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Sapna

@kenika

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awesome prolouge... kwahish such a lovly name... she is upset on him... he could not see her crying... he promises her that he wont repeat it... he dont want to make her like her mom... who is her mom ...always suspense 😆 but i like it ... plz plz update soon and thanks for pm dear 😊

Edited by kenika - 8 years ago

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Nice cocept

Is khawish ishra daughter

Pls continue soon

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kpkaru93

@kpkaru93

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Unique prologue dr,,,, update soon

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Nice and interesting prologue

Continue soon

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

aww this is soo adorable
the name khwaidh lovely
I know her mother is ishita
just curious to know wht happen
continue soon

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Superb start⭐️

Raman's daughter name Khwaish it's so adorable

Who is her mother?? Where is she? ???

Khwaish is so matured girl

Continue soon

Thanks for pm 😛

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shasha

@shasha1989

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Lovely prologue..

It's different from other stories..

Plz continue soon..

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DipaliG

@DipaliG

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Interesting prologue
Khwaish such a nice name...
She is his 5yr old daughter
He can't see her upset...
Who is her mom and where is she...
Whom Raman doesn't want his daughter to be like...
Many questions...
Hope they will get answered soon..
Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm