying he have 2 attend a meeting so he is leaving...

Every 1 again turned 2 ishita n askd aab aur kitna jhoot...

C vry cutely siad thike sry kaan pakad kar... Aab i will take care...

Simmi said ishita tu aab akele nai hai... C put her hand on her stomach n said creasing her baby bump dat aab yeh bhi hai tere saath... Trko iska bhi khayal rakhna hai...


Den ruhi n adi said... Ishimaa aap humarr hone wale chote bhai yha bahen ko bahut paresan karti hoo... Aab hum aapse baat nai karne wale...

Dey turned der faces away 4rm her...


Ishita cupped der faces n said... Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ke main tumhari chote sibling ko paresan karu... Tumhara chota siblings hai jo mujhe paresan karta raheta hai... Par tum sab sirf mujhe dante ho not fare...


Every one started laughing at her cuteness... N c also started laughing...

But den mrs bhalla said... Puttar dhyan rakh apna.. N said tu bhi chalegi humare saath Australia... Tu nai aa sakti toh hum sab bhi nai jayenge...


N romi aksd d doctor is it safe 4 ishita 2 travel in dis state... Doctor said dat der is no prblm... But jst make sure c is feed properly n 2 give her d medicine a tym 2 tym...


Saying so d doctor took leave... N every1 got back 2 det work.. Leaving ruhi adi n ishita alone
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
So Ishita is pregnant and family r going to Australia
Raman obviously won't know
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice update totally loved ur take on d current situation of Yhm.. continue soon

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