New FS -Yeh Kaisi Jagah...last part pg 16

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Hey people its been a long while since i wrote something new on this forum and although my story Bonded by the baby remains to be updated 😆😆..here i am beginning wid something i penned down a while ago and posting it now coz i feel the need to keep myself away from the drama which might happen in upcoming track of the show. 😉

this is not related to current storyline of yhm and also the scenario i am writing abt never happened in YHM though i wanted something like this to happen..😳😳.as it is a continuation from one of the incidents which happened on show but completely different from what was shown further on the show😉 ...this is The Ashok Bachelor party sequence where ishita was molested😲😲...yaa u all must be thinking what craziness 😆😆this is and how mad i am but cud nt help it sorry.😉😉

so while cvs chose to handle it lightly like a passing cloud I thought of something entirely different as an outcome of that serious incident.

it can be Four shot or Five shot and i will be posting it frequently coz i have it written on my lappy completely.😉😛

here goes the first part...do tell how u find this madness of mine.

Yeh Kaisi Jagah

Part 1

Life had been a smooth sailing for ishita and Raman these past days and wid the impending marriage of ashok and shagun , everything which remained wud also fall into place itself as shagun wud move on in her new life and wud stop interfering in their life . raman was especially as peace thinking that shagun will get married and stay away from his daughter and family but all this changed the day ishita decided to go to shagun's cocktail party as shagun had invited her very cordially and even mihika was involved .

Raman was not really keen on the idea as he knew shagun way too much and did not wanted ishita to get hurt in any way but when ishita convinced him , he also reluctantly agreed. He was dumbstruck seeing her in a modern yet traditional attire and cud not keep his eyes off her. He prayed and hoped that she changed her mind and end up spending the evening wid him only but that was not meant to be.

He dropped her off at the designated place and while driving back home, stopped at a flowe vendor and bought a small bouquet of red roses as he wished to confess his feelings of love to his wife that night. he felt it was perfect time for new start of their relation and he never wanted to go back in their relation any longer.

But all his plans got spoilt the moment he received a phone call from mihika who asked her where ishita is and then told him that he had dropped her at the wrong place where ashok's bachelor party was going on. This much was necessary for raman to cut the call , throw his phone on side seat and drive like a maniac to the wretched place where he had dropped his wife a while ago. He wished and prayed fervently that no evil had befallen ishita and hoped that she is fine till now although it was not really that easy he knew keeping in mind the dirty plan of ashok and his chamchas.

He cursed himself, the traffic, fellow drivers and everything he cud and realized why he was feeling uneasy since the time he had dropped ishita at that place. He had just chided himself and drove away but now he damned himself and wished that he had escorted her inside. Although it was just 15 minutes but those seemed like centuries to raman and as he reached there, he slammed the door of his car and ran as fast as he cud to save his wife. What he saw there stunned him as he found ishita's friend mani beating a guy up who had misbehaved wid ishita and his eyes scanned for his wife and found her shivering , crying and scared standing in the corner not knowing what to do.

He went to his wife who was relieved to see him and side hugged her to calm her for the moment.😭 He then smashed the guy who had misbehaved wid ishita and cud not control his anger as he went up to ashok and gave tight blows to ashok and param too and did not stop until mani pulled him apart telling him to go to ishita.

He went to ishita and supported her to take her back to the car but before she cud reach the car, she started panicking saying that she feels dirty and disgusted and wid much difficulty he made her sit down on a bench and got water for her. He made her take few sips and told her to look into his eyes and that's when she broke down completely and started crying hysterically.

He was stumped as it was the first time he had seen his Jhansi ki rani going so week. He just hugged her trying to calm down her tears in those moments cursed himself for leaving her there without double checking. "if only main uske saath andar tak chala jaata...agar main use yahan aane hi nahi deta...sab meri galti hai...uss shagun aur uss se jude logon se ishita jitna door rehti achcha hota...damn u raman...u cud not even protect ur wife." He said to himself.

After a while when her tears subsided a bit , he took her to car and drove back home in silence. When they reached home he saw she had lost all her energy and before she cud step out of the car, he went to her side and picked her up in his arms. She did not protest but just kept looking into his eyes till he carried her to the house.

He shut everyone in the house and took her directly to their bedroom not giving any explanations to anyone. He told her to change and came out and told everything to the family and asked toshiji to help ishita. romi was furious and wanted to kill ashok at that moment but raman somehow managed to stop him then. As toshiji came out he asked-" maa ishita theek hai na?"

Toshiji was sad too and said-" kahan theek hai puttar andhera karke baithi hai ..kuch bol hi nahi rahi."

Raman went up to her and saw the room in darkness. He switched on their bedside lamp and heard ishita saying-" raman plz light band karo...mujhe roshni achchi nahi lag rahi plzz just close it."

He knew she was punishing herself and he sat beside her on the bed and keeping a hand on her shoulder started saying-" ishita..suno.."

