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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Nice prologue...
ruhi-raman too cute...
may be she is her daugther only??
cont. asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting, love to see caring raman
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb!!! i think raman will be her father? please update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..new SS
Lovely prologue
Ruhi ki yeh halat dekh kar to mujhe bhi rona aa gaya😭
Poor baby..
Her mumma is in ICU
Raman is nics person
He Paid for her mumma

Omg..she bites him
Itni choti bachhi ko kidnapping ke bareme bhi pata hai..
Raman ruhi same same dimple...Owweee😳
Its going to be interesting
Would surly like to read more.👍🏼
Plzzz continue sooon dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou everyone !!! Thank you for such a huge response to this story . This is seriously unexpected !!!
Many are asking for the update asap so here it is . I have read all the lovely comments , will surely reply to each one until then enjoy 😃😃

Part 1

Ruhi and raman were sitting on the chair outside the operation theatre . Raman came to know that ruhi mother slip from stairs and was badly hurt on her head and many other wounds . Raman was sitting their with ruhi on his lap when he hears growling sound . He looks at ruhi while ruhi looks at him innocently.

Raman - baby are you hungry .

Ruhi nodded in yes - but I don't have money .

Raman picking her up - but I have na

They both enter the canteen and raman stood in front of different kinds of refreshments . Ruhi pointed towards a simple sandwich . Raman ordered sandwiches and juice for her. Raman make her sit on the chair and puts the plate in front of her and he himself sits on the chair next to her.
Sandwich was so big she was not able to eat it so she started drinking juice . Raman take the sandwich and broke it into small pieces with his hand . Ruhi puts her hand on her little forehead and gigges - yeh toh sandwich ka murder ho gya . Dekho fillings are coming out.

Flashback

Raman what are you doing . At least use a knife . See what you have done murder dar diya sandwich ka . See everything will come out .

Present

He was looking at ruhi with a tint of sadness but was smiling at her antics. Picking her up he make her sit on his lap and starting feeding her . She was eating and in between make raman to also eat two three bites .

Raman - ok last bite

Ruhi nodded in no and gulped the whole can of juice and then suddenly she looked at a small girl of her age crying and her father was consoling him as her mother was very serious .seeing both of them she becomes sad and her eyes filled with tears . Raman notices all this and suddenly he hear a whisper of ruhi - will mamma also leave me like papa . This sentence shook him from inside .
Raman cupping her face - arey no baba mamma will be fine . Super fine after her treatment . Then ruhi and mamma will be happy happy .

Ruhi innocently - sachhi

Raman nodded in yes and in return ruhi gives him her 100 walt smile .

Raman (st)
I know matarani who have not given what I have asked for . But please don't snatch her mother from her please don't do this to this innocent soul .

His trance was broken by when ruhi shook him .

Ruhi - mamma

Raman - hmm her treatment is going na so she will be fine . Ok tell me what is your mother name .

Ruhi smilingly - ishita

Raman whispers - ishita

Ruhi nodded in yes - han ishita mamma

Flashback

The court declares you both as mr and mrs bhalla . Both hugged each other .

Ruhi - uncle where are you lost

Raman - han nhi nhi say what were you saying .

At the same time a wardboy came to raman and seeing him holding ruhi assuming him as his father he said - sorry sir we can't save your wife .

Raman takes sometime to consume the news and then he looked at innocent face of ruhi who was just looking here and their and was ignorant that God has snatched her mamma from her .

Ruhi to wardboy - uncle mamma . She is fine now

Raman ask the wardboy to go . Raman just kept staring at ruhi and then he senses a hand on his shoulder . He turns to see mihir standing behind him .

Mihir - bhai come on lets go from here . Mummyji is calling you . Its so late now

Raman - pagal hai tu how can I . Just look at her once pointing towards ruhi - how will I leave her alone when she does not know what a cruel game life has played with her. Mihir I think she is all alone . How can I leave her all alone in this hospital .

Mihir - but bhai we don't know her. How can we

Raman - mihir I don't know why this kind of attraction towards her . Just look at her she is so ignorant . She did not have anyone accept her mamma and now she is also no more .

Wardboy came again and asked them to come . Raman picks up ruhi and proceed towards him .

Ruhi - uncle where are we going . Mamma is fine now .
Raman did not replied rather planted a kiss on her forehead and ruhi do the same making raman smile a little.

Raman - why did you do this.

Ruhi - because I do same with mamma she kisses me and I kiss her back .

Flashback

Ishita - raman give me my kiss back .

