Writing Treasts : welcoming all (updated part 6) and note on page 52 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

249

Views

25.6k

Users

64

Likes

776

Frequent Posters

Ishra2015 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Aweaome atory
Pm me
I would love to read
Add index too it will help us
Edited by Ishra2015 - 8 years ago
Love_pearl thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Ishra2015

Aweaome atory

Pm me
I would love to read
Add index too it will help us

Will do that
Thanks for suggesting
hana_y thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#73
pearl don't mind it will be more if you can add index whenever you got updt it will help you n us
lonelyyyy thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#74
nice update akku diii
ishu raman dono pagal ho gye hain
ek kiss bhi ni kri
update soon hansa dii
akriti154 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: lonelyyy

nice update akku diii
ishu raman dono pagal ho gye hain
ek kiss bhi ni kri
update soon hansa dii


thnxxx ruchi
glad u lykd it
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Hi guys im here for doing part 3 from me


Akkriti did part 2 pg 6 do have a look who miss it ok .


Here mine please ignore mistake im on bed due high fever ok .


Here we go


Part 3


Ishita go dowstair to prepare breakfast for raman , on seeing neelu in kitchen she ask her what she is preparing , after neelu told her aloo ke farata n cheese egg , she ask neelu to move aside she will do it for raman .


On hearing her talk neelu got tense n ask her why she will do raman may get angry , ishita give her a glare look which make neelu move aside .


Neelu was tense as knowing ishita dont know how to cook n is preparing raman food , she know raman will scold her to let ishita enter in kitchen .


Ishita prepared the food with so much of love for raman , after he came down n saw table with food , was surprise neelu cook fastest .



Raman live all alone in his big house his parents die in car accident one year ago , he is still searching the person who made accident with his parents car n leave them there .



He sit to eat n ask ishita to sit too , she told him she will serve him first as it her first cook for him , on hearing her said she cook , raman face expression change into what the hell n glare to neelu , neelu do a sorry face to him .


Ishita serve him n ask him to eat n tell her hpw it is , after taking a bite from egg , his expression change more , he was unable to eat it well .


I " So how it is raman good na " .


R " Yeah its yummy " saying a fake compliment to her .


I " See neelu i knew raman will like it , have more from tomorrow i will prepare food " .


Raman spit out the food with her talk " No ... no need to cook ishita , neelu is here she will prepared ok " with glare look at neelu .



I " Im your wife i should take care of your food , let me taste now " .


Raman stop her n bring all food in his side to not let her taste it , but she manage to get aloo ke farata n eat , she spit it " Chi raman how tasteless is it n you eat it why ? " .


R " Because you made it with so much of affection n its your first time cook , does matter if you put sugur in egg n flour did not cook well its ok , you apreciate which means ok " he hold her hand n both share an eye lock , its broke with ringing mob .



Mihir who call raman n ask him to nit go office he will handle every thing , he ask him to spends time with ishita , he refused on seeing for him work first other things come later , there are whole life to roams .



Ishita who was sad on hearing his talk , on seeing her glomy face he agree to not go office n to roam with ishita as she dont know delhi .



Ishita is from chenai she too dont have parents n she used to live in orphonage since her parents met with accident one year ago she never step out after entering orphonage until raman take her there n get married to her .


He ask her to change , due of happiness she kiss him on his cheek , after realizing what she did , she say sorry n leave him in a confusing state , why she said sorry after kiss him , after she came wearing sari which he hate but did not told her anything n praise her look , both leave .



Raman take her in musuam , shopping mall , beach they have ice ream , both shared eyes lock , she got mousetache , while he wipe it with such an intense way , she close her eyes due of his touch , he was amazed on seeing how his touch effect her , her face expression told him how it effect her which make him please .



They way together but still there was some space between them , they get awkward when they saw some couples romancing in public place , they even enjoy that moment being with each ever both , at night raman take in resto where mihir reserve for them .


Both reach resto she look around the tables n get tense on seeing fork knife which peoples was using , she dont know how to used them nor to eat with , raman hold her hand with a relax sign to her , which she feel ok with his concern for her , both sit raman ask her just relax waiter come she order food without knowing what they are , raman try to corrige her but she dont let him talk n ask to bring them .


Raman know well she wont be able to eat as she is madrasi but could not stop her before , after waiter bring whole food like chicken , fish , calamar , salade n pasta , on seeing chicken n other onveg she feel vomit n run toward washroom ,.raman was irritate as she did not let him choose n now she is not feeling well .


Shagun who was in same resto she saw raman alone n go to him " Hi may i have a seat here ?" .


R : in irritating voice " You are asking like if i say no you wont sit shagun " .


S " Wow you know me well enough han , where is your so call wife han " n she sit opposite of him .



R " Ishita is her name ok , what you want now ? " with grind teeth .



S " Oh so much attitude han , ok now listen to me , i got to know the reason , why you got married to this beji type " .



Now he wonder how she got to know " What you means ? n which reason are you talking han ? " .



Shagun with fake smile " Ok it all due of nidhi right ? your madness lover , oh should i say possesive lover hmm , have tou told ishita on her ? " .



Ishita who was coming toward them n shagun saw her n decide to spoilt their moemnt with smirk on face , she hold raman hand " Its means you did not told her , why raman ? its not your fault if she love you like a madness , you should let ishita know on it na , dont do mistake " .


Ishita who stand just from his back unaware of him " I know i make mistake , its wrong to not let her know but it late i dont want her to worry when we dont have any thing , its my bigest mistake which i made till now , how to corrige it i dont know , she may not trust me what ever i will told her on nidhi " .


On hearing his talk ishita misunderstand him n think he love some one else n he make a mistake to marry her she cry , her voice make raman aware of her n turn to her seeing her crying , he glare at shagun knowing its all her plan to ruin his night , ishita run outside while raman run after her on calling her name .


That all guys i could not do more my eyes are tired due of fever .

Please do hit like n leave your comnent
hope i could reach your expectation

to know more you will have to wait for laughingpearls next updt ok .

thx love hansa
Love_pearl thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Nice update
And don't stress yourself much
And you didn't tell who is next
Please tell the name soon
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Love_pearl

Nice update

And don't stress yourself much
And you didn't tell who is next
Please tell the name soon



thank you for comment

i said laughingpearls will do next
Love_pearl thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Love_pearl

Nice update

And don't stress yourself much
And you didn't tell who is next
Please tell the name soon

Sorry
Ideas it in hurry and didn't notice that you said it already
BusiMusi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Awesome updt i luvd it. Plz cont soon.

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: thefarfetcher

1 years ago

FF: Submerse (AUTHOR'S NOTE on Page 3)

There's something bittersweet about finding a fandom when it seems dead and buried, but that's how things seem to have worked out this time. I...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Manan_Pani_fan

7 months ago

Karan Patel and Divyanka Tripathi BOTH NOT part of Sony TV show

Exclusive:; Harshad Chopda and Shivangi Joshi likely to play leads The Sony TV show produced by Balaji Telefilms has seen major developments...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".