Ishra ss - TU MERA SAFAR AAKHRI teaser pg 66 ( no pms send )

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anisha960

@anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

<font color="#ff9933" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hiee everyone ... I am here again with another story . Though I have this concept lingering in my mind from long time but was not posting it . I want to complete the pending ones first . But harshada wants her staying gift from me so the prologue is posted below !!! This is for you harshada !!!</font>

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue

A little cute girl with chubby cheeks and with cute dimples adoring them , having a doe shaped eyes was sitting outside one room in the hospital on the floor hugging her knees and crying . The owner who came for some inauguration of new ward looks at her and his heart pain seeing that girl crying . Unconsciously he moves towards that girl , sitting on his knees puts his hand on her shoulder . Girl looks at the man with big big tears in her eyes .He picks up the girl and sits on the chair .

Man wiping her tears - hie baby why are you crying

That girl points towards the icu and whispers mamma

Understanding that her mother must be in icu but was shocked to see that no one was with her .

Man - where is your papa baby or any family member

Girl looking into his eyes - papa . I don't have papa . Only mamma and ruhi alone alone .

Doctor came out of icu and moves towards them .

Doctor - beta have you call your papa

Ruhi - mamma and she runs towards icu

Doctor pointing towards the man - sir you know them actually her mother is very critical and their is no one to sign the form and also the hospital charges .

Man holding doctor collar - are you mad . Have you look at that small girl how will she bring money .

Doctor - but sir aap

Man - I am raman kumar bhalla naam toh suna hi hoga . Just start her treatment I will fulfill all the

formalities .

Doctor - sir sir I am so sorry

Raman handing him his card - use this and I will handle you later . I will not tolerate this behaviour in my hospital. Just make sure nothing happens to that lady .

Doctor leaves from their and raman started to find ruhi . Ruhi standing outside icu and was jumping to have the glimpse of her mother through the small mirror on the door and was saying mamma mamma . Raman eyes filled seeing the condition of ruhi and he moves towards her picking her up he hugs her close to his heart .

Ruhi coming out of the hug - leave me don't kidnap me and she bites on his hand .

Raman - aaahhh leave I am not kidnapping you .

Ruhi into his eyes - you will not kidnap me . Pakka na

Raman caressing her cheeks - no baba I will not .

Ruhi looking at his red hand kissing on it - sorry I think you are kidnapping me .

Raman laughs at her cute antics and kissing her on her cheeks . Ruhi puts her finger on his cheek and then on her cheeks and giggles - same same dimple

Raman again laughed at her cute antics .

Raman best friend mihir was standing away from them - aaj kitne saalo ke baad bhai ke chehre wo hansi wo khushi dekhi hai .

So here it is ...

Continuation of it will depend on reviews !!!!

Do like and comment if you want to read further !!!

PART 1

PART 2

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Anisha, First of all thank you so much for this gift
Its amazing.
From prologue itself, I can visualise where this story is gonna lead.
I really like the way you describe kids in your story...the previous one which I have read, in that also, what I love the most was your way of describing kids in your fic.
I am waiting for updates (im)patiently.

Love
- Harshada

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lonelyyyy

@lonelyyyy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

CONGRATULATIONS Diii

thanx harshada dii for asking a new story 😉

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh wow Anisha! I wasnt expecting this 😆 😳

I just woke up from a much needed sleep [ having headache ] and just took phone and see what I got ... Thank you Anisha.

And yes I am first