She did not let him complete as she started crying and blabbering-"raman plz plz jao yahan se chod do Mujhe...dnt touch me I am dirty...unn logon ne Mujhe...I feel disgusted raman...door raho mujhse raman I am ruined...I am completely ruined..."

he cud not take it anymore and pulling her close holding her tightly said-" ishita ishita...bas bohot ho gaya meri taraf dekho...kuch nahi hua hai tumhe...tum koi gandi nahi hui ho...they were dirty ishita..woh log gande hain...tum bilkul theek ho ishita...aisi stupid baatein sochna bhi mat..u are my wife. My ishita who is pure and beautiful inside out ...no one can ruin u ever...samjhi now stop crying...rona band karo yaar..i can't see u like this chup bilkul chup..."

Saying that he saw her eyes gained some confidence and then she hugged him tightly, her head on his chest and he reciprocated the hug even tightly taking her in his embrace , in strong bear hug. He made her eat some food forcibly and then patted her till she slept and as she refused to leave his hand, he lied beside her and slept taking her in a side hug, her head in the crook of his neck and her breathing matching wid his heartbeats.

Next morning Raman Kumar Bhalla was a man on a mission as he had pledged to get ashok and his men arrested for trying to molest his wife, after all ishita was his wife and no one cud escape free after behaving that way wid RKB's wife. He made aadi confess that he sent wrong address to ishita on parmeet's command and how one of the servant of ashok's house had heard the 3 men discussing abt ishita coming to their party.

Also eye witnesses at the party reported their behavior wid ishita , mani being one of them too and ashok and parmeet were put behind bars immediately and raman made sure there was a non-bail able warrant against them , suraj had managed to escape the clutches somehow but raman cared a hoot for him as he knew prime guilty were ashok and param only.

This news did bring happiness and relief in bhalla household but Raman cud not be happy as he had not got the happy reaction he had expected from ishita. She smiled and thanked him for doing this for her and moved on to do her work. Raman realized how hard it was for her to forget the memories of past night and he chided himself for believing that she wud be very happy abt the arrest of the men.

The days followed by but raman cud not see ishita coming back to her normal , cheerful and smiling self. To everybody she showed as if she is completely normal and over that incident but raman cud see her face had lost the glow and her smile had faded somewhere too. She smiled and talked forcefully for ruhi and others but was not genuinely happy from inside. She slogged hard at clinic and home so that by the time she comes to sleep, she is so tired that none of the past memories haunt her .

raman had seen all of this and realized this cud not go on, he sat thinking-"ishita ko waapis Jhansi ki rani mode mein laana hoga warna main paagal ho jaunga..soch raman kuch soch" and then an idea hit him and he made several calls and made some arrangements. He told mihir abt his plan who explained it well to the entire family who urged raman to go on wid it as soon as he can.

As he came home that night, he knew he had to tell her abt his plan and decided to resort to his dominating tone as he knew otherwise she wud not agree, he told her -"ishita kal hum bahar jaa rahe hain...kuch din ki trip par..packing kar lena...early morning by car nikalna hai..."

Ishita was confused and ofcourse did not wanted to go anywhere but knew he wud not give in so she asked-" kaisa trip raman? Kahan jaa rahe hain hum? Kaun kaun jaa raha hai..?"

He maintained his reserved tone and said-" ooty jaa rahe hain hum dono..aur koi nahi ...kuch kaam hai isliye yeh trip..be ready by 7 in the morning." Saying that he left leaving her in thoughts but as she knew she cud do nothing abt it , she reluctantly packed her stuff keeping in mind the climate etc of the place and raman did a happy dance inside his heart as he saw their belongings neatly packed and kept along the wardrobe , ready for the morning. He said-" good night ishita..so jao coz we need to leave early."

She replied-"hmm good night Raman...aap bhi so jao."

And they slept all set to embark on the journey of their lives. Morning came faster than expected and soon both raman and ishita were on their way to ooty after waving good byes to the family and telling ruhi to take care of herself. Silence prevailed in the car as the driver drove on and only light music cud be heard. As they started nearing the place , hilly area started and as expected it started getting chillier.

Soon enough ishita dozed off to sleep and her head slumped on to raman's shoulder and she started cuddling him from the side too as she felt cold. Raman smiled looking at her innocent face and warmed her up by taking off his own blazer and wrapping it around her and then taking her In a comfy side hug. He patted her like a baby and cud not help how cute she looked sleeping like that free of worries and full of peace. He knew she needed some peace and love and that was the reason he had brought her there.

When they reached ooty, he woke her up softly and she got a little embarrassed seeing the position they were in till he said-"its ok ishita hum husband wife hain...kuch galat nahi kiya hai humne ok? No need to be so shy and embarrassed." And she nodded saying-" thanks."

