New FS -Yeh Kaisi Jagah...last part pg 16

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Divan-holic
nice story

thankss😊

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: akriti154
Superb update shivangi
luvd it
raman's surprise
was beautiful den d confession
n at last ishra became one
can we get an epilogue
plzz
will wait
thnxx 4 pm

thanks akriti😊

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Part 2
A lovely update!!!
Raman is so caring and loving!!
He brings tea for Ishita in bed and makes her favourite punjabi breakfast - aaawww so sweet!!!
He understands her so well when he says to her that they will only go out as and when she is ready and in the meantime plans all different activities for them to do!!!

She has another nightmare and he takes her in a tight hug and makes her feel safe!!
But as the days continue she starts feeling more secure and happier!!

I loved the conversation she had with Vandu and she realises how much he had done for her and she starts taking slow steps towards him !!!

Looking forward to the next update soon please and also so sorry for late comment - have been busy with work unfortunately!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!

thanks alot 4 reading...have updated all parts do read and tell me ur views 😊

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Jinan_R
lovely update...
Their confession was ☺️
And then madam ko thand lage rahi and puttar ki G mode turned on but he quickly changed his words😉
Then puttar wanted to extend their trip... and the way he was saying... u know... bed pe... maybe shower main bhi...☺️
He expected biwi to be all sharmili but she turned bold☺️
She is ready for it...😳
Loved it.❤️

thanksss jinan😳😳

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: DipaliG
Beautiful ending
It was wonderful story and very nicely written
Loved the confession and the way he had planned everything
Superb...loved it very much

thanks yaar😊

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Fantastic Updates
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM

thanks 4 reading😊

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nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Part 3

A brilliant update!!

Ishita finally getting rid of her fears and getting back to her old self and Raman's tension now disappears and he is very happy and so is Ishita!!

Ishra go out exploring with Raman being the tour guide!!😆

She asks if she can sleep in his arms - and he is worried but she said "bas aise hi" and he said he would love his JKR being romantic!!!😆

Then he starts planning a lovely surprise!!!

Looking forward to next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!!

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sririt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Wonderful part

Such a lovely confession

Extended trip by 4 days😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Read all of this in one go & really enjoyed it, Shivangi! Loved your take on what could've been an amazing track on the show. Perfect balance of realistic, romantic, and sweet!