Raman - ohh hello what is this . You
kissed me because you want to do that .

Ishita - no I kissed you because I want you to kiss me back . So now from whenever I kiss you you have to kiss ne back .

Raman looked at ruhi and then recall how she is similar to ishita and her mother name is also ishita . This halts raman steps and he sits emotionless on chair next to him .

Mihir - what happen bhai

Raman stammering - mihir wo wo meri ishita hai

Ruhi - no wo meri mamma hai .

Mihir - bhai please stop this what if she is ishita just leave ruhi and leave from here .

Raman makes ruhi stand on the ground asking mihir to look at her . He ran toward the ward and gets into the room where ishita was and got relieved to know that she is not his ishita .

Nurse - sir you can take the body in morning as she wants her organs and eyes to be given to the needy .

Raman nodded and left from their . He moves towards mihir and ruhi

Raman smiling - she is not mine ishita she is not mine but ruhi .

He move towards mihir and then hugs him hugging whispers in his ears - she is not my ishita mihir . Your sister is alive

Mihir coming out of the hug - bhai she has left you alone when you need her and you still love her . Just forget about her and think about shagun bhabhi . ishu akka died for me the day she left you when you need her .

Their talk was disturbed by ruhi as she pulled his coat - uncle mamma I want to meet her .

Raman picking her up - no ruhi mamma is sleeping we will meet her tomorrow .

Ruhi - no uncle you don't know she did not sleep without hugging me . She always like ruhi to cuddle . Mamma ko ruhi chahiye jaise ruhi ko mamma chahiye .

Raman - no ruhi

Ruhi - no I will sleep with mamma only . You leave me outside mamma room I will wait outside the room

Raman - but ruhi if someone kidnap you .

Ruhi thinking for some time - but how can I go with you I don't know . Mamma say not to go with strangers .

Mihir - han bhai leave her here only.

Raman - listen when I go to your mamma now she told me take care of her ruhi . You know I promise
Ruhi - mamma ko promise kiya aapne

Raman nodded in yes .

Ruhi - but then how will I come to know that mamma wake up.

Raman - they will call me

Ruhi - then you will take me here quickly na

Raman nodded in yes and so did ruhi .

Mihir - bhai she can leave in her own house na.

Ruhi - but I can't live alone in such a big house.

Raman - no need baby you will stay with me

Without waiting for his reactions he leaves from their .

In bhalla house

All were seated for dinner when raman entered holding ruhi and both were giggling . Ruhi was having many balloons in her hand and was having her hands around raman hands . All were shocked to see raman
laughing whole heartedly . He came and settle down on the sofa asking for water . Neelu their maid bring one glass of water . Raman first makes ruhi drink water and from the same glass drink himself .

Shagun his wife making ruhi away from him sits beside him - eeww raman . jhoota tha wo and who is she

Raman - shagun please . Ruhi

He picks her up and goes towards the dining table asking neelu to give food to them .

Mrs bhalla - puttar who is she

Raman - ma she is ruhi

Ruhi - uncle I know my name . See my name is ruhi and my mother name is ishita .

Listening to ishita name all were shocked and started their question .

Shagun - eeishita

Mrs bhalla - puttar kaisi hai wo aur yeh ishita ki beti matlab usne shaadi kar li ya phr yeh teri
Raman -. Sirf duniya mein ek hi ishita thoda hai and moreover her mother passed away and she doesn't know anything as she lives alone with her mother . So I bring her here for some tim..

As raman was shouting ruhi put spoonful of curd his mouth - shanti beta shanti beta

Listening to that all started to laugh at her except shagun .

Shagun - till when she will live here

Raman - may be forever

Shagun -how can she moreover with what relation

Raman - shagun I know you are my I should have ask you but she will here as ruhi raman kumar bhalla and I am not asking anyone just telling you

Shagun - raman we can have our own

Mihika - aary bhabhi she is so sweet girl what problem did you have with here

Romi - mihika yaar please give me a baby like her

Mrs bhalla giggling - sharam kar romi .

Mr bhalla - chalo chalo khao sab


Everyone was happy with being ruhi around then . Her cute talks were making everyone laugh.

Mihika pulling her cheeks - bhaiya she is soo cute . Look at her adorable dimples .

Ruhi putting her hands on her cheeks - don't look at my dimples . Mamma bolti hai main cute hun nazar lag jayegi . Raman uncle dekhi mamma ke aaj kala tika bhi nhi lagaya .

