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@PremPBSB

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Beautiful update...ishita leave the house make raman reliase the mistake he done 7 year ago...feel sad for ishita.Thank u for pm & update

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Pari

@pammi108

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

hey no continue please..

i agree with ishus decision

kash show mein bhi kuch aise hi dika de te..

but nahi in show tho, ishita should forgive everyone without even asking sorry, just because she cant deliver baby..i really hate the fact that raman not even asked proper sorry with her..didnt try to manofy her..

But you continue this

show how raman & ruhi goes to australia& will manofy ishu to come back

dont give sad end please:(

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hi Zoha,

You are an amazing writer.

This Ishita was bang on. I really liked the line you Ishita is dead seven years back because it is kind of true no one can forget those words

I am wondering how Raman is going to convince her

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I read this bc I thought it would be light-hearted bc I can't handle emotional stuff atm

But well written! I think how you ended it is perfect bc some things may not be meant to have a happy ending & this gives that!

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ishra_JD_club

@ishra_JD_club

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Oye rh ki si

One one thing after reading thid 👏

Beautifuly written as alwz

U depict ishita 's whch she suffered in tgese 7 yrs ws awesom..

Wht raman's venom words did to her..

That line made me emotional 😭
"WOH ISHITA USI DIN MAAR GYI THI...JIS DIN APNE USE BSNJH MANHOOS KAHA AUR USKI MAMTA PE UNGLI KI"

Adiru hugs her ishima 😳

First part with pihu ws amazing...

And what i linke is thullus gvn by adi 🤣
HUMESHA APNE BARE MEIN HI SOCHTI HO 🤣

Taking dreams 🤣
Adi burst hee buble 🤣

I wish this thing tk happen in show...

Eagerly waiting fir next part

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

very nice emotional outburst by Ishita..

You have made those words perfectly Zoha

Raman guilty was apt to situation..i can visualize it..

Thanks for such an os..waiting for next

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Bhuvana

@manishwari2014

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Zoha! I wanted this to happen in the show which never happened and will never happen. I loved it.

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Priyag28

@Priyag28

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

30 r over and ishita decided to leave the house. Ishita outburst is just awesome. Shagun is feeling happy when ishita is leaving the house . .
Plz update his words and her breakdown. I like that story very much

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awsm update zoha..
I shud hv happened in the show .
The much needed confrontation..
Ishita's dlg bang on..
Raman hugged her...shagun..🤣
Adi gave BKT to shagun..🤣
Ishita leaving..raman guilty..
Bt u hv to continue this pretty plzz.
One update from raman's pov..his pain and how he is gonna stop ishita from going away...then their milan...pleeejjj 😭
Loved it!!