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sririt

@sririt

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start

Khwaish, such an adorable name

She is so matured

Loved it

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely prologue harshada
so raman has a five year old daughter
her name is khwahish
bt y was he searching for neha wen he entered d house
she is ishra daughter na
where is ishita
continue soon
n answer my questions
do pm me wen u update

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smilesusmita

@smilesusmita

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely prologue
But who is khawish mother
U don't told her name
Why she is away from dm
Is she Ishita or not????
I m confused
Cont soon

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Unique prologue now waiting for next part

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preeti

@ishra.arshi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing prologue dear.

Khwaishsuch a beautiful name.going by the description of khwaish it seems ishita is her mother(I hope she is the one)

.raman ki jaan hai khwaish😳.He loves her so much.loved their emotional and cute talk,khwaish understands her papa really well.

Continue soon dear.

Ps: I know ,I SAID i'll be less active on IF in oct due to exams but it seems I hv got a little bit 😛addicted to IF.whenever I'm free I'm here😃.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sririt
Nice start
Khwaish, such an adorable name
She is so matured
Loved it

Thanks a lot Rituja😊

Glad you liked the start.

I know...I find Khwaish an absolutely adorable name😳...that's why used it here instead of using Ruhi.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154
Lovely prologue harshada
so raman has a five year old daughter
her name is khwahish
bt y was he searching for neha wen he entered d house
she is ishra daughter na
where is ishita
continue soon
n answer my questions
do pm me wen u update

Thank you so much Akriti😊

Glad you liked the prologue dear...

Yeah...prologue kind of says that😉...

Well, she is Ishra's daughter or not, why he made a search for a caretaker after entering the house, where is Ishita...this is the suspense of the story dear or to be more specific, these are the some questions around which this story will revolve.

You will get your all the answers as the story progresses.

Will try to continue soon.

Sure...will pm you updates of this one👍🏼

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Nithya

@Nithya83

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Intriguing prologue.
Khwaish is a nice name instead of Ruhi.
So many questions in prologue.
Hope you will answer them in the updates.
Who Raman doesn't want Khwaish to be like? Her features resembles kind of Ishita...I guess
Update soon