Mrs bhalla - hayyee raman kinne pyari bachhi hai .
Raman picks a black pen and puts mark behind ruhi ear - lag gaya kala tika

Flashback

Ishita putting black mark behind his ear - raman aapke dimples ko na nazar lag jayegi . Don't show off them they are mine

Ruhi - mamma also do with pen sometime . Mamma I want to go to her

All laughing faces fell hearing mamma from her mouth . All felt bad for her and raman was affected the most .

Romi tickling her - come lets go and have ice cream .

Ruhi looked at raman as if asking permission from him . He blinked his eyes and then ruhi kissed her on his cheeks encircling his hands around his neck .

Ruhi - but

Raman - what ruhi

Ruhi whispers in his ears - I don't have any money.

Raman encircling his arms around her - he have na
Ruhi - mamma said

Raman - that beg , borrow , steal are bad habbits .

Ruhi putting her hand on her mouth - hoo how do you know this .

Raman - shayad saari ishita ek jaisi hoti hai .

Ruhi - matlab

Raman shaking his head in no - nothing you go with him I will take money from your mamma .

Ruhi - mamma will not scold me na
Romi picking her up - aary nahi meri maa she will not say anything .

Ruhi - ruko

Raman - what happen

Ruhi - he will not kidnap me na

Mihika pulling her cheeks - no baba he will not .

Ruhi looking at raman - pakka na

Raman nodded in yes and then both ruhi and romi leave to eat ice cream

Mrs bhalla - raman you eat something .

Raman - aary no ma don't you see ruhi have feed me too . One bite she eats herself the other one she feeds me .

Mihika - bhaiya she is very cute na . She has just filled this house with happiness . For the first time I have seen you laughing .

Mrs bhalla - mihika jab teri behen ishita thi na tab bhi yeh ghar aise hi tha lekin

Shagun - for your kind information she had left you all . Eeshita have only used you people for money and when you were left without anything she left this house . Raman she left you for money . I know I am being rude buy this reality

Mr bhalla - shagun not again . Just go and sleep in your room .

Shagun - raman I am your wife now not eshita

Raman angrily - how many times I have told you not to take her name I hate her .

Shagun - I am waiting for you in the room

In some time romi and ruhi came . Ruhi was eating favourite ice cream . Seeing raman she shifts from romi shoulder to raman . Ruhi makes him eat the ice cream . While eating ice cream she has smugged it fully over her face and hands .

Raman - ruhi you don't know how to eat ice cream

Ruhi giggles - mamma always scold me that I can't eat ice cream.

Raman - ok now go to that aunty she will make you fresh

Ruhi holding him tight - no that aunty is bad

Mihika - I am bad

Ruhi - no not you wo make up dukaan wali aunty

All laughed on her remark and raman kisses her on her cheeks .

Mihika - bhaiya you go ruhi will sleep with me .

Ruhi nodding in no - no I will sleep with uncle .

Mrs bhalla - but puttar shagun

Raman - ok baba first go and fresh up then we will sleep .

Mihika left with ruhi.

Mrs bhalla - raman kya hoga is phul jaisi bacchi ka . Uski toh duniya hi uski mamma thi .

Raman - I don't know ma how will I tell her .

Mr bhalla - how did you find her

Raman - she was sitting outside icu crying for her mother. I don't know how I get attracted towards her . You know maine ishita ko apne dil mein dafna diya tha . Lekin isne ishita ko phr zinda kar diya maa . Iski har baat mein ishita jhalaktii.

Mrs bhalla - wohi pagalpan , wohi masumiyat . Kyu ishita ne wo sab

Raman sternly - maa shagun is right she was a gold digger but unknowingly she has given me the most beautiful moments of my life. Wiping the lone tear - ok leave I don't want to talk about her .

Ruhi came out wearing a new dress with her pony hanging in air .

Raman picking her up - aww baby is looking so cute .

Ruhi - main toh cute hi hun . Mamma always said that I am cutest like my papa is.

Mihir came back from the hospital and was constantly looking at ruhi.

Raman - mihir when we have to go to hospital .

Mihir - morning .

Ruhi - yeh yeh yeh yeh we will meet mamma tomorrow .

All looked her happy face and then at each other .

Mrs bhalla - ruhi you stay with us for some days .

Ruhi nodding in no - mamma will miss me na and I also can't live without mamma .

Raman - no you live for some days with raman uncle .

Ruhi nodding in no and sobbing - no no no ruhi and mamma can't live without each other . I want to go to mamma

Raman wiping her tears - ok ok don't cry we will go tomorrow to mamma .

