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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

very nice and interesting story and the cute kid name khwaish is really beautiful name and she is ishra daughtr right and phr ishita kha gyi.. Continue.. Its very interesting.

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Priyag28

@Priyag28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Lovely. Khwaish nice name. Love father daughter bond. Where is ishita. Update soon

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Ishra2015

@Ishra2015

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Very cute
Update soon
Give quick updates

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Noor

@ItsNoorfatima

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Interesting prologue
Loved it
Who's her mom??
Why raman doesn't want khwaish to be like her mom??
Update soon

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Ishralove21

@Ishralove21

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Nice start

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

A lovely prologue so Raman ki beti Khwaish hai - beautiful!

Maa jaise traits hai uske lekin Raman nahi chahta yeh - par kyun?

Kya hua dono ke bich? ???

Looking forward to the next update soon please!

Thank you so much for the pm!

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suhi.mahi

@suhi.mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

amazing start ..

khwaish nice name ..

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Ishra_g26

@Ishra_g26

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

lovely prologue dii
raman has a five year old daughter
khwahish such a sweet name
is she ishra daughter if yes than
where is ishita ??
why was saying like this
yaa dii jyada hi suspense creat kr rhe ho
update soon