Writing Treasts : welcoming all (updated part 6) and note on page 52 - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 2
Excellent
Shagun Ki mast chop
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3
Ohh... Ho... How many girls are after Raman lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sanaya
Nidhi
Shagun
Any more left kya U_U
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 5
@rida
Thanku for clarification...
Bahut ladkia Ho gayi thi :P
Now.. I m sorted lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update continue soon hope mu gets cleared
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Posted: 8 years ago
HHello friends I m here with next part of writing treat .Here's the next update .

Part 6

Raman was laying unconscious in the bed and doctor was examining him while Ishita was standing behind then worried of Raman's state .He checked him and spoke passing the prescription to ishita " no need to worry Mrs bhalla he is alright but has some stress , you take good care of him and don't let him think too much .I have prescribed some medicines ,gave him this time to time ,he will be alright in some days ."

Saying so the doctor was gone ,ishita gave the prescription to driver and told him to bring the medicines .She sat beside him and caressed his hairs affectionately,he stirred in his sleep and snuggled closer to her ,she smiled little noticing his childish antic and pecked softly on his cheeks .

Ishita was sitting beside him and was waiting for him to get back in his senses , she started patting his forehead and thought about their first meeting .

FLASHBACK

Ishita after looking her parents was feeling very alone so she started a part time job in an orphanage ,she goes directly from her office to orphanage and spend all her spare time .The orphanage owner wanted to open a rehab center along with orphanage so that they can treat,their patient their itself for that ishita along with some more girls was raising funds through donation and for this purpose once she went to Ramans office ,she was waiting for him but today he was late and after coming he directly went to conference hall as he has an important meeting . His PA already informed ishita that he is a strict man and don't like someone disturbing him between his work,so she waited for him .its almost five hours she was waiting for him but he was busy in one meeting then another at last her patience broke she went to his PA and asked where he is .The PA informed that he is in his cabin ,next moment Ishita barged his door,his PA ran behind her but till then ishita has already entered his cabin .He glared ishita but before he can say anything she shouted on him ," though you are great Raman Kumar bhalla but that doesn't mean that you treat others like this ."

While she was shouting on him ,Raman was busy in admiring her , she was speaking and he was not responding this made her more angry, she walked to him and spoke flashing her hands in front if his eyes" o hello I m talking to you only ".

Raman came back in senses and spoke composing himself " who are you and why are you here ".

Ishita narrated everything ,Raman gave her a cheque of Rs one lakh ,she went happily but he was lost in her and noticing him everybody was surprised . One of his employee even asked him that why he did not told anything yo her when she spike so harshly to her ,in return he smiled and told that man itself to collect information about ishita.And within a week he went to the orphanage and talked to the care taker of orphanage about marrying ishita . He was ishita's father friend and was like a father figure for her .He happily gave his permission for the marriage even he himself convinced Ishita to marry Raman, soon they got married .

Ishita was still lost in past when she noticed jerk ,she opened her eyes only to see Raman almost shivering ,she held his hand and tried to calm him but he was not listening him instead was mumbling same thing " I didn't killed her ,ishita don't leave me ."

Ishita was trying to calm him but he was not listening to him ,Ishita didn't find any idea to stop him so she hugged him tight with all her force and started patting him .After some time he became a calm slowly ,both were breathing heavily .Ishita tored himself from her and spoke scooping his fzcd in her palm ," Raman I m with you now and always. I will never go leaving you anywhere. "

Raman looked at her and asked like a kid " sachchi ."

I- yes ,but Raman I want to know what is bothering you .

R- no I will not tell you ,if you will come to know you will leave me .

I- no ways I know my Raman cannot do anything wrong with anyone .

Raman didn't say anything to her and went towards the window ,he stood there and looked out randomly while his eyes got tears ,he was in so much pain thinking that she will leave him when his past will come in front of her .Ishita went to him and hugged him from behind and spoke ," Raman you had married me but don't trust me .".

R- I do trust you but I don't trust my luck ,main bahut badnasib hoon jise bhi pyaar kiya saare mujhe chod kar chale gaye ,ma papa friends everybody ."

I- but I will not as I m not everybody but your shadow aapki parchaaiyeen ,aapki ardhangini hoon.

Saying so she hugged him tight ,he also anticipated the hug ,after a while she pulled herself from him and pressed her lips on his ,he was surprised with her action but she was firm in her decision and spoke wounding her arms around his neck " Raman make me yours so that you can trust me ".

Raman parted her from him and spoke
" I do trust you ,you don't have to do this all only to make me believe you ".

I- but I want to do it as I want to assure myself that how bad your past will be I will not leave you ."

Raman looked deeply in her eyes while she blinked her eyes to assure him ,he picked her and took her to bed .He placed her gently in bed and climbed on her ,she wrang her arms around him and pulled him into her ,He started kissing her neckline ,she closed her eyes and moaned his name in pleasure ,he moved further and kissed her hungrily ,soon their cloths were abondend in floor and they were lost in their passion world, after pleasuring her for much time he entered her marking her his and they rocked together till climax. He played beside her and hided himself in her she caressed his hairs and spoke " Raman now please tell me your past because I don't want to see you again scared and shattered ."

R- ishita please .

I( interrupting him in mid)- Raman I want to remove that fear from you .please .

R- OK ,but before that I want to tell you one thing ,ishita I m not at fault I was trapped and one more thing ,you are my only prized possession ,I love you more than myself .

Ishita nodded and Raman started narrating his bitter past to her .After he was done he looked at her ,who was silent.

Thats all for now friends ,hope you like it .The other writer will let you know how Ishita will react .enjoy reading and do comment .

PS - I m sorry to the writers of thus thread that I read it but cannot comment as was busy in diwali preparation and later I only liked it and didn't commented .sorry for that .Rida special appreciation for your attempt, hats off to you .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Writers
Congrats for the wonderful story.

Thanks for the pms
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow.. awesome..
They became one in all sense..
& raman narated everything about his past..
Hope everything z fine now..
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update dii
ishra are one now
raman told her all the truth
finally hope eveything will be good only
ishu reaction 🤔
flashbck was sweet dii
raman pehli bar mei hi lattu
awesome 👍🏼
whose going to continue now ???
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
Raman is in fear that Ishu will leave him
Flashback was amazing, how they met

They are finally one
Glad Raman shared the past but I wish his fear goes away soon

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