Ruhi pinching her neck - pakka promise na

Raman nodded in yes .

Ruhi turning to mihir - mamma must be asking for me na .

Mihir nodded in yes with teary eyes .

Ruhi wiping his tears - ohh foo I know mamma must have scold you na as you were saying to leave her rooh alone . Haina

Mihir nodded in yes and hold his ears - sorry

Ruhi - don't cry I will tell mamma that you are good uncle and pointing towards raman - and he is the best.

Mihir - can I get a hug

Ruhi looked at raman for approval . He blinks his eyes and she hugs Mihir.

Mrs bhalla - aary raman see kaise har baat ki permission leti hai jaise ishit..

Raman - maa not a word . So ruhi should we sleep now .

Ruhi nodded in yes and he takes ruhi to his room .

Mrs bhalla - kya jo gya hai mere bete ko itna pyaar karta hai ishita se lekin dikhata aise hai jaise ki usse nafrat karta ho . Hey mata rani kya bigada tha mere puttar ne tera . Kyu ishita kyu dhoka diya tune raman ko .

Mihika - mummy ji leave all this and sleep . Mihir you also stay here only .

Romi - yes mihir just go into your room and sleep
In raman room

Their was a king size round bed and a simple couch . The walls were painted black and whole room was of black and white contrast . Just like his life has lost all the colour the same way the room was all dark . Shagun come out from the washroom .

Shagun - raman what is she doing here .

Raman - shagun please I don't want any discussion now on this topic . She will sleep here .

Shagun - but raman

Raman - shagun please I want to sleep now I am very tired. You sleep you will not be distributed and ya sorry for what happen downstairs , I misbehaved .
Shagun smilingly - it's ok raman . Let ruhi sleep in this room I am going to study I will be late . Both smiled at each other meekly while sleepy ruhi was hugging raman with her head on his chest . He puts her in the middle of the bed and leaves to fresh n up . After good five minute when he came back he found ruhi sobbing hugging her knees .

Raman putting his hand over her head - ruhi baccha what happen

Ruhi looking into his eyes - why you left me alone in this dark room .

Raman hugging her close to his heart - I haven't baba its just that I have gone to change . Nothing else . Now I will not go .

Ruhi nodded in yes and snuggling closer to him she sleep again and this time with small snores making raman smile . Raman make ruhi lay down again but now she was holding his shirt tightly making raman also to lay beside him . He was constantly looking at ruhi and patting her head . Ruhi takes a turn and leave his finger but puts her leg on his stomach and her small head on his chest just snuggling into him . Raman also hugged her tight and both drifted into sleep .

Here is the first part ...
So what do you think where is ishita ???
Guess everyone !!!
Waiting for reviews and likes !!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
unres
superb starting diii
bhot emo update tha diii 😭
i was having doubt on raru relation
now it is completely clear ru is daughter of raman
mihir rude behaviour but bad mein achcha tha
ishu is dead no way i think ishi ko pta chal gya raman h yhan so may be she herself gone away but ru chod kr kaise ja skti h ishu??
raman still luvs ishu so much
raman kitna dar gya tha
shagun itni sudhi ni lg ri mujhe jitni wo bn ri h
ru ne shi bola makeup ki dukan
ru raman ko hug krk so gyi my babu
i luv all raru scenes diii ek dum perfect
i m scares for ru wen she will come to know about her mumma kya haal hoga ru ka

update soon di
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Hey dear,
Amazing update.
Gripping story line, must say.

I sort of know what suspense you are trying to build as I was writing on somewhat similar plot months back. 😆

Update was pretty long.
Continue as per your convenience.

love
- Harshada
Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Anisha! Who is the one who died in the hospital? Undoubtedly Ruhi is Ishra's daughter. Where is the real Ishita? Suspense zyada ho gaya. Please update soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awsm update..
Ruhi's mom must b raman's ishita..right?
Raman saw someone else..she passed away
Raman took ruhi to home..she is so cute..
She reminds of ishita to raman
Shagun is so irritating...
Ishita left raman ??gold digger?? Suspense
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
This is soo emotional yaar y did ishita leave Raman?? And Ruhi's mom is dead?? Or there was a confusion?? And Ruhi ki maa ka naam bhi ishita hein??? And all traits of Raman's ishita and Ruhi are same Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hein ishita ki jaane ki peeche Shagun hein?? Dat she blackmailed ishita to leave Raman and she herself married Raman after dat?? Jaldi update karo ani and I want to see Ruhi's mom and Raman's reaction after dat

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