When they stepped out of the car ishita was spellbound seeing the beauty of the place. It looked like a beautiful huge resort in an isolated corner of ooty wid complete peace and tranquility. As they moved in , she saw place was empty apart from them and asked raman-" yahan itni shaanti kyun hai? Koi aur bhi nahi hai? Hamara room kahan hai?"

He smiled and answered-" ishita yahan koi bhi aur nahi hai...sirf main aur tum coz its our place for the next few days and yahan jitney bhi rooms hain hamare hain...samjhi?"

She was shocked and raman chuckled seeing her child like expressions. They moved to the master bedroom and settled down their luggages. They freshened up and when raman came out of the washroom and saw ishita looking at bed and around the room , he understood what she was thinking and moved towards her smiling and said-" I know ki thodi problem hai becoz there's no couch here but then what to do? I was hoping that we have that much trust ki we can share a bed right? Phir bhi if u are not comfortable toh tell me I will sleep outside in the hall ..u dnt need to worry ..."

Ishita just felt bad he was asking her like that and said-" nahi nahi its completely fine by me ...hum bed share kar sakte hain, I am sorry aapko aisa laga It was just out of habbit..."

He saw her fumbling and said-" arre no stress yaar...chodo ab lets sleep. Its been a long journey."

As they were settling down on the bed ishita asked-" raman aapko kya kaam hai yahan par? I mean aapne bataya nahi yahan aane se pehle?"

Raman cud sense that hesitance and unsurity in her voice and he decided to lighten up the mood saying-" kaam...ummm bohot sara kaam hai yaar , nayi jagah hai yahan settle hona hai theek se, phir poori jagah ghoomni hai, shopping karni hai...kitni badi badi list di hain apni demands ki sabne pata hai? Aur ..."

Ishita understood his reason of bringing her there and she felt nice. She sad in low tone-" thank u raman main jaanti hun aap yahan kyun aaye par really aapko itna kuch nahi karna chahiye tha..i wud have been fine in some days...main..."

Raman cud see her fumbling for words and knew she felt guiltridden as he had left his work to be wid her. He got up and went towards her to the other side of the bed and kneeled down infront of her on the floor and taking her hands, made her look into his eyes as he said-" ishita..."

Raman-" look at me plzz ishita meri taraf dekho..." she slowly raised up her eyes to look into his.

Raman-" tumhein iski zaroorat thi ishita...tum maano ya mat mano...aur haan tumse kisne kaha ki yahan aane mein sirf tumhara faayda hai?"

She was confused and asked him-" toh phir raman?"

Raman smiled naughtily and said-" main bohot selfish insaan hun ishita..tumhein yahan lane mein mera bhi selfish motive hai..."

Ishita-"aapka kya motive ho sakta hai? Aap sirf aise hi keh rahe ho na?"

Raman-" nahin yaar I swear...I also mean to benefit from this trip par kaise who main tumhe sahi waqt aane par bataunga...so wait and watch. Samjhi?"

Ishita cud just nod and say-" ok main wait karungi.."

Raman-"hmm that's like a good girl..ab so jao...subah ek naya din hoga ishita."

Ishita looked into his eyes and cud see care for herself and she felt touched. She said-" hmm ok good night."

He moved to his side of the bed and lied down as they turned off the lamps. He also wished her-" good night ishita...sleep well."

Later in night raman found ishita blabbering, shivering and crying in sleep and he knew she was having nightmares since that incident. He as always pulled her into his arms and took her in a bone crushing hug and patted her like a baby till he cud feel her peaceful breathing aside his heartbeats. He wiped her tears and promised saying-" aaj yeh last time hai ishita ki tum itni pareshaan ho rahi ho...I promise kal se aisa kuch nahi hoga. I won't let u cry from now on..."

He was adamant as he had promised that not only to her but to himself too. The next morning was surely going to bring new beginning in their life.

Precap - raman starts his mission.

do tell me if i shld continue or just scrape it plzz😕

index

part 2 pg 7

part 3 pg 12

last part pg 16

waiting waiting waiting😉

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Shivangi






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Posted: 8 years ago
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nyc take to a track unexplored in yhm...

wana kwn wat raman does to brng back his jhansi ki rani..

update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its awsm shivangi..
Loved raman how he get those culprits arrested n took ishita to ooty ..
Wud love to read ur take on it..
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb idea shivangi
let's see wht raman does for her
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice take Shivangi agree they didn't go deep showing ishita's feelings in d show am glad u posted ur take on it am really looking forward ki how puttar is gng to bring his jkr back his trip to Ooty idea is jst awesome she def needs d change of place and some lone time to come back to her own self
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The track ended ubruptly as Mihika's fiasco started. Nice angle Shivangi. Pl continue.
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Superb
Update Soon
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it's beautiful
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amezng very interesting and nice continu plz.
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Awesome update... raman try bring back his jkr .. plz plz update soon

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