ISHRA OS || JUST 30 DAYS || Part 2 At Page 6 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

Oye rh ki si

One one thing after reading thid 👏

Beautifuly written as alwz

U depict ishita 's whch she suffered in tgese 7 yrs ws awesom..

Wht raman's venom words did to her..

That line made me emotional 😭
"WOH ISHITA USI DIN MAAR GYI THI...JIS DIN APNE USE BSNJH MANHOOS KAHA AUR USKI MAMTA PE UNGLI KI"

Adiru hugs her ishima 😳

First part with pihu ws amazing...

And what i linke is thullus gvn by adi 🤣
HUMESHA APNE BARE MEIN HI SOCHTI HO 🤣

Taking dreams 🤣
Adi burst hee buble 🤣

I wish this thing tk happen in show...

Eagerly waiting fir next part

Originally posted by: -K.13-

I read this bc I thought it would be light-hearted bc I can't handle emotional stuff atm

But well written! I think how you ended it is perfect bc some things may not be meant to have a happy ending & this gives that!

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Zoha,

You are an amazing writer.

This Ishita was bang on. I really liked the line you Ishita is dead seven years back because it is kind of true no one can forget those words

I am wondering how Raman is going to convince her

Originally posted by: fSharm

Awesome...
Well written..

Stalking again😆

Beautiful Zoha! This is what we wanted in the show right. Loved it.

Awesome. Confrontation is beautifuly written

Osm zoha just d luvd part two wish they had shown this in d show Karan & DT wud h e nailed it & it wud HVE been a treat to d viewers.. Kudos to u...👏

Wonderful zoha loved d way Raman blasted Shagun and vuska face dekhne layak tha and also every word said by Raman to ishita it was jst awesome